Jaybird

@esther-c

Ahh GIRL!!! Oh my goodness I LOVE IT!!!! I needed to hear (read??) that :). I don’t think that it’s too short, but, by all means, if you want to, I’d love to see the last line!!

@whalekeeper

To help ya out a bit, I know that @gracie-j @joy-calle @r-m-archer and @rachel-leitch all have. Can’t think of anybody else right now. 🙂

@mineralizedwritings

It felt a little rushed how everything happened, but I mean it is only a first draft. In the scene with Ami and Ev talking through the hole in the wall, Idk what you are planning to do with that, but it was really predictable. As soon as there was a hole in the wall, I knew where it was going 😉. I know the whole thing with…

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@joy-calle

That’s awesome! I actually have soli deo gloria as part of my dedication for Where Faith Remains. (The book is dedicated to God since it’s my first book, and I knew from the moment I started writing it that I wanted my first book to be solely His.)

So cool!!

@sarafini

Ok, thx!

I have yet to figure out my style. I’ve been trying to read articles on style and such but haven’t written enough to figure mine out yet. I know that I do much better writing in 1st person instead of third person but that’s as far as I’ve gotten.

Yeah. In all honesty, I still need to figure out my style as well. Like, my olde…[Read more]

@loopylin @folith-feolin @elanor and @lewilliams (If perhaps inspiration has indeed struck it’s blow . . . but hopefully it wasn’t too hard upon the pate.) Also, I believe one of our newcomers mentioned that they wrote poetry (Severed rose heads? 😋) @soleilnaia

@princesachronicle22 @godlyfantasy12 @any-one-else

Dylan

The young man moaned, grimacing.

I frowned and touched his shoulder again. “Hey…”

He jerked slightly at my touch, then tried to push himself up from the floor. He lost any strength that he had and, before I could catch him, face-planted back into the floor .

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Happy weekend! I hope that y’all who had church today had an awesome time!
Just a quick reminder, there are only 6 hours left in the Great Word Winding Tournament. I have had uno submission (Thank you @felicity !), so if nobody else sends anything in, I suppose I already know who wins 😋.
Hope y’all have a great rest of your day!

@godlyfantasy12

Ah yeah maybe!!

@esther-c

Ooh interesting!

@mineralizedwritings

Thank you for the link of the video!! I’ll check it out 🙂

@godlyfantasy12 @lightoverdarkness6 @freedomwriter76 @mineralizedwritings @princesachronicle22 @keilah-h @whalekeeper @anyone-else

Here are some random writing prompts that I found: (I’ll post a few more in a minute)

@whalekeeper

Of course!!

@whalekeeper

Girl name ideas:

Liliana(h), Bethany, Georgia, Ginny, Christiana, Ginger, Sofia, Leanna, Tiffany, Irena (or e instead of a)

Boy name ideas:

Roger, Nathaniel, Aiden, Daniel, Wailen (Or it could be spelled Waylen. I’m not entirely sure on the actual spelling. XD), Camden, Kempton (not sure on the spelling of this one either XD), Ja…[Read more]

@booksbyjayna

All that was super helpful!! Thanks so much!! 🙂 🙂

@theloonyone

That’s a great idea! I’ll have to try that!! Thx!

@elishavet-pidyon

I’ve seen it work and will definitely be personally implementing it as much as I can.

(After all, it’s another excuse to read Prince Caspian again…)…

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@godlyfantasy12 @gwyndalf-the-wise @princesachronicle22

Skyler

“Of course we can be friends!” Sky said to the girl who had similar hair to hers. “I’m Skyler. Nice to meet you, Laylil!” Sky peeked over her shoulder at a young man who did seem too pleased that Laylil was over here. “Protective older brother?” She asked, motioning to the man.

Layl…[Read more]

@loopylin

Ellie: Got sucked into a black hole once.

Eddie: Oh, yeah! And then we found ourselves back in our ship a week earlier. Everything was how we remembered it, except all the furniture in our rooms was rearranged. I think we got teleported to another dimension.

Ellie: Or the food in our dinner was expired and we just got food poisoning…

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@godlyfantasy12

btw is Ev’s little brother still there? Along with Ami’s brothers? I haven’t heard from them so I wasn’t sure if they were still there (I might’ve missed something lol)

Yep! 👍 I just kind of… um… forgot… to mention them. Also, at this point, they are in their own prison cells, so I want it to be solely focused on them and their…[Read more]

@esther-c

Ikr? Lol

Villains are hard. Because it’s difficult to create their motive and personality without making it cliche.

Yesss!!! It so is. I’ve been reading a lot of articles about writing one tho, so hopefully I’m improving. 🙂