Liberty

@trailblazer

@esther

@rae

@jonas

@grcr

@savannah_grace2009

@freed_and_redeemed

@highscribeofaetherium

Sorry, everyone!

Thank you, Trailblazer, for helping me!

Here is the link to read my book:

file:///Users/barrydurmaz/Downloads/Into%20the%20Mind%20of%20Liberty/IntotheMindofLiberty.html

Make sure you copy the entire line.

@trailblazer

Okay, I’ll try that.

@trailblazer

Anyway as far as the last names, would they use, for example, Mr. Gill and Mr. Edes, or just Gill and Edes? I think for friend and family level I’m gonna stick with first names for the sake of the reader, but otherwise I’ll try to keep some formality.

Either would work.

@trailblazer

1, does it draw you in and make you want to read more?

It certainly does for me! There’s suspense concerning the potential arrest of people, and the growing excitement of a war possibly coming.

 

And 2, does it sound historically accurate to you?

Most of it does. I did note that some of the speech wouldn’t have been used back then.…[Read more]

@esther-c

You pinpointed some great areas for me to work on.

With a sudden toss of his head, he dashed back the emotions threatening to overpower him. His peace shattered, and Thornbriar walked back to the forest.

I just feel like it flows better. And a little side note… Shortly after this sentence, you take a sentence or two to describe t…

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@ester-c

Thanks! I’ll be looking foreward to your feedback!

@esther-c

Awwww! You have a husky! That’s one of my favorite dog breeds! Lord willing, I would like to have one some day.

So, Buddy’s a mutt. He’s a rescue. I want to do a DNA test on him to find out what he truly is, but he’s somewhere between a Plott Hound and a Pit Bull. He looks more like a hound, but I’m super sure he’s got Pit Bull in…[Read more]

@trailblazer

Awesome!! IEW has helped me so much, too! I probably wouldn’t know how to write well unless I’d gone through IEW for many years. I also have learned all my grammar from their Fix It! course.

@trailblazer

I was really excited to see the movie, so my Mother used it for my school! I do IEW (if you’v ever heard of it). Well, for my writing papers, I researched and studied all about Henry Wadsworth Longfellow, his wife, and his sons. I especially loved researching about Charles Longfellow.

@trailblazer

Oh yeah, I love that movie, too!

@thearcaneaxiom

Thank you!

@esther-c

Yes, I have a dog. His name is Buddy. He’s five, and I’m loving training him! I don’t play volleyball on a team, but I do like playing it with friends/siblings.

I know. Iceland is so beautiful!

Chuck Black’s books are really thrilling. I would highly recommend C. R. Hedgecock’s books as well. Check her website. She has eight books in…[Read more]

@Trailblazer

I’m near the Lancaster one, so that means I’m close to you!

@freed_and_redeemed

Yes! My family loves that movie! One of my characters is kind of like Will Reynolds, too.

Ahh…I feel so good that I’m not a Bumbling Henchman anymore. Although, Charismatic Rebel is really odd as well.

@thearcaneaxiom

Yes, my book, Thorn is kind of like an allegory.

Btw, how do you do the green line thingy?

@esther-c

Wow! We have a lot in common! Jesus, volleyball, dogs, homeschooling, writing…

1. That’s a super hard question. I don’t even know if I have an answer. However, I really like writing my characters who have big struggles. They are usually internal struggles. Probably because I’ve had experiences like that too.

2. That’s another hard…[Read more]