Heaven Franklin

@daisy-torres

OOO, YAY!! let me read it real quick and I’ll give you some feedback…

@writerlexi1216

It’s good!!  I only write about 250 words today, but I finished plotting for one of my POVs, so that’s nice.  Just gotta finish the other POV, then I’m all done with that!  I just made a word-count goal, which is 75k by the end of the year.  Pretty loose, but we’ll see how it goes… 🤞

@g_c_al

Ooo, cool!!  I love the sound of your WIP?  (btw, have you heard of/read Dust by Kara Swanson?  I think it’s a peter pan retelling and the author is actually from another christian writer’s forum called Story Embers, which is pretty cool!)  And yes, agreed, tea is superior. 😄

@trulyyours_karilyn

Haha, yeah, I’m probably dreaming about rocking in heels, lol!!!  Ooo, I love satire!!!

Oh, oops, I meant plotter and pantser, but i wasn’t really paying attention to what I was writing… again, lol!!!

LOL, my dad has a taco shirt like that actually!!  Ditto, tho, tacos are the best.

Yep, caffeine is a writer’s bff.  Wel…[Read more]

@lucy

Here are some names I found, but idk if it’s the aesthetic you wanted:

Taeral, Erendil, Wyrran, Ellisar, Luthais, Zhoron, Revalor, Ayas

And if you don’t like any of those, here’s the link to an awesome name generator that you can use:

https://www.fantasynamegenerators.com/

Hope this helps!!

-Ella

@trulyyours_karilyn

Hey Karilyn!!  I’m Ella, and welcome to KP!!  Nice to meet you!!!  Me and my fam serve grated cheese with our fingers, too, so I totally get it. 😉  My family must have been descended from giants, because my brother, who is a senior this year, is 6’5!! 😲  And I’m 5’7 and in the middle of high school!!  If I didn’t play baske…[Read more]

@daisy-torres

I love this soooo much!!  Tessa and the other characters, the internal monologue, the mirrors, the music, the prophecy… the whole concept is sooo cool!!!  TYSM for sharing!!!!!!!!!

@lucy

Hey!!  It’s me again, and I totally feel you when it comes to finding cool names.  Could you give some more details for the time period the charrie is living in?  Or what the genre is?

@lucy

Heyo!!  I’m Ella, and welcome to KP!!!  (I love your MC’s name, Ravial… SO pretty!!)

Here are some things about me:

1)  I love all sports, but especially basketball and track & field

2)  I’m a dark-chocoholic

3)  I write fantasy, speculative fic, and thriller/suspense

I’m currently writing two WIPs, one is spec-fic, and one is fant…[Read more]

@kayleigh-idea

Great, thanks!!

@g_c_al

Hey Gigi!!!  (I love your name, btw!!)  I’m Ella, and welcome to KP!!!  Ooo, short stories are fun, but I’m sooo glad you got into writing novels!!!!

Here are a few things about me:

1)  I love smoothies and dark chocolate

2)  I adore basketball and running and working out (ik, I’m weird 😄)

3)  I write fantasy, speculative ficti…[Read more]

@wyn-rose

Those are so beautiful, Wyn!!

@everyone

Y’all, you guys are awesome!!!!

Ok, I’m a bit late to the party, but here are a few lines that I like:

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Nic traces his finger over the back of my hand.  “Sometimes, it’s not about understanding each other,”  he whispers.  “Because some of us have more inside us than it’s safe to kn…[Read more]

@nanisnook

Hey Natalie!! (i love your name, btw)  I’m Ella, and welcome to KP!!!!!!!!!! 🎉  So glad you’re here!!!

Here are a couple of things about me:

1)  I have two WIPs, both containing sisters with a lot of problems 😊:  #1 is a futuristic/speculative, #2 is a fantasy.

2)  I love smoothies!!

3)  Basketball is the best sport, imo &#x1f6…[Read more]

@writerlexi1216

It’s going pretty good!  I started Chap. 3 of Lioness and it’s going pretty well.  About to send in my chapter to KP Critiques… 😃

@daisy-torres

That was really good and super suspenseful!!!  I love Tessa’s personality and internal monologue, too, lol!!  You HAVE to post more—please!!!!!! 😃

@daisy-torres

Ooo, I LOVE this!!! ❤  It was funny in the beginning and really intense at the end, which I love!  And I like Tessa’s character, and of course, the antique roadshow guy.  Overall, it was really well written and I can’t wait to read the next chapter!! (which might be awhile because I’m pretty busy today, so….)  Thanks for sha…[Read more]

@kathleenramm

Ooo, fun idea!!  Let’s see…  None of my characters in Lioness are very fun/nice/not-scarred (heh heh 😬), so I’d probably be someone from As Dark As Mist and Shadow.  I think I’d be Murin, because she’s an awesome spy with an awesome sidekick who lives in an awesome place with an awesome attitude.  And she rides horses all the ti…[Read more]