Jaybird

@booksandbeakers

Hey!! Welcome to Kingdom Pen! I’m Esther: a volleyball-playing, violin-squeaking, dog-obsessed, young adult fiction-writing, God-loving, amateur writer! *whew*

I like to dabble in a little bit of everything, concerning writing: my WIP is dystopian, I have a set-aside-for-a-long-time fantasy duology, I have a his-fic idea, and I…[Read more]

@mineralizedwritings @godlyfantasy12 @lightoverdarkness6 @felicity

As of now, the last chapter I’ve posted is all I have written. I promise one or two new chapters within the first week of the new year!

Oh, and the last part at the end of the chapter where Ami remembers that they forgot Artemis… well… pretend that never happened. Let’s just pr…[Read more]

@booksandbeakers

So I think I get what you’re saying. 😅

Are you asking what happens to the people inside The Orb, or outside The Orb?

@godlyfantasy12

*blinks*

Woah. That playlist is looooong!!

🤣

That’s awesome!!!!

Santa Baby- Lindsey Stirling

You listen to Lindsey Stirling!!! Girl, I looove her music!! (Even tho I’ve only heard her Christmas songs XD)

@freedomwriter76

Gratitude by Brandon Lake (Chosen Performance Version)

*gasp* You’ve watched the Chosen?!?! Our famil…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

Wilkins

He had heard the man’s voice and he knew, just knew, he was safe. His friend gripped his arm tighter, as if reading his thoughts. Daithí shot him a look which clearly translated to I know you’re not a fool, so don’t act like one. Wilkins sighed and smoothed his axe handle. Then he shrugged and stepped into the li…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

I think I’ll go with Ezekiel, as I’m still figuring out how to write Wilkins’ personality.

And Dáithí calling Wilkins a lad… He’s only a few years older than him.

Daithí

The shadows were lightening with the introduction of more window slits. He smiled at the sunshine as if the light weren’t stealing away his cover. No ma…[Read more]

@koshka

That sounds wild. XD

Oh, it was XD! It was actually kind of fun, once I got the hang of driving away from the doggies. XD

@loopylin

You’re splitting up the twins?! *Horrified gasp*

Although, I can’t really say anything here. That is a huge plot point for my first book.

@lightoverdarkness6

That sounds wild. XD

@loopylin

A bulldog? Lol, that sounds like an interesting story

Yes! A huge american bulldog. (Or maybe it was a pit bull.) Tbh, it was kinda fun. At one point, I had that huge dog running after me, and then there were THREE OTHER little dogs chasing me!! As long as the four wheeler is faster than the dogs, I’m okay XD.

@freedomwriter76

Would you mind/like it if Wilkins and Dáithí run into one/a group of your charies?

I was thinking maybe Ezekiel or Fin’s group, if it wasn’t a problem (although the group is pretty large, so Ezekiel may be better?).

@godlyfantasy12 @loopylin @mineralizedwritings

Okay, y’all! After washing a huge amount of dishes and being chased by a huge bulldog on my fourwheeler while taking some warm gloves to my dad and little brother (XD) I can finally RP!!

Matthew

Paxton glanced over at Luna, who Lyla was talking to, as if for permission to speak. She nodded.

Then…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

Yeah! I love my pair already! XD Ooh, cool! A phone and character workbook are both really cool! 😀

Lol, yeah, they sound cool! Yeah, I was so excited.

Riker’s wife’s name is Iris, yes! But don’t change the name! Plenty of us here on KP have characters that have the same name! 🙂

Okay! Thank you!! 😀

You are sooo welcome! 😀 I know,…

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@freedomwriter76

Ooh, cool! Glad to hear you had a great Christmas!!! I got clothes, mostly, which are always appreciated, and notebooks and pencils and the black combat boots I wanted!!! 😀 😉

Awesome!! Ooh, combat boots are cool! I got my first phone!! And a character workbook!

They do look pretty good…especially the guys…XD

XDXD

I’m glad they…

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@arien

Why did I start writing? Let me think…I don’t know. I grew up in and around books, and I guess it just naturally transferred to writing them. My siblings and I made up stories and histories for our made up play world’s, and we always intended to write them down.

Why am I still writing? I love words; how they work, how they change, and…[Read more]

@orielle21

Fun story! I liked your Bensnickle (Or however his name is spelled). Writing wise there aren’t very many things I’d tweak.

But um, do you want critique on the history side of things?

Wilkins

A headache. He sat up and rubbed his eyes, waiting for the pain to subside.

The room around him looked long deserted. Half a musty tapestry dangled from the wall, it’s other half lying forlorn on the stone floor. He shivered and wrapped his arms around his knees. Where am I? 

A castle. The shivers up his spine muntiplied down his arms,…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

Um wow. I can definitely see the favorite. XD

I found one new character song over Christmas break. For Daithí. (‘Justice Calls’ from Jonah by Sight and Sound.)

And a few instrumentals, but do those count?

@godlyfantasy12

Arabella has Auld Lang Syne? Is that the real song?

*Slowly faints*

Daithí MacLassair: about 18-19 years old, 6′ but lightly built. A red fox in the book, Daithí has Flame red hair that comes down partially over his ears but not in his light hazel eyes that miss nothing and tell less. Foxish features. He’s the nephew of a Lasairin Clansman, and has devoted his life, and death, to the cause as a spy and assassin. H…[Read more]

Wilkins OLaith: about 16 years old. Is a gray fox in the book, a boy here. About 5’6″, and of a slight but strong build. Has tousled grayish-brownish-blonde hair cut a bit raggedly but shorter than Daithí’s. Dark eyebrows and lashes make his misty gray eyes stand out all the more. He’s a resistance fighter, yet with a gentle voice and a courteous…[Read more]