Jaybird

What if he puts a flower in her hair? What if one of the boys finds a snail or frog and wants to take it home?

@freed_and_redeemed

Awwww, I’ve been so wanting a sweet scene for poor Leon. He’s been through so much.

A walk would be sweet. What about Leon and his daughter picking flowers? The boys could find an earthworm to tantalize their sister with, which could transition into memories of teasing Aadelheide if you wanted (I don’t know if he did, it just…[Read more]

@koshka

Sooooooooo I know that you and @elishavet-pidyon (and @smiley) are all Leon fans….

so I have a question.

I’m currently working on Book #2 (aka Broken Shackles) of my Broken and Redeemed trilogy (Leon/Riker’s standalone trilogy😂) and I’m trying to figure out what to do next.

I want to show a scene of Leon being playful with…[Read more]

@esther-c I’m sorry I forgot about our group🫠

Glad you found a new group for Ev and Adrian to hang out with lol…I think they’ll have a lot of fun on the way😆

@theducktator

Leon is an amazing person for sure! <3 Yesssss, his stubbornness is so much fun😂 bahaha, I’m glad you liked that, bc I changed it from the original where he seemed more like he was just taking all of it without complaint…I feel like him being annoyed at getting beaten up is a lot more fun XD

@godlyfantasy12 Wow…that’s such a hard but important thing to show in your writing

idk what to say right now…maybe an idea will come to me eventually XD

@esther-c

Fin

Fin followed both Easton and Hallie into the classroom. He set down his backpack and offered the teacher a smile. “Good afternoon, Miss.”

“You’re late.”

“I apologize…I wasn’t quite expecting the school to be so…far away? I’m sorry.”

“Well,” she released a deep sigh, visibly exhausted, “at least you’re here…”

Fin smiled…[Read more]

Are you struggling with the plotting itself? or missing scenes?

If you have a vague idea for a scene, you have the base for that scene. How would you describe the event? What emotions are the characters going through? Where is the setting? How did the characters get there? Who all is there? Which ideas could happen first? Are some of these ideas…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

I don’t know exactly how to help, but I’ll try. Do you want scene ideas, or a workable method to create scenes, or something else?

Here’s a list of scenes I would kinda like to see someday. Discard if not helpful or unfitting.

• Aravember chasing a butterfly.
• Ara with a splinter getting helped by November (or some other swap…

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@princesachronicle22

It does seem to be acting strange, but I can’t tell why. What does it look like on your end?

@princesachronicle22 @keilah-h

Yeah, I think I will need a description (: I’m assuming you’ll need one for my charries as well?

Everton

“I hate this place.”

“Ever—”

“Can’t we just break through one of these—” he pounded a fist against the glass, “—windows?”

“Um, no. Take a breather, bro.”

Ev tried to keep his deep breath as silent as possib…[Read more]

@beth-torres Messed up your tag 👆

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beth-torres

Sorry I took so long to RP again!!

Oh and quick question, how is Navin pronounced?

Fynn 

“Just down this way.” Fynn led the way with long strides, but slowed down when Navin didn’t walk as fast. They fell into an awkward silence that Fynn racked his brain for a way to break. “So, you going to the dance tomorrow…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12 Oh wow, that’s a pretty big thing to portray. And has gotten my brain on a rabbit trail with Moses and his siblings. Some people don’t realize that when they are critical of God’s minister they are undermining of God’s authority, just like Mirriam and Aaron over Moses’s non-Hebrew wife. As Mirriam learned, that’s not a good place…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

Does he know what he will be doing is spying? Or does he think he’s supposed to watch out for Ara to keep her safe or something?

In other words, if he thinks the information being passed to his father will be for Ara’s benefit, why? Does he think that Ara could be unknowingly endangering herself, and that the King wants his…[Read more]

@freed_and_redeemed

I was wondering if they had an accent…

Amanda has an east Texas accent/drawl. So how I normally speak. XD

Jayson is from French speaking Canada, but has very little accent due to living to the school and living with the Katz’s since he was 7.

Raphael speaks English with a central American accent, Ashkenazic Yiddish, and…[Read more]

Let’s hope I’m not double posting this…

You know others know you’re a writer, when your dad says in front of the whole church “when my girls hear the word ‘character’, they instantly come up with things like backstory and plot.”

And when you added “character arc, weapon choice, world building” under your breath, you know it’s true.

Did Wyoh just…*blinks*

@godlyfantasy12 hmmmm quite the predicament.

I do have a question: Does November genuinly believe that his father really is a good person?

Bc if so, I think him thinking that it will help the family and everything he does for his father is innocent is a great way to handle the situation. Plus, it can help show how later (like in later books…[Read more]

You know you’re a writer when you start acting out dialogue in the middle of the day, making everyone else question your sanity

You know you’re a writer when you create so many book ideas even when you know you’ll never be able to write all of them