Jaybird

@freedomwriter76

IKR!? 😡😥 There are reasons I call her “Evil Lady”

Oh definitely.

*hugs Joshua and Ev tight* 😭❤️

*joins you in the group hug* *Ev tries to escape but I make him stay*

IKR!? Now…will it happen??? Not entirely sure…but it might…and I may know how it happens

0_o

Uh-oh…

…

Does someone die??? 😮

Thanks! ❤️

Yw!! 😄
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@whalekeeper

The scene was really natural. Great job!! 😄

It also got me really curious about your worldbuilding and plot! 😏

Btw, I really like your writing style. It kinda reminds me of Andrew Peterson’s, like how you use metaphors and similes that have never been used before to describe things. I really like it! (Don’t worry though, your sty…[Read more]

@loopylin @godlyfantasy12 @acancello @sarafini @orielle21 @joy-calle @whalekeeper @freedomwriter76

Ok, ok, ok. I have to add in another couple. These two are from my WIP, but I’m going to pretend that they’ve known each other for the length of the trilogy. (Instead of where I’m at now, cuz that’s not long at all)

Skylar: What is this place? *…[Read more]

I HAVE REACHED 1000 POSTS!!!!! 🎉😆

*clears throat* *murmurs* Maybe because I sometimes spend too much time on here…. 🤣

@freedomwriter76

Somehow I missed your reply a while back… oops! XD

Nope, not bad at all…he may even get a redemption arc. 🤐

*gasp* Yes please!!! That would be awesome!!

And lol, no…but pretty close XD

Felix/Hans get their own book, The Boys do too, as does Himmler, and also Adolphus, so basically, everyone except Frida, Dietrich, Annal…

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@freedomwriter76

Agghhh!! That scene! Frida is terrible!! 😠

Poor Joshua. 😢 It’s okay buddy, Ev can relate. 😭

@euodia-vision

Geez I missed a lot being gone for two days…

I know!! I was gone for a few days about a week ago and when I got there…whew I had a lot to catch up on 😅

AHHHHH! That was SO good girlllll! AH SWEET DYLAN AND POOR ASHER!😭

AWW THANK YOU SO MUCH!!!! AHH IKR?!? My sweet traumatized boys 😭😭😭

@loopylin

Yeah, I’m good with it too!! Those sweet sisters need each other!

@godlyfantasy12 @freedomwriter76

Okay, here it is! Sorry it took a while 😅

Vance 

I muttered, “Perhaps my new companions are better equipped to deal with stubborn children.” I gripped Bren’s shirt, holding him so he couldn’t try to run again.

He whimpered, leaning away from me.

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@godlyfantasy12

Oh okay! 🙂

@freedomwriter76 ❤️❤️❤️ @godlyfantasy12 Uh, I don’t know if i have time, I’m about to go to a church activity, but i’ll try to do it sometime tonight! Is it okay if I do a short time skip to where they’re planning? And also, do you want to bring your villain/antagonist (I can’t remember his name 😭) into this group…

@joy-calle

Characters with opposite personalities are so fun to write!!

Those two sound awesome! 😄

@acancello

Cool idea!!

I’ll have to hop on here later and post something. 😀

@kyronthearcanin

I recently had to do a string-along story in school. Basically, the title is one word, then from there the sentences grow in length.

I just did one too!! Mine was so much shorter. XD It’s impressive that you made it that long! Great job!! 😄

@freedomwriter76

Aww, well, you like it, and that’s the most important thing!!!! 😃😁❤️😊

Definitely! 😊

I forgot Watership Down by Richard Adams

(Bigwig!!! 😁)

@joy-calle If you don’t mind, which of your stories are you editing, and what do you mean by ashamed? (You think the writing is just bad, you truly feel embarrassed about the story/plot, or you feel sick/depressed when you try to edit?)

@loopylin

*The Great Spy of Gully falls from the ceiling and into the limelight*

GSG: I have arrived, and am ready for my questions!

Mike: Who are you, and how did you get in here?

GSG: Countless creature have asked me those exact questions! What do I usually answer? . . . Nothing!

Mike: Um, okay? Then why did you come?

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@freedomwriter76 @mineralizdwritings

Matthew

Jared’s brow furrowed and a forlorn expression covered his face.

He looked…lonely.

So lonely.

And I knew exactly how that felt.

Jared wrapped his arms around himself, trying to protect his body against the chill. “I-I don’t have any friends.”

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@euodia-vision

I am SO, SOO sorry it took me so long to respond!! My responce got deleted idk how many times and I ended up yelling at the computer “Wait…Error?! Of COURSE I wanted to do that! Why would I have pressed submit if I didn’t?!” XD

But, again, I’m so sorry! 😭😭 I hope you’ve been doing well!

HIIIII! *jumps up and down with…

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@freedomwriter76

I’m so glad he gets redeemed, but…but…

😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭

AHHH I know right!!!! 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭

(i understand though. XD i have to do it a lot to charries, and everyone knows it 😂😂😂)

XDXD Haha, yeah. Sometimes it just has to happen, for the other characters to benefit from it (or not benefit, depends on the story 😂😭😭)

Aww, girl,…

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