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@liberty

Hey, welcome to KP! This is really late, but I haven’t been on here for a while so I’ll just introduce myself so I can get to know you. I’m theloonyone or just loony. A little bit about me, I’m a Christian, teen homeschooler who likes to write, surprise surprise. I have a lot of different hobbies and am not too great at any of them; w…[Read more]

@artistodysseyfan

Ooooh, adventures in odyssey, that brings back memories. Writing for them sounds really fun!

Anyway… welcome to Kingdom Pen! Sorry about the really late welcome, it’s been awhile since I’ve been on here 😅. I’m theloonyone or just loony. I am also Star Wars obsessed, and especially clone wars since I’ve been watching it since…[Read more]

@theducktator

Greetings Ducktator, Abigail, Abby, ruler of the ducks, welcome to Kingdom Pen! *Que the sound of trumpets* I am terribly sorry about the late welcome to our land, for I have been traveling and have only recently gotten back. I am TheLoonyOne, or you may call my loony and I will make sure that the rubber ducks in my bathroom know…[Read more]

@theshadow

Hello, welcome to Kingdom Pen! (Sorry about the late welcome, it’s been a while since I’ve been on KP 😅)

I’m theloonyone or just loony. A little bit about me, I’m a Christian, teen homeschooler who likes to write, surprise surprise. I have a lot of different hobbies and am not too great at any of them; writing, art (mostly just pe…[Read more]

@arcticanimals

Hey Kendall, welcome to Kingdom Pen! I’m theloonyone or just loony. Sorry about the late introduction. A little bit about me, I’m a Christian, teen homeschooler who likes to write, surprise surprise. I have a lot of different hobbies and am not too great at any of them; writing, art (mostly just pencil drawing, although I’m start…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

Hi Linus, I’m theloonyone, or just loony! Welcome to Kingdom Pen! (I actually haven’t been here in a while, just now trying to get back into writing…) Do you have a favorite lego set that you own? Or one that you really want? Your WIP sounds really cool and it’s so awesome that you’re already working on your second draft!

A…[Read more]

@rae

I’ve never heard of that site, or really any site for cover making. Guess I haven’t been looking. XD

I’ve used Photoshop or Canva to design working covers before, and I’ve been satisfied enough with that (especially Photoshop, but I just like playing with that thing).

If you want tips for making a good cover design, I’d say start by…[Read more]

@freed_and_redeemed

Glad it was helpful! (Am more than mildly curious who this character will be)

Gracious, I don’t like this guy. Or Riker’s father much either. They’re…slimy. *stalks out of room*

@linus-smallprint

I have not read the book, but my mum listened to it on audio and enjoyed it 😆 She said it was cozy and a whole lot less complicated than Sanderson’s other works. She also tends to doze off while listening (she’s sick and has a terrible sleep schedule) but understood enough to give it a positive review, lol.

To this day she say…[Read more]

@thearcaneaxiom

Why deny our relationship with Christ😥

I don’t mean to start a discussion on this thread, and we can move it if it goes any further 🙃 I do believe at least from a reformed perspective – and other people probably agree with me – that the Church of the Latter-Day Saints is not what we define as Christianity.

Those in the L…[Read more]

#howtoindirectlytellsomeonetheyseemcool

@loopylin

I actually swiftly painted a canvas this afternoon at a birthday party, and plan to make paper wings to glue to it. If I burn or paint the edges a darker color, it should look pretty 😛

Marz

“I have to guess you’re talking to the dragon,” Marcel said. “But whatever you find cool, thanks.”

He picked up the purple bear and walked it…[Read more]

@freed_and_redeemed

Hmm… stubborn characters can be troublesome.

Here are me thoughts. Use such as are helpful, discard such as aren’t.

• He already can’t live with his guilt/shame/hopelessness. That is quite obvious. He just needs to realize what is already clear to everyone else including the reader.
• Due to the very fact that he hasn’t…

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@loopylin

Origamiiiiii. I used to love making things with paper. Did anyone else have a huge crafting phase in the middle school years?

Marz

“Sure.”

The paper was a little smaller than Marcel was used to. He took a few pieces and fiddled with them, invisible feathers rustling in concentration, before plopping them on the table.

The crumpled…[Read more]

@freed_and_redeemed

Thank you so much for the update, the poor dears. They need some help. And maybe some tea and cookies.

So…I have some feedback for Riker’s scene. I am supposing this is nearing the crisis point of the second book, as Riker is getting a broken record sensation with his guilt. Otherwise…ooof. That was a hard scene.

Also, I…[Read more]

If someone ever makes their tag line something like @everyone-else or @anyone-who-reads-this I already pity them.

@elishavet-pidyon

They got us alright.

(Also, @AllOtherKeepers Hi y’all! I’m haven’t croaked yet, praise the Lord.)

@loopylin

It is, you say?

>:]

I have… three docs 😅 One for plot, then worldbuilding+character bios, then the draft. When things feel more organized, I merge the plot, worldbuilding and characters into one doc and add clear headings.

One thing to be careful about is checking your doc whenever you want to change something. Sometimes I forget I have the doc, and things e…[Read more]

@theducktator

Nya, Willow, Mable, Bella, Harper, Lindy, Luna