Janellebelovedpig

@mineralizedwritings

Um…yeah, CLIFFHANGER!

The absolute best cliffhanger that makes me want to yell, “WHO IS IT?”

I have a guess. But I won’t say. 😉

So, overall, really great writing!!!

I just had one question, which I meant to ask after I read this part on the second to last section you posted:

“Bobby.” A familiar voice comes from the fig…

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@arien

And girl, your testimony is beautiful! That’s so amazing how God worked everything out in your life.

Yes, Praise the Lord! I’m growing and learning how to trust Him more every day.

My sister and I had nothing to do except write and go on walks and talk about writing, so that’s what we did. 😂 It was really helpful though!

That sounds lov…

@lightoverdarkness6

Awesome!!

@the-rest-of-y’all

I love your stories! Their each unique in their own way!

@lightoverdarkness6

Well, no one ever finds an exact picture of their charrie, but yeah, at least it’s pretty close 😊😉.

Ikr?! It was so difficult to find face claims for Corie and Ty after writing like half of their book. XD But, finding pics for Ev and Ami were easier, since I hadn’t written any of their story yet. They were still pretty new…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

🥳 So glad you’re back!!!!!! I know I’ve only known you on here for a bit, but I missed ya!!!

@godlyfantasy12

Our group is getting a little big. Do you want me take a pair of my charries and have them find someone else? Or should I keep them? I really have no preference. I just know that you already have a lot of charries to kee…[Read more]

@folith-feolith

Wow that looks really interesting. I’ll keep it in mind for research!

Have you heard of Kings and Generals on youtube?

@booksandbeakers

Hello Caitlyn! I’m Felicity. Welcome to KP! That’s amazing that you’re home schooled! I’m a home school graduate myself and glad to meet others of our kind. 😀 I’m also an aspiring authoress, homesteader and follower of Jesus.

Glad to meet another Historical Fiction writer! I write Historical and Contemporary Fiction, and a…[Read more]

@booksandbeakers

I’m going to tag some other KeePers… 😀

@arien @orielle21 @starofthenorth @freedomwriter76 @folith-feolin @madelyn @theloonyone @loopylin @godlyfantasy12 @mineralizedwritings @lightoverdarkness6 @whalekeeper

@ava-blue @mineralized-writings @arien @freedomwriter76 @felicity @starofthenorth

Here is my playlist for…[Read more]

@arien

Yes, I do know that hymn! It’s so true!!

@sarafini

That sounds really cool!! I’ve never known anybody who has written an autobiography before.

The only advice I can offer, is this:

Read other auto/biographies. Then you can see how they wrote it. Secondly, when you’re starting at your childhood, you don’t have to document everything. Think of some really important moments that happen…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

Corie

I looked at the fennec fox curiously. Maybe he was a Lyabrinnian… or at least like one. His mouth didn’t move when he spoke.

Jocelyn smiled and I smiled back at her. She seemed like a nice girl. I started down the hall as the others followed.

I rubbed my arms and shivered as I felt a cold draft blow by. Ty seemed to not…[Read more]

@orielle21

Oh! I really liked that. I wouldn’t change a thing! It seems like the kind of story you read when you need a pick me up. Low stakes, but still lots of fun, and the time travel thing makes it extra interesting!

I think that was what I was kind of thinking in my head, I just couldn’t put words to it. 😅

@lightoverdarkness6

Lol, yes, that’s all that matters! Speaking of sibling laughs, my little brother is always talking about how many books I read, and he was singing the song from Tangled, the part where Repunzel’s singing “And then I’ll read a book, or maybe two or three.” But instead of saying that, goes, “And then I’ll read a book, or maybe…

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@felicity

Oh my word!!! That’s super cold.

I think it’s cold in a lot of the US because of the arctic front. Yesterday was terrible. It didn’t go over 3 degrees Fahrenheit!! Today is a little better. Funny thing is, a week from now it will be 58. 😆

I expect we’ll see a polar bear soon

I wouldn’t doubt it. Lol 😂

@lightoverdarkness6

Took me a while to reply, but now I am! 😁

First of all, I could really feel the sibling dynamic! Great job on that! Sibling dynamics are my favorite!! I could also feel the tone: Sure, they were in a bad situation, but it didn’t get them down all the way, bc they had each other.

I’m already really liking your cha…[Read more]

@orielle21

I enjoyed it!! It was cute and simple!!

But for some critiques, here’s what I thought:

So, I noticed that the kids are going to school. But it’s Christmastime. So that would be weird if they were going to school that close to Christmas Day.

Secondly, I felt as if the dialogue was unnatural. So to help with the flow of dialogue, I s…[Read more]

@lightoverdarkness6

Also, were you sure of their genders? My uncle read it yesterday, and he goes, “I like that. Asher and Iris are both girls, right?” 🤣 I was like “umm no.” I was pretty sure Asher is just a boy name, but I could be wrong 🤣.

Wait, are you sure he wasn’t teasing you? 🤣 It was pretty obvious to me!

@lightoverdarkness6

Omg, that’s hilarious!!! I love it!! That sounds like something me and my cousin would do (We’re like sisters)!

It was rather cheesy, but…we laughed. That’s all that matters, right? 😀 😀 Sweet!

That’s okay! Haha, I’m not great at solving mysteries XD. I don’t know when I would’ve figured it out 🤣. (if I ever did XD!)

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@folith-feolin

Ok, I see. I’m Harry Potter ignorant. Thanks for explaining. 😀