Jean Coul

@koshka @freedomwriter76 I think your characters are the ones mine is talking to, can one of you go next please?

@joy-caroline This is why I get annoyed sometimes when I write my stories in notebooks–I can’t go back and erase what I don’t want like I can on a computer. I do that all the time. Half of my notebook-written stories [that I still want to continue] are abandoned, thirty pages in or so, because I wasn’t so sure about the beginning and just wanted…[Read more]

@joy-caroline

I totally feel this struggle. I have rewritten so many chapters, especially opening ones, because I’m almost never satisfied with chapters that I’ve written. Opening ones can be so difficult because you’re juggling introducing the book’s themes, characters, and conflicts all at once in a way that’s memorable, satisfying, and intri…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12 @elishavet-pidyon @koshka @freedomwriter76 All right then, here we go.

Crosshair

It was a little amusing, the way the fox thing was snarling at him like it wanted to bite his head off. Crosshair knew he could easily kick it into the wall before it even penetrated his armor.

“Hey!” one of the characters yelled, before also…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12 what do you mean? He’s my character already.

@koshka @freedomwriter76

Okay, that was NOT tomorrow. But here’s my character! He’s not too much of a talker (the show described him as “not much of a conversationalist,” so to cut down on the large number of tags I’ll probably just tag whoever owns the character he happens to be talking to. That all right with you?

All right, I’ll start…[Read more]

@hallie-jean @e-m-trepke @power

Feather and Rinzler

“Everett,” said Feather. “That’s a nice name, actually.”

“Fits him better than the Dark Player does,” Rinzler mused.

Feather’s gaze flicked to the newcomers. “Hello, Molly and Xavier. You two have great names as well. I’m Feather, and over there is my friend, Rinzler. I’ll let the other two…[Read more]

@elishavet-pidyon That’s super sad, but amazing storytelling all at the same time. I want to read your book……

@freedomwriter76 Really? So sorry, next time I get a chance I’ll try to redo it.

@freedomwriter76 @koshka

All right, time to introduce the character I was talking about. Here’s a drawing of him (that I did not make):

For the things I DIDN’T make about him:

His name’s Crosshair, for his prowess with a rifle (he can hit a target from 10 kilometers/6 miles away; in other words, he could shoot something off the top of Mount…[Read more]

file:///C:/Users/JAHEL/Documents/My%20stories/What%20If–Star%20Wars-Tron%20combination%20(pdf%20file).pdf

Ok, I hope this’ll work. Here’s the whole thing!

@koshka He’s extremely futuristic. He comes from the Star Wars universe, so… I don’t think it’ll be too much of a problem though.

@freedomwriter76 ok then, I’ll introduce him tomorrow if I can!

@freedomwriter76 Ok! I’ll do it whenever I have time.

@freedomwriter76 I love that scene…. Marvel humor at its best. And I should probably make the story I’m telling you into a google doc or something so you can have the whole thing….

I will repeat that I did not create him, so if that’s in any way against the rules of this “game” I won’t go ahead with the plan.

@freedomwriter76 @koshka Do you mind if I add a character to your group? He’s not mine, never was, but I do some work on his character arc in the fanfic he has a major role in, and it’s a tiny bit like what your characters are going through. I’ll probably introduce him tomorrow if neither of you reply. I’m just waiting for my other group to…[Read more]

@hallie-jean You can do whatever you want! I won’t mind.

@koshka

I’m sorry y’all. I’ll try to stay on track this time.

Mila means ‘beloved, gracious’, and in some translations ‘precious’.

Even though that isn’t her name’s proper spelling, it is fitting for her relationship with her father, as his favorite child. 🙂

@freedomwriter76 You don’t have to if you don’t want to! But it would be fun.

@freedomwriter76 Oh, cool! And yes, I have to say, Anakin Skywalker is such a cool character. He doesn’t appear in this fanfic but he’s in a few of my other ones.

Here’s the next part!

The five of them suddenly found themselves in a completely different room than they’d been in before.

“What—what just happened?” Echo asked, looking around.…

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