Elishavet Elroi

@elishavet-pidyon Hmmm, I’d say my Dragonmen–but I have a forum topic for them already. I’ll do the Ailurids. (Aelurus means cat in Latin, so I thought it’d be a good name for a race of catlike creatures.)

They’re humanoid, but usually a little bigger than large housecats. They can stand erect or on four legs. Although they wear clothes, they…[Read more]

@elishavet-pidyon

I used to read the American Girl books. I didn’t like them all that much, and kind of thought of them as discount–Laura Ingles Wilder books. But I was also strongly against historical fiction, so it made sense I didn’t like it.

What’s Fort Apache?

@joy-caroline

Yea, I agree I like Amy with Laurie, I think it tied the…[Read more]

@elishavet-pidyon Happened to me too!

@elishavet-pidyon

Beautiful. I can totally relate to the wanting good books to read from newer/modern authors thing

@elishavet-pidyon I love it! He’s cute!

@elishavet-pidyon well i think i like the squirrels best

@elishavet-pidyon

It is amazing! I think the best thing for me is being able to like nerd about Bible characters, especially Jesus! And the relationships between the disciples, especially brother-brother relationships like Simon and Andrew, James and John, are really great!

@koshka

I get where you’re coming from. The Chosen does try to be h…[Read more]

@joy-caroline

Have you seen The Chosen? It’s quite good biblical fiction and does what you were saying with making the characters believable and have flaws and all that. It’s a great series about Christ’s disciples and the struggles they might have faced following him during the years of his ministry. It’s really cool, and they have two whole s…[Read more]

@elishavet-pidyon

*OOO, FLASH FICTION I SEE?!* Oh I love it! If you want comments on editing, I have a lil note:

“I charged the next man. He must have thought I meant to attack him with the mace, which was exactly what I wanted him to think. Untill I threw myself to the frozen earth and shot between his legs.

Milla was right behind him, still…

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@elishavet-pidyon

That’s so cool! Whenever I try to draw anything like that, the eyes look so dead ;-; but that’s beautiful!

@trahia-the-minstrel

😉 *satisfied*

@keilah-h

Beaumont!! Cats are such good selling points for me xD

@elishavet-pidyon

*Smiles at the names*
I love the ending! I may change ‘Milla was curled up on the ground,’ to ‘I could just see Milla curled up on the ground,’ or something like that. But then again, I don’t know.

@everyone

Sorry for the late reply, I’ve had a busy couple of days.

@elishavet-pidyon

That picture is gorgeous! So cute! You’re a really good artist.😊 And I love Trumpkin.

@keilah-h

I love your main character’s name. I feel like the cat is an interesting character …😁 And I love that you have a character called Nyx too!

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@gracie-j @elishavet-pidyon @koshka I could actually use some help rn lol.

I need some help with 2 things.

I’ve got my protagonist’s Desire and misbelief down but not his fear, and I’ve got of my side character’s Desire and fear down but not his misbelief

Kaithen- Protagonist

Desire: To be more then just an errand boy, to be more then one who…[Read more]

@elishavet-pidyon Ahhh thank you so much! And yes!! It is!! Thank you, I made it today!

Inspiration is absolutely FLOWING! Which proves this must be a God thing because this does not usually happen. I’m writing character stuff (Fear, Misbelief, Desire things like that) that I can’t usually figure out very quickly) and I’m so excited! Thank the Lord!

@elishavet-pidyon oh my word!!! Gorgeous!!!! You’re so talented my gosh!!!

@elishavet-pidyon

Awww… That’s beautiful. He looks so real!

@elishavet-pidyon I used that sort of thing in my novel–my MC’s dad uses a few self-tailored expressions. “Crosshairs and cutlery, you just won’t give up, will you?”

@godlyfantasy12 I have a character named Nyx too! She is a good deal more annoying, though. She’s also female, and she’s a Deinonychus (a certain species of dinosaur).

@elishavet-pidyon

Yeah, I’m using the yellow manor house and the river, but without the bridge, in my current 2nd draft of my WIP.

Maybe the ground keepers are made to stay there against their will. Blackmail maybe. And if they leave something horrible will happen. I smell a mystery. Hehe

@elishavet-pidyon

Yep! Haha! It was really cool! It was rather large with a courtyard in the back that we weren’t allowed to go in. It a yellow manor with black shutters and roof, a large front door, and three huge steps out front with white pillars. I spent most of my time outdoors with my siblings when we stayed there. I remember a huge curved…[Read more]