Liberty

@savannah_grace2009 @mineralizedwritings @acancello @grcr @hydridlore

It looks like we only have one female character here thus far, so I believe it is time to announce mine!

Meet Kari Brock, age 16. She’s 5’4″, with delicate features, shoulder-length blond hair, and deep blue eyes. She is quiet and dreamy and values deep, close relationships,…[Read more]

@grcr

yep! Sounds good! So @savannah_grace2009 is this a costume/masquerade party then? We should probably all describe the costumes, unless y’all want to just make it up as we go XD

@savannah_grace2009

Maybe I’ll have to jump in on this! I’ve never done one of these before, but the costume party idea sounds fun!

Ok, maybe it didn’t…

@savannah_grace2009 @grcr @acancello @mineralizedwritings

Alrighty! I’m going to put in a character that I haven’t mentioned a peep about on KP or have written one word in his POV. XD He’s from a WIP that I’m planning to spend a lot of time and effort on.

Ruhan Amir al Roshan
(But because of his culture, everyone ca…[Read more]

Yay, it did it!

Ughhhh it’s deleted my post like three times. It better work this time 🤞

@savannah_grace2009 @grcr @acancello @mineralizedwritings

Alrighty! I’m going to put in a character that I haven’t mentioned a peep about on KP or have written one word in his POV. XD He’s from a WIP that I’m planning to spend a lot of time and effort on.

Ruhan Amir al R…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009 @grcr @acancello @mineralizedwritings

Alrighty! I’m going to put in a character that I haven’t mentioned a peep about on KP or have written one word in his POV. XD He’s from a WIP that I’m planning to spend a lot of time and effort on.

Ruhan Amir al Roshan
(But because of his culture, everyone calls him Amir)[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009
I’ll do it! If I can figure out what character to use XD

@smiley

I love the way the story’s changed! And the characters are awesome!! (Plus, it’s funny because Skylar and Austin have the same faceclaims as my charries, Callista and Everton. XD)

@freedomwriter76

Ok! I haven’t really been RPing much lately anyway. XD I might pull my characters and put them back into the character castle. Idk yet.

@mineralizedwritings

Alright, thanks!!

I love the example. XD 😉

@acancello

Thanks for the tips!!

Those plays sound like so much fun! 😊

@hybridlore

Thanks!!

@koshka

That would be a really fun skit to see. XD

Um… I don’t think so. At least not right now. (I’ve only sort of started…. Ok, I’ve written half a line. 😂)

It’s probably mo…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

Oooh, sounds like fun!! I haven’t been doing a ton of RPing lately, so maybe I’ll hope in and do this one. 🙂

I’ll post my character description this afternoon.

@savannah_grace2009 Joke’s on me, I forgot I put it in the first sentence! But if you aren’t paying attention, it’s easy to miss. It’s vague, and you’d have to assume she was living there since she was born, so I should probably clarify that a little, but it’s there.

“A dull ache filled my heart as I took a last look around the house I had called…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009 No, that’s a good question! I didn’t even realize I missed that, but she’s thirteen here at the beginning of the story.

@savannah_grace2009

I just picked up this book at a yard sale because I remembered you said you loved it, lol! Haven’t read it yet, but I’ll let you know what I think!

@esther-c

Awesome! Scripts are so much fun to write.

I’ve worked on two plays, one of which was a five minute skit for a homeschool end of year promotion and the other…a full length play…maybe will get finished one of these days.

We wrote the skit in a sort of half pantomime where the only character which actually speaks is the narrator (a…[Read more]

@grcr I know several others already commented on this, but I wanted to add one more thing about the descriptions that might help. Given that this is the first chapter of your book, I think it would be helpful to find a way to start it off with more action, or some way to hook the reader. It didn’t pull me in very well, but once I got past the…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009 sure! That sounds cool!

@whalekeeper

It’s definitely a spectrum. I the child who incurred questions from the garage sale lady on whether I was mute or not – I the girl who still struggles to speak loud enough for people to hear, I – 

Am technically an extrovert. XD

Long life to horseradish! May its sparkles inhabit the sunlight forever.