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Starshiness replied to the topic "A New Normal" in the forum Short Story Critiques 4 years, 1 month ago
@elishavet-pidyon Hmm I do see what you mean there. Since I finished this piece, I kept getting the feeling that there was *something* not quite right; maybe this is it! Tysm for the feedback!!
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 1 month ago
@emilysf @godlyfantasy12 @elishavet-pidyon
Is it my turn, or does Mila get a chance?
By the by, Emilysf, do you know what the name Mila means when it has an Old Slavic base?
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Koshka replied to the topic Favorite Scenes In Our WIPs! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 2 months ago
Aahhhhhhh!!!!!!! Alwin, my dear lad…*sigh* That sounds awesome for a first chapter; definitely something I could get hooked on.
Honestly I’ve always envisioned your books to be more YA than middle grade, so don’t worry about that. Your themes will be more powerful to an older age group anyway.
Yes, it’s Mikkel! Thank you,…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Favorite Scenes In Our WIPs! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 2 months ago
Not entirely sure who to tag, but here goes!
@emilysf @godlyfantasy12 @elishavet-pidyon
This is part of a scene I’ve had running through my head. It’s from the serie’s last book, Seas of Fury, which is set about 800 Years later, so the technology is way more advanced than in the first two books.
Fog swirled around him, penetrated by something…
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 2 months ago
@elishavet-pidyon yes! They’re there!
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 2 months ago
@elishavet-pidyon OH MY GOSH!! 2 of my friends/youth group is there!!!
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 2 months ago
@elishavet-pidyon oh cool!!
Hey…I promise I’m not trying to be a creeper 🤣 but r u at a youth camp?
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GodlyFantasy12 started the topic My Antagonist: Corvina, And Her Problem in the forum Characters 4 years, 2 months ago
Hey everyone!! So, I know I’m still on the first draft of my first book of this series, buuuuut I already am thinking ahead a tooon and, well, im sure some of y’all have heard of my anatabonist (who I love) Corvina.
This post was actually made because I could use a little bit of help with something about her, and it also kinda includes ano…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 2 months ago
@elishavet-pidyon u wanna go?
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Starshiness started the topic Packing Punches! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 2 months ago
One of the things I love most about writing is that while a good author has a multitude of words available to him, he has the ability to condense what he wants to say into a few words or sentences–but just those few can really pack a punch! Flash fiction is to me one of the most intriguing genres; and I love to geek out over even more condensed…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 2 months ago
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GodlyFantasy12 started the topic MAJOR WIP SPOILER FORUM!!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 2 months ago
I DID IT!! I FINALLY MADE IT!!
*regrets immediately*
JK. Anyway, I had this idea a while back to make this post where we could come here and talk about our WIPs and MAJOR SPOILERS AND PLOT TWISTS THAT WE ARE SOO EXCITED ABOUT AND HATE HAVING TO KEEP SECRET FROM FRIENDS AND FAMILY WITHOUT HAVING TO DISCLAIMER IN THE POST!!
Thus this forum was…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic First 7k words of an epic fantasy novel for critique in the forum Novel Critique Requests 4 years, 2 months ago
AHHH THAT WAS INCREDIBLE!!! OH MY WORD!!! Is this a first draft because if so…
*faints*
NO BUT SRSLY LIKE HOW?!?! HOW IS IT SO GOOD?!
Maaaaan this was soooo great!! I was HOOKED!!
and the Way you wrote God was soooo awesome!!
here, I’ll tag some ppl for u to read this awesomeness and help ya out!
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 2 months ago
Arabella
At the mention of gardens, Ara’s mind alighted. She found herself wandering through flashes of color and memories years past.
Home.Â
Her eyes glazed over and she smiled faintly, remembering the beauty that had been A’Grend’s garden.
Her Eden.
The birds whistling, the sunlight beaming. Flora and fauna of var…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 2 months ago
*A catlike figure, draped in a dark cloak, slips noiselessly into the Kingdom Pen Hall. It slides up to a table and drops a parchment next to a miniature castle. Many apologies, it whispers, then vanishes into the shadows.*
@emilysf @godlyfantasy12 @elishavet-pidyon
Vulkasin
The air in this corridor felt heavy, Vulkasin almost had to focus…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 2 months ago
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Lydia S. replied to the topic Memes, Inspo, Aesthetics, Pretty Much Anything XD in the forum Characters 4 years, 2 months ago
That is so cool!!! It always makes me happy when I meet other S&S fans. 😁 We just saw their David show a couple weeks ago, so I’m in major musical mode rn… Pretty much been listening to the soundtrack nonstop since seeing it😂
I love the songs y’all chose for your characters! 🙂
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 2 months ago
Arabella
Her blood ran cold. This…Vulture, had brought a feeling of dread and terror to the group. Vulkasin and Zlatan looked…angry and even lost. As if reminded of something long past.
Or perhaps not even that long ago…
Either way, she didn’t like the way their fists were clenched and their jaws set at this Ocran’s…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 2 months ago
@emilysf @godlyfantasy12 @elishavet-pidyon
I’m sorry y’all. I’ll try to get something more submitted tonight, but if I can it will be way late so don’t wait for me. In fact I don’t know if I’ll have much free time for a bit; this week is already cramped.
*Sigh*
Vulkasin
Just at the name Viktor’s face blanched, jaw clenched. His hand trembled…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 2 months ago
@idk-who-to-tag-now-cuz-she’s-all-alone 🤣 imma tag ma friends cuz it might relate to my charries later or somethin lol
@emilysf @elishavet-pidyon @koshka
Corvina
The girl…
Zoe.
She was gone now. But Corvina could still hear her howls, desperately wailing through the corridors. They grew fainter and fainter, but they never went too far…[Read more]
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