@magicalstories0611
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Light replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 10 months ago
@mineralizedwritings @theloonyone @loopylin
Is her name Evelyn or Everly? I think you’ve typed both😅.
Matthew
“Oh…I’m not s-sure.” I stuttered.
“Hmmm.” Kaine looked up at the castle. Laughed, “Intimidating isn’t it? I’m going. I need to find Everly.” And with that, he walked off.
I looked at Carter. “Are you ready?” He asked, eye brows raised.…[Read more] -
Light replied to the topic Introducing a Fellow Writer in the forum Start HERE 3 years, 10 months ago
Awww thank you!! Yeah!! That’s one reason I chose this for my username. To spread light and remind others that “The light will always prevail.” 😊
That’s cool!! Yep, I Love mine too ❤️ ❤️. Now, I don’t always like them, but I will never stop loving them.
Thank you!! I thought of questions I would want to be asked. Ooh, great answers!!…[Read more]
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Light replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 10 months ago
@mineralizedwritings
Ooh I like Evelyn already!! Can’t wait for Lyla to meet her!! -
Light replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 10 months ago
Lyla
Cold. It was cold. I opened my eyes and slowly looked around. I was in a cold, bland, room with stone walls. Stone? I stood up and rubbed my arms. Then he walked over to the wall and felt the cool, rough, stone.
Where in the world am I? And where’s Matthew?!
“Well, I’m not accomplishing anything by staying in this room,” I said aloud.
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Light replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 10 months ago
Here’s Lyla!!

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Loopy replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 10 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @keilah-h sorry Kad doesn’t really have anything to do right now. I’m trying to hurry this up but I’m not sure how it should end
Dante
“Dante…I think we need a little bit more proof than that…
I don’t exactly know if I can trust you anymore.”
Dante looked up and met Steve’s eyes.
Trust.
He had heard those words many times…[Read more]
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Light replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 10 months ago
@mineralizedwritings @theloonyone @loopylin
I forgot to do Lyla’s bio too 🤦🏻♀️😂.
Lyla is 13 years old, and Matthew’s twin sister. She is actually only 8 minutes older than Matthew😂. She has light brown hair with a touch of blonde. And she has blue eyes. She’s a lot feistier than Matt. In fact, she usually protects him from the common bulli…[Read more]
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Loopy replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 10 months ago
@lightoverdarkness6 @theloonyone @mineralizedwritings
Time to introduce the girls! We should probably add character descriptions for them.Beth, Simon’s older sister, is 17 and has shoulder length dark brown hair. She is very practical and introverted. Carmen is Carter’s sister and is about the same age as him. She is very skinny and has wavy str…[Read more]
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Light replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 10 months ago
@loopylin @theloonyone @mineralizedwritings
That is such a cool idea!! Let’s totally do that! And Loopy, you captured Matthew’s personality perfectly👍😊!
Matthew
After Kaine climbed over the wall, we found the stairs he had spoken of and met back up with him, Carter turned to me, his eyes sparkling with mischief.
“Hey, Matt. I’ll race you to t…[Read more] -
Loopy replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 10 months ago
@godlyfantsy12 Yay! I’m so glad you like it! I definitely want to come up with some more weird rooms in the castle
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Light replied to the topic Introducing a Fellow Writer in the forum Start HERE 3 years, 10 months ago
Hi!! Welcome to KP, Felicity! I’m pretty new to the forum too! Cool! I write in Contemporary Fiction, but if I did write Fantasy, I’d steer clear from magic too. Your WIP sounds cool! SEVEN SIBLINGS?!?!? Wow!! I have three😂.
Now for some ask the newbie questions!!1. If you could meet your 3 favorite characters from a book/favorite act…[Read more]
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Loopy replied to the topic Introducing a Fellow Writer in the forum Start HERE 3 years, 10 months ago
@felicity Uh, hi! Welcome to kingdom pen! You seem to be currently busy chasing a snake around, but I’m gonna introduce myself anyway. 😆
I’m Loopy. I like writing mostly fantasy and sci-fi, and I’m planning on a lot of my stories to end up being animated series or at least comics.
That’s really cool that your WIP is about Ukraine! Do you know…[Read more]
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Loopy replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 10 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @mineralizedwritings @keilah-h @theloonyone @godlyfantasy12 @lightoverdarkness6 @koshka @anyoneelseonhere
I just had a somewhat creepy idea for a random hall somewhere in the castle that is lined with renaissance portrait paintings of every character that has ever been in the castle. Every time a character joins, their painting…[Read more]
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Loopy replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 10 months ago
@mineralizedwritings @lightoverdarkness6 @theloonyone
Simon
“I’ll meet you guys on the other side.”
Kaine dropped out of sight on the other side of the wall.
The rest of the group followed his instructions, found the stairs, and got to the other side. Once they had met up again with Kaine, Carter turned to Matthew, a spark of mischief in his e…[Read more]
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Light replied to the topic So…my draft has finally started…and I'd like some thoughts so far! 😀 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 10 months ago
Oh my gosh, you are just so sweet!!! <3 <3
Yes :)!
You are so welcome!!!
YES!!! I LOVE IT!!!
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Light replied to the topic Book Ideas!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 10 months ago
Yeah! Oh cool!
I haven’t read that one before. I’ll have to look it up ;).
Oh, okay! That’s good. 🙂
Are you doing anything for Thanksgiving? We’re going to our aunt and uncle’s house.
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Light replied to the topic Book Ideas!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 10 months ago
Yes! I know, right?! XDXD
My dad is really good at math too!! My dad explains it to me, and then I pretend to understand, then immediately go to my mom to explain it. XD. My mom is really good at explaining math, and my dad is good at just math. So they make a good team to teach me😂.
Yeah, I’ve never even read a story about H…[Read more]
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Light replied to the topic Hey everyone!! in the forum Start HERE 3 years, 10 months ago
I’m so sorry I’m just now responding! We had a lot of house work to do today😅.
Yes❤️❤️!!
Oooh, yes!!! I read him some the other day in the Fantasy School AU, other than being a little confused with all the characters, his favorite characters so far are: Wolfgang, Paxton, Leo, and Riker! Yesss, girl, I think Leo may be my favo…[Read more]
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Loopy replied to the topic Want me to draw your character? in the forum Art 3 years, 10 months ago
@freedomwriter76 I finished Reuben! I have very little experience drawing guys so it was really helpful practice. I hope you like him!

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Light replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 10 months ago
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