Liberty

I would love to wake up this topic again. I never participated but I wanted to.

Tagging extra people: @the_lost-journal @ellette-giselle @raxforge @liberty @theshadow @calyhuge

I’ll just give a new short story prompt. And here it is:

Tell the story of a scar.

You can use new settings/characters or use characters from your own WIP, as long as…[Read more]

@hybridlore

Sure sure! I love brainstorming, pls do tag! : D

@liberty

Hi Liberty! Great to meet you!

I’m a young home-educated follower of Jesus Christ. I’m filled with the passion to write God glorifying stories. I also have a huge passion for horses, and dogs. ( I mean, just read this quote: “I am still under the impression that there is no…

[Read more]

@mineralizedwritings

New people: Andrew ( @raxforge ), Kefa ( @the_lost-journal ), Ellette ( @ellette-giselle ), Linus ( @Linus-smallprint ), Shadow ( @theshadow ), Liberty ( @liberty ), Ducktator ( @theducktator )

I’ll let them introduce themselves if they so wish.

@liberty

Oops…I don’t think I ever replied to this…sorry!!! I’ve been super busy lately :/

If I already replied and forgot I did it….oh well….XD

You like algebra!!??? My mind is like, blown. Algebra is not my cup of tea.

Yeah…I love algebra!!! It’s like a puzzle I have to solve, xD

Yes, I really enjoy talking to myself. Well, it’s n…

[Read more]

@liberty

Hey, welcome to KP! This is really late, but I haven’t been on here for a while so I’ll just introduce myself so I can get to know you. I’m theloonyone or just loony. A little bit about me, I’m a Christian, teen homeschooler who likes to write, surprise surprise. I have a lot of different hobbies and am not too great at any of them; w…[Read more]

@liberty

(Sorry for getting back to you so late!! Life has been pretty busy rn.)

Well, a lot is going on concerning family relations. Not ones in my immediate family, but with our other relatives. My grandmother is moving out here soon, so a lot is going to change. There are going to be a lot of opportunities to deny myself and serve and love…

[Read more]

@liberty

No it’s not working. It’s kinda doing the same thing it is for Janessa. 🤔

@liberty

Lol that’s not working for me either! Maybe my computer just doesn’t like the link.

@liberty

Hmm. I tried that, but even with the new tab, it was giving me the same message. It’s a similar message to the one it gives me when the internet disconnects, but I checked and my internet connection is fine right now, so that shouldn’t be the issue.

@liberty

No, it just gives me a message that “this site cannot be reached”. I hit the reload button but it didn’t make a difference.

@liberty

I’m using my laptop.

@liberty

I tried to copy the whole line, but I think it was so long it disappeared off the page and wouldn’t let me get all of it.

@liberty

😊 How’s life been?

@liberty

Hey!! Good to see you again!

Ooh, cool! I’ll try my best to get to it soon. (Maybe be summer break, but hopefully before then. XD)

@liberty

Hey! I’ll try to read it and give you any feedback I may have as soon as I can!! 😄

@liberty

I think if you just copy the link and paste it into the text box it should work. Or if you go to the link button at the top of the text box and paste it there….

I’ve never tried linking a PDF on here, but I’ve done other links.

@whalekeeper

I’ve heard mixed opinions about the first chapter of a book… I used to always be told it needed to start off with action to draw the reader in, but I’ve come to realize the scene needs to be set up well, too. I guess it’s finding the balance between just enough action to hook the reader and a solid foundation of getting to know the…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009 @whalekeeper @esther-c @hybridlore @freed_and_redeemed (I hope I got that right this time lol) @vinagirl @idon’trememberwhoelsewantedtofollowalongonthis @liberty (I think you’re the one who said you like historical fiction, particularly the American Revolution. If I’m wrong and it’s someone else I’m thinking of, you can ignore…[Read more]

@liberty

Um, I don’t think so. I believe I was just pointing out some wording that I felt was a little awkward. My suggestion was a way to word it differently so that it would be smoother to read. As for the describing the forest, you could tap into his emotions a little bit then, but that wasn’t exactly what I was pointing out. I was just sug…[Read more]

@liberty

Alrighty, let’s do this.

I’m not in any way the most amazing writer or editor ever, so I recommend to take my advice with a grain of salt. 😉

Brightening the somewhat pale sky, the golden sun streamed beams of light all about

Ok, the first thing I noticed was the word ‘somewhat.’ In most cases, you can always cut this from narrati…[Read more]