Elishavet Elroi

@freedomwriter76

Ugh! I literally never responded!! I know this is a bad habit of mine; to forget I have yet to respond to a conversation, so if I do this again, you know why.

I beg pardon.

Allegories can be wonderful, powerful works! I love them, especially Narnia. You need to read the rest!!!!

Yeah, my books are my main focus for writing,…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

And you can join right now through to whenever! Just pick a group and bring in your charrie to meet the rest!

@freedomwriter76

You can have as many characters as you want. A quick briefing of the rules can be found on the first page, but mostly it’s really laid back. What character (s) need improvement the most? Who is hard to write? Who is actually later in the series, but you’re dying to write about? 😉

I would recommend keeping the number somewhat…[Read more]

@lydia-s

Ohhhhhh!!!!!

(You can rant if you want. Next to seeing is hearing about it. 😉 )

Jesus was awesome, but not my absolute favorite. I only saw the video though, so I know it was even more spectacular. They did amazing things with the music and scenes!

I’d love to meet some of the actors.

I don’t know which is my favorite, so many vie…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

Thank you!

Hey, when you have characters worth talking about… *Shrug*

Maybe I’ll try to get some scenes of Rúeven’s on here. (And I love his name too! It’s a perfect example of the whole land of Eirtan. And his story. *Sniff* )

By the way, your collages are awesome too! Of the latest you’ve posted, I think I like Williams…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76 @sunny421 @koshka @anyone-else

This one is for a character named Reúven. He becomes my MC’s best friend and is one of my absolute favorite characters. (Yes, he’s that tall fellow in the mantle on that far away ridge. Yes, the one with the bow and near an hundred sheep. And yes, you’re in shooting range. XD )

He’s just so loyal…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

Alrighty then, I will!

*Rubs hands together in anticipation* 😉

Both of those are sooo intricate! I like them muchly.

(Although I am a little confused about who the first one’s, Jamie’s, is about.)

@freedomwriter76 @anyone-else-i-ought-to-tag @you-know-who-you-are

I’m completely and totally interupting, but…

Hi!!!!

I love collages/moodboards, and I’ve had so much fun looking through the boards on here.(which are gorgeous!!!) However, I just realized I may not have ever hopped on this particular thread.

Which is a mite awkward, since…[Read more]

@sunny421

*Comes flying in through the window*

It’s YOU!!!!!! You’re here!!!!

*Rains hugs and Oreos*

Honestly though, at first I didn’t recognize you. It took reading through your posts and seeing Adventures in Odyssey and Jonathan Park to connect the dots. XD (then I felt a little silly, because of course your user name is Sunny.)

Welcome…[Read more]

@koshka

Ooooy! It’s Mikkel!!!!

That’s awesome! I love it. Especially the wording.

I can hardly wait to read the rest!!!

@freedomwriter76

Wow. Where did you find that picture?! It’s a good one in it’s own right, and I’d have to agree that it resembles Riker perfectly.

From the names of those songs, they would work very well!

@godlyfantasy12 @koshka @joy-caroline

@anyone-else-that-is-interested.

Okay, so I have started the rough draft for the first book in my Kingdom of Shadows series. (The one with Alwin and the rest) I do need help on the editing, but since it’s rough draft I’d just mostly like to hear all y’all’s thoughts on it.

By the way, untill I wrote it, I’d…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

RIKER!!!!!

That’s awesome. And it makes so much sense. Having his father come from an abusive background is perfect. It will be soooo beautiful to see play out!

*On edge of seat*

(By the way, have you ever read To Love a Broken Winged Angel? by LaJoyce Martin? It doesn’t have anything to do with your setting, except for the…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

Ok, so I only just got on here after a week, and here is this!!! Oh, I love these characters!

And the history nerd inside me is about to run up the walls.

Riker…. Leon…. Y’all both need a good hug. And God. Wow.

By the way, I love that Riker is a former SS. I’m so, so, SO glad Leon forgives him- for both their sakes I am…[Read more]

Oh, and yours are very good. You did so well making just a few words tell so much.

@starshiness

Oh yes! I do love seeing how much can be related in just a few words. It’s one thing that make poetry such a fun challenge.

(The baby shoes story is heartbreaking.)

I think some of my favorites are from the Bible (Like “God shall provide himself a sacrifice”. Can I get an amen?), but of course I didn’t write them.

I’ll have to get…[Read more]

@starshiness

Most fascinating! You display a very interesting thought.

AND the character it Describes is totally a favorite kind with me.

Good job!

*Looks back over it*

Woa! I just caught the last sentence. Ok, that’s neat.

As for critiques, I would say that the paragraph where you go into authenticity doesn’t quite fit the same flow as the…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12 (Wow! The world grows smaller every day. It was soooo good. I hope they were exceedingly blessed!) @emilysf @koshka

Finally, here it is!!

Viktor

The rest of the group wasn’t following. Or at least, not quickly, and not completely. Viktor gritted his teeth and darted a glance behind him.

He saw a nightmare.

His nightmare all…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

What?! Really?!

The one at Lufkin?

I don’t know if I can ask for names, but that’s awesome.

I had a response written, but it just got obliterated, so I shall to rewrite it in the next few minutes.