Liberty

@scoutfinch180

Also, what is the end goal of your plot? Reuniting the galaxy and reversing what Grathmere did while working with him? I recommend making Grathmere somewhat morally relatable (think Edmund Dantes from The Count of Monte Cristo)

I honestly have never thought about it. I think the most good Grathmere can do is to destroy his allies…[Read more]

Sorry had some trouble andd it posted for some reason. @scoutfinch180 the rest.

After GA, the Wondians did mix some of their blood with aliens from other planets, but there are still

Those of pure Wondian blood. For instance, most the Dwarves are pure since don’t often accept others into their small circles.

For the sake of sci-fi and stories,…[Read more]

@scoutfinch180

OH ok, I read Alin as Aelynn, sounding more like a girl’s name in my head. Also, What Alin says there does sound a little feminine in a way,

XD I’m sorry, but it’s just funny to me, cuz that is how Alin’s name is pronounced! In fact Nahim’s oldest brother, Knihan, had to have the spelling of his named changed because “Nihan” is a g…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

Glad you enjoyed it!

Nar

“A lot. Both my parents are fond of music, and my older brother plays drums when he feels the mood. I like to dance personally, especially duos. Realn-style duos are the prettiest dances you will ever see. Triplets are complicated. Most dances are upbeat and quick, some so much so only the most flexible and…[Read more]

ack! I don’t feel like redoing that rp from before, I’ll just ignore it’s poor quality.

@jonas @freedomwriter76 @savannah_grace2009

Nae

Nae saw Riker’s eye widen, either in fear or surprise. She grasped his hand tighter, hugging her body to his leg. Not out of fear, but for support. After a few seconds, she stepped away from Riker, and planted her feet apart with determination. Looking up at the older man with her innocent blue…[Read more]

@jonas

Ouch. Yeah, I can relate.

@jonas

I think my character Alpha would defeat the current dark lord and become the one darkening just so he knew why it happens! Idk why I’m telling you this, he just popped into my head and told me what he would do XD

Have you found out what darkens the chosen ones?

@whalekeeper

Nar

“It would be a blessing.” She left the last piece out of her translation, Your smile is one. “Officially, I am called a Young Warrioress by my people, some call me an empressling. It may sound odd to you, but to me, ‘miss’ sounds odd too.”

@keilah-h

@whoever-made-up-Wyoh

your ghost is eating my ideas

@savannah_grace2009 Another victim of our Wyoh!

Don’t worry, you’re not alone, she’s been eating my notifs before I see them, eating Freedom’s posts and cursing Sara to spell tags wrong! 😆

She’s been very busy lately.

@scoufinch180

I’m finally replying.

 How did Nahim get here after fainting in the middle of a hostile environment?]

That is revealed later on in the book. While Nahim thought that it was impossible, someone did come into the grasslandsxand found him. Not Mandin though.

    I’m guessing the stone (may I suggest the Opal, heart, or Eye of the…

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@savannah_grace2009

That sounds good, I’m glad you were able to get a clear answer from God! I agree, I think it still definitely works even without the shorter beginning. And even if it does turn some readers away, it’s going to touch the people God wants it to. 🙂

@savannah_grace2009

Yes, but they probably would have called it courting back then. That’s why Libbie was so upset with Etta to start off with, because Etta started seeing Chester without telling her what was going on. And Etta had already known that Libbie had a crush on Chester.

@whalekeeper

Nar

“Nar? I would love to go to the dance with you.” Nar burst in another smile, but before she could answer, he held a finger to his mouth. “But we don’t know each other too well. So I’d also love to buy you some treats before we ride the bus back, and hang out. So you can decide. Is that okay?”

“Yeh! I’d love too! Ih cum len fl…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

Here ya go, while I’m here I might as well give you more.

As the winter thawed into spring, I knew it was time to make things right. I crossed the fields to the Cullivers’ house, and as I approached, I saw Etta’s petite figure working in the garden. She didn’t hear me coming until I was about ten feet away.

“Good day, Et…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

LOLLLL now it’s my turn to mispell your tag

@vinagirl (plz tell me if you don’t want me to tag you every time time I post another scene) @hybridlore @svannah_grace2009

More!!

I still couldn’t bring myself to approach Etta as the harvest season arrived. Out of politeness, I attended the cornshuckings with all the other young people, but it felt like the fun was sucked out of them. Every t…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

Ahhh I want to tell you what I had planned but I don’t want to give spoilersssss!

@savannah_grace2009

About prologues…I’ve never heard that before! Mine is technically a first chapter, so should I just erase the label of “prologue”?? 😂

You do whatever you want, girl, it’s your story. XD

I had actually never heard that before, but it kind of makes sense. I think some writers also use prologues for info-dumping. I’d rather have…[Read more]