@koshka
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Ruth replied to the topic An aggravation over Stained Glass in the forum Poetry Critiques 2 years, 9 months ago
I dabble a little in poetry and honestly have no talent for it, but my favourite verses are the two last. Why? Because it feels right somehow. I would help you out more, but I’m afraid I don’t reckonize your style well. I apologize for how little help I can offer.
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Mallory O'Bier replied to the topic The Moonlit Sea and Me in the forum Poetry Critiques 2 years, 9 months ago
I love the freeverse (that isn’t freeverse) poem! 🙂 Absolutely! Tag me when you post that poem that’s giving you grief. @koshka
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Mallory O'Bier replied to the topic The Moonlit Sea and Me in the forum Poetry Critiques 2 years, 9 months ago
Goodness me, I thought I replied to you ages ago, @koshka! Sorry! Now that I think about it, I went down a rabbit hole of web searching and trying to figure out what sort of poem it was, and I think I started to write a reply but must’ve never posted it.
Essentially, it’s a rhyming poem, but not a metered one. Some sources consider it free verse,…[Read more]
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Kylie replied to the topic Well…hello again ;))) in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
@elishavet-pidyon Oh neat! I’m wrapping up my senior year to go to college! What are you majoring for, if I may ask??
Also, do you mean his newest, the one with the moose? Or different??@koshka
*curtsies back* Bonjour, madam!
Writing has been slow lately, and I had to scrap Journey to Amber Forest due to some personal reasons, but I’m halfway…[Read more] -
Power replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
@koshka
Homework.
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Mallory O'Bier replied to the topic The Moonlit Sea and Me in the forum Poetry Critiques 2 years, 10 months ago
Thanks, @koshka! I love the layered meanings of words too. It was funny because I drafted it so hastily and impulsively that I didn’t even realize the full depth of meaning I had woven into the poem–until I was reading and rereading while editing. It was intentional and yet much of it was subconsciously done.
I just let all of the mixed-up…[Read more]
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Mallory O'Bier replied to the topic The Shabby Guitar Poem in the forum Poetry Critiques 2 years, 10 months ago
Thanks, @koshka! That would be great. 🙂
I wrote this poem after my uncle’s passing. He was self-taught on guitar and left a few of the instruments behind (as well as many people who loved him).
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Smiley replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
Marek
Eleanor looked at Jayson’s hand, but Marek knew she wouldn’t shake it. It was one thing for Eleanor to talk to a person it was another to have physical contact (outside of fighting) with that person.
Just as Marek suspected, Eleanor moved her hand away, she didn’t look mad or annoyed but instead just…[Read more]
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Smiley replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
Eleanor
“Your sister is probably worried about you,” Eleanor teased, smirking at Marek.
“Shh. I think I heard someone.” Leon hushed.
Eleanor shared a glance with Marek and then prepared for a fight. They turned the corner and were faced with two guys. one held a gadget that looked quite odd.
“Who are you?!” Elea…[Read more]
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Smiley replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
That works for me
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Lost Island (An Animal Fantasy RolePlay) in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
@koshka wow yeah it was
@whalekeeper @grcr sorry for ignoring this!! It must’ve gotten buried in my emails lol.
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Jaybird replied to the topic A Place to share/write whatever we’re working on: Worldbuilding, plot, etc in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @koshka @sunny421 @godlyfantasy12 @Idon’tknowwho @anyone
So I’ve finally managed to write the rough draft for the opening scene of book one of project Heirs of Ashes. I desperately need thoughts and critiques on it, and ideas for the plot. Really just anything will probably help.
For those who don’t know, HoA is an ad…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic Igua…the story that's going nowhere in the forum Fantasy 2 years, 11 months ago
Hello.
Now that we know each other, here’s a list of random questions about your WIP!
1. Does Igua like fish?
2. With such an aversion to butter knives, is eating butter a problem?
3. About how old is Igua at the beginning of your story?
4. What do you think inspired his character the most?
Hello, I’m called Ru or Ruee.
1. No, he d…[Read more]
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Enid replied to the topic Sebastian Universe in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 12 months ago
@loopylin @euodia-vision @esther-c @mineralizedwritings @elishavet-pidyon @keilah-h @koshka @lightoverdarkness6
Okay y’all, here’s a scene I wrote a few days ago. The two boys are in one of the gang’s hideouts – an apartment – all by themselves, while Seb’s father is away doing his villainous things. This is like, six years ago. I’m still fig…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Welp… I’m writing a script… in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years ago
Alright, thanks!!
I love the example. XD 😉
Thanks for the tips!!
Those plays sound like so much fun! 😊
Thanks!!
That would be a really fun skit to see. XD
Um… I don’t think so. At least not right now. (I’ve only sort of started…. Ok, I’ve written half a line. 😂)
It’s probably mo…[Read more]
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Enid replied to the topic Sebastian Universe in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years ago
Of course. After all, it is well earned… *tips hat*
Although, you may find yourself the subject of many scathing pranks. And I don’t mean just a sprinkle of pepper in your tea.
Yeah, they’re super fun XD I’m getting a long-awaited book for my birthday this year!
Oh my… *chortles*
What a predicament. I…[Read more]
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Lydibug replied to the topic The Lost Island (An Animal Fantasy RolePlay) in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years ago
@koshka thank u! 😊
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Sebastian Universe in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years ago
@koshka @whalekeeper My brother loves graphic novels! My mom found him a bunch of educational sciency ones he likes.
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Enid replied to the topic Sebastian Universe in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years ago
@lightoverdarkness6 @elishavet-pidyon @koshka
You guys are so tuning into my vibes right now 😍😎
That’s what introverts really are. Just various bottled condiments…
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Lydia S. posted an update 3 years ago
*plops down*
Well, friends, it’s been a while. I haven’t been particularly active on here for like… *blinks* a year or so, so I figured it’s about time I updated everyone on my existence, if only so that you know I am indeed still alive. 😉
In the past year, I have
-graduated high school
-graduated childhood
-joined the Author Conserv…[Read more] - Load More

@lydia-s
Awesome!! Congratulations on finishing your first novel!! So true, yes!! That’s a great way to describe it!
Eyyy, happy for you!