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    Daisy Torres
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      https://docs.google.com/document/d/1CYzWmClXlg_1aBN5BMwzylGrv0MZUlR2GKWl-7ndUqA/edit?usp=drivesdk


      @devastate-lasting
      @gracie-j @nova21 @abigail-m

      Next chapter is ready to be critiqued! This one needs a lot of work because I’m trying to make sure my explanations all make sense lol. Thank you in advance!!

      "It's easy to be caught up in stardust and whispers when reality is so dark and loud."

      #94521
      Linyang Zhang
      @devastate-lasting
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        @daisy-torres Cool I’ll try to get to it soon!

        Lately, it's been on my brain
        Would you mind letting me know
        If hours don't turn into days

        #94538
        Linyang Zhang
        @devastate-lasting
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          @daisy-torres Aight I left some comments! Thanks for sharing!

          Lately, it's been on my brain
          Would you mind letting me know
          If hours don't turn into days

          #94585
          ella
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            @daisy-torres

            OOO, YAY!! let me read it real quick and I’ll give you some feedback…

            what we do in life echoes in eternity
            -gladiator, 2000

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            ella
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              @daisy-torres

              Girl, that was great!!  Super fun to read, as always! 😉

              what we do in life echoes in eternity
              -gladiator, 2000

              #94607
              Daisy Torres
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                Thank y’all so much, @nova21 @devastate-lasting!! If y’all ever need the favor returned, just let me know <3

                "It's easy to be caught up in stardust and whispers when reality is so dark and loud."

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                Gracie J.
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                  @daisy-torres I can’t wait to read it–I’ll get to it soon!

                  the resident romance ghost; last seen within the pages of a gothic novel

                  #94630
                  Daisy Torres
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                    @gracie-j Yay!!

                    "It's easy to be caught up in stardust and whispers when reality is so dark and loud."

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