Liberty

@freedomwriter76

If your readers love the characters enough, I think even with a slower plot, the story will still work! But yeah, I see what you mean.

So, you say that you don’t know what’s going to happen… that makes me wonder, is the sequel absolutely necessary? Like, for the character’s arcs, and everything, or was the story really…[Read more]

@light-warrior-pen

Of course!
@janelle-beloved-pig

Aww, those are so sweet!

@freedomwriter76

Awesome XD I’ll definitely be on here.

@fernweh_grace

Hi Kathyrn, welcome to Kingdom Pen!

I’m hybridlore, or Hybrid, a Christian homeschooled teenager, violinist, and writer. I mostly write science fiction or dystopian ideas, and I love Andrew Peterson and instrumental music as well!

That’s awesome! How long have you lived in Africa? I really like geography and learning other…[Read more]

@trailblazer

I don’t think it’s too summary-y, lol. It fits the style so far very well! I would’ve maybe liked to see the scene with Libbie hanging out with Sara, Lillian, and Etta in a non-summary kind of style, but if they’re not major characters, I think this works best. Great job so far, I’m really enjoying it! 😁

@hybridlore @savannah_grace2009

This next section I’m gonna post is one that needs a little more fleshing out as well. It’s short, and you’ll be able to see it feels more like a summary than really telling the story. If you have any ideas of scenarios I could fit in here or things you think should happen with the characters, let me know!

Over…[Read more]

@trailblazer

Looks good! 😁 aw, poor Albert!

@savannah_grace2009 Thanks! I will definitely check that out!

@savannah_grace2009

One thing I like about these scenes is that it gives a little more of a glimpse of Libbie’s relationship with her brother Abe. I feel like he’s not a very well developed character in the story, but I want to find a way to change that.

@freedomwriter76

*Enters the celebration hall bearing raspberry cheesecake*

HUZZZAHH!!!! CONGRATULATIONS!!! May all your characters applaud you!!!

*Rounds of thunderous applause*

*Vulkasin joins in, grinning*

@light-warrior-pen If you’re going for a sweet proposal, and you have your characters well developed, have the guy plan something that would be special to the girl for reasons that only they are aware of, or bring in the location of their first date or something. Idk the context of your story or their relationship, but it’s always more special if…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009 @hybridlore Here, I’ll post you some more.

The first day of school arrived at long last. I pulled out my pinafore to cover the front of my dress, and thought of how long it had been since I’d worn it. My hair was braided neatly in two braids, and I scrubbed my face clean. My shoes no longer fit me, and Mama said we’d hav…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

I’ll be praying too! I hope both y’all’s dads find new jobs soon.

@light-warrior-pen

I wanna say watch proposal videos but search results for that might be a little weird, idk lol. I would say try to make it specific to the characters –if you can, maybe give them an inside joke or something like that, or maybe one of them quotes something the other said earlier, if that makes sense. I love scenes like that 😊

@mineralizedwritings

Praying for you and hoping you heal and get better soon!

@janellebelovedpig

That sounds actually pretty cool, lol. I should probably try that sometime…

I usually write on the back porch, which is sort of like my office, lol. My family comes out there too (especially my sister) but I spend the most time there, especially now that the weather’s cooling down for us. I’m not sure if I’ve noticed a…[Read more]

@smiley

Yess girl I love fall so much! Thanks for the list, maybe I’ll try to actually write one for this month xD

@savannah_grace2009

Thanks! 😁

@savannah_grace2009

I think I’ll let you find out what happens 🙃