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@savannah_grace2009 @mineralizedwritings

Oh yeah, whoops. 😅

Ok, well, then I’ll reconsider adding her in. 😉

@sarafini

Alrighty! I’ll be sure to pop in!

@sarafini

If this is the whole first chapter (which I’m assuming it is) my first critique would be to hint in some way at the actual plot. I felt like it was missing something, and maybe that was it. I’m not entirely sure. Because to me, unless this whole story revolves around Ben and his forgiving his father, I see no indication of the plot dev…[Read more]

@rae

Actually, I don’t think those questions have been asked before. Congrats!

Sweet. 😎 *high-fives myself*

Who is your favorite character to write and why? Nahim Alfred Nayhelm, last of his family-clan. I know him as well as if he were my sibling (except whether he would like vanilla or chocolate ice cream, as far as I know, he’s never had it.…

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@mineralizedwritings

Thank you so much! I’m glad you like it!

I did a pencil sketch, went over it in pen, erased the pencil, and then colored it with prismacolor colored pencils.

Oh also I use a black fabercastel polychromos, it’s worth it for the money. My main brown is a caren d’ache, but the only reason I have a few of those it because I fou…

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@fernweh_grace

Cool! Can’t wait!

@calyhuge @loopylin @whalekeeper @freedomwriter76 – yes freedom, Erich and Riker need to bust in soon. XD

Oh geez, i just kinda went wild and added a lot of unneeded crap, but here you go!

Tirion

“How about you two?” Felicity asked, turning to Riya and Tirion.

“Uh,” Tirion paused, watching everyone turn to look at him and Riya with eyes fu…[Read more]

@smiley

ooooh, that would be cool!!!

@sarafini

So cool! I really like it!

@fernweh_grace

Oooh, that sounds really cool!!

For sharing, you can do that on here!! Or make a new forum. Whatever ya want!

@freedomwriter76

somehow i missed your reply. XD

Yessss, I know about Inktober!!!

Sadly, I don’t think I’ll be able to do every day…however, I will enthusiastically cheer everyone on and maybe do a drawing or two! 😀

Hey that’s okay! I’ll probably get really behind, so we’ll see. 😆

(speaking of which…I need to color the drawing of Riker’s…

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@savannah_grace2009

I think one of the best ways of writing uncomfortable/painful or possibly edge subjects is to merely state the facts and then be done, that’s how the Bible does it. (Perhaps, look at similar instances in the Bible and see how they are written.) You don’t need all the details. Sometimes the most powerful things said, are the…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

I have no idea what went wrong above, but it looks like I tagged you on nothing XD Maybe I was really tired when I wrote that idk

@rae

Thank you so much!

Also, art questions tend to illicit a information dump from me… lol you asked for it.

I think the most important part of the detailing is knowing where to put the highlights and shadows. Most hair, especially if it’s messy like his, has a shadow under each section of hair. The section of hair also has shadows and…[Read more]

@spinner4him

Yess!!! Read and reread them, they’re amazing. My family might be starting the first one as a read aloud, too! 😁 I’ve been trying to get my siblings to read them forever. Who’s your favorite character?

@savannah_grace2009

I don’t really know much about abuse effects or anything like that other than I’ve read in books, thankfully. One thing I would ask is, is it absolutely necessary to the plot/character? Because I think that can really easily become a cliched, sort of stereotypical in books, so if you’re just throwing it in there to make the…[Read more]

@hanako

Hi Nevaeh! It’s nice to meet you!

I’m hybridlore on here, or just Hybrid, a Christian, violinist, and sci-fi/dystopian writer. I’m also a homeschooler and enjoy doing lots of things! 😁

Okay, maybe you can revive the nonfiction section on here… I don’t know exactly what’s going on over there, but I don’t think it’s used very often.…[Read more]

@spinner4him

Yeah, I definitely like viola better, because of the sound, I guess. I don’t really know, but it just fits me better.

Yeah, I get that. It’s really similar to violin, just a little deeper, right? I don’t think you have an E string.

My inspiration for my WIP was a bunch of different books and one of my friends, who loves to imagine a…

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Twas not a ball of steel

that pierced my fleshy heart

A Blast and blaze of fire

Or burn that did smart

 

Weren’t a silver sword

or bent blade that did prick

that caused my chest to bleed

and my blood now to drip

 

Traitor tales hurt me not

Nor are why I have wept

You ask the reason why?

It’s due to your reject.

 

I offered you my…[Read more]

@rae

That does answer my question! I like the sound of your wip!

And yes, totally just join any topic! If you see a rp you want to join, all you have to do is go to the first page of the topic, read the rules, and then introduce your character with a description and short backstory. Some role-plays allow multiple characters, some just one.