Evelyn collins

@lydia-s

I haven’t met you yet so… hi!! *waves* Nice to meet you!!

Great idea!! This will be interesting!! *rubs hands together* (keep in mind, not all these charries are from the same WIP)

1. Ring-bearer
Elf. I love elves!!! (Specifically the ones in LotR)
2. Gandalf

Oof. I’m not sure on this one. Maybe one of Amidala Nadir’s parents (from m…[Read more]

@booksandbeakers

I’m not sure how far you’ve read, but it is explained once they leave The Orb. Well, sort of explained. I want it to be more of a mystery as to why The Orb was there in the first place. So, as you read, (I hope) you will see that the people who live outside The Orb have a better life than those inside. At least it seems that way…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12 @felicity @mineralizedwritings @koshka @elishavet-pidyon @loopylin @lightoverdarkness6 @anyone-else-i-forgot

*blinks* *stares*

This just absolutely exploded!!!

Welp! I’m gonna just join in. I have no idea what has happened so far. Didn’t really want to read through EIGHT AND A HALF PAGES!!! *clears throat* oh boy. This will be…[Read more]

Oops, @godlyfantasy12 . I didn’t finish my post. 😅

yeah… November’s is loooooooong. But that’s awesome!!! I can see the obvious favorite. 😉😁

@freedomwriter76

Uhm…I might have to say the episode where Jesus called Simon the Zealot and healed Simon’s brother, the lame man, at the pool in Bethesda. 🙂

Awesome!! That was a good one!!! (Aren’t they all, tho? XD)

So… Leo seems to be a favorite around here. I think I know a little about him. Does he have a moodboard? I’d love to hear abou…[Read more]

@booksandbeakers

1. Tea

Awesome!! I like hot tea occasionally, but I prefer iced sweet tea.

2. Purple

Cool!! That is my second favorite color. My favorite is rose-gold. 😜

3. Neither *hides*

*gasps* 😜 jk Do you have any pets at home? Or is your family not really pet people?

4. Autumn-temperate weather, sweaters, leaves, and, for our family, long…

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@booksandbeakers

Hey!! Welcome to Kingdom Pen! I’m Esther: a volleyball-playing, violin-squeaking, dog-obsessed, young adult fiction-writing, God-loving, amateur writer! *whew*

I like to dabble in a little bit of everything, concerning writing: my WIP is dystopian, I have a set-aside-for-a-long-time fantasy duology, I have a his-fic idea, and I…[Read more]

@mineralizedwritings @godlyfantasy12 @lightoverdarkness6 @felicity

As of now, the last chapter I’ve posted is all I have written. I promise one or two new chapters within the first week of the new year!

Oh, and the last part at the end of the chapter where Ami remembers that they forgot Artemis… well… pretend that never happened. Let’s just pr…[Read more]

@booksandbeakers

So I think I get what you’re saying. 😅

Are you asking what happens to the people inside The Orb, or outside The Orb?

@godlyfantasy12

*blinks*

Woah. That playlist is looooong!!

🤣

That’s awesome!!!!

Santa Baby- Lindsey Stirling

You listen to Lindsey Stirling!!! Girl, I looove her music!! (Even tho I’ve only heard her Christmas songs XD)

@freedomwriter76

Gratitude by Brandon Lake (Chosen Performance Version)

*gasp* You’ve watched the Chosen?!?! Our famil…[Read more]

@lightoverdarkness6

Awesome!!

@the-rest-of-y’all

I love your stories! Their each unique in their own way!

@lightoverdarkness6

Well, no one ever finds an exact picture of their charrie, but yeah, at least it’s pretty close 😊😉.

Ikr?! It was so difficult to find face claims for Corie and Ty after writing like half of their book. XD But, finding pics for Ev and Ami were easier, since I hadn’t written any of their story yet. They were still pretty new…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

🥳 So glad you’re back!!!!!! I know I’ve only known you on here for a bit, but I missed ya!!!

@godlyfantasy12

Our group is getting a little big. Do you want me take a pair of my charries and have them find someone else? Or should I keep them? I really have no preference. I just know that you already have a lot of charries to kee…[Read more]

@ava-blue @mineralized-writings @arien @freedomwriter76 @felicity @starofthenorth

Here is my playlist for…[Read more]

@sarafini

That sounds really cool!! I’ve never known anybody who has written an autobiography before.

The only advice I can offer, is this:

Read other auto/biographies. Then you can see how they wrote it. Secondly, when you’re starting at your childhood, you don’t have to document everything. Think of some really important moments that happen…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

Corie

I looked at the fennec fox curiously. Maybe he was a Lyabrinnian… or at least like one. His mouth didn’t move when he spoke.

Jocelyn smiled and I smiled back at her. She seemed like a nice girl. I started down the hall as the others followed.

I rubbed my arms and shivered as I felt a cold draft blow by. Ty seemed to not…[Read more]

@orielle21

Oh! I really liked that. I wouldn’t change a thing! It seems like the kind of story you read when you need a pick me up. Low stakes, but still lots of fun, and the time travel thing makes it extra interesting!

I think that was what I was kind of thinking in my head, I just couldn’t put words to it. 😅

@felicity

Oh my word!!! That’s super cold.

I think it’s cold in a lot of the US because of the arctic front. Yesterday was terrible. It didn’t go over 3 degrees Fahrenheit!! Today is a little better. Funny thing is, a week from now it will be 58. 😆

I expect we’ll see a polar bear soon

I wouldn’t doubt it. Lol 😂

@lightoverdarkness6

Took me a while to reply, but now I am! 😁

First of all, I could really feel the sibling dynamic! Great job on that! Sibling dynamics are my favorite!! I could also feel the tone: Sure, they were in a bad situation, but it didn’t get them down all the way, bc they had each other.

I’m already really liking your cha…[Read more]

@orielle21

I enjoyed it!! It was cute and simple!!

But for some critiques, here’s what I thought:

So, I noticed that the kids are going to school. But it’s Christmastime. So that would be weird if they were going to school that close to Christmas Day.

Secondly, I felt as if the dialogue was unnatural. So to help with the flow of dialogue, I s…[Read more]