Elishavet Elroi

@hullofellowhumans

Really? That’s awesome! Like ice cream with berry cobbler awesome!

What was the skit about, if I may ask? My siblings and I are doing a time traveling Children’s Church program about different kids in the bible. (We call it Purpose Kids.) I’m the mad scientist that created the Time and Space Quantum Warping Device, and we’ve…[Read more]

@hullofellowhumans

I think it’s most interesting! I’ve never read dystopian before, (I know, strange, right? 😉 ) But your idea definitely holds quite the potential.

I love the idea of someone surrounded by lies finding truth in God’s Word, and although I’m not sure what you mean by the rebellion being unsuccessful, it’s very intriguing. Okay,…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12 @koshka

Viktor

Did the Dorwinian women fight? Viktor frowned and glanced over at Alyona. She shook her head.

“I don’t know.” Zlatan interjected. “Zey could be some villians of zis place.”

They could be anybody.

“I’ve never heard of any lady guards.” Viktor shrugged.

A door creaked open not ten feet away from them. Viktor s…[Read more]

@hullofellowhumans

Greetings! (Since I don’t think we’ve met, I’m called Elishavet around here, and I write mostly realistic medieval fantasy but also poetry, children’s church material (coauthored with siblings), and the random fanfic. I love to read a whole spectrum, however, and have been known to spend far too long with my nose in…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12 @koshka

Viktor

More soldiers?

They were like a lost sheep surrounded by hunting jackals.

Or walls of flames.

And dogs.

Viktor shook his head.

He didn’t know what they meant by Nyx hearing anything, but apparently the tiny fox was incredibly intelligent.

“Do you know what they were singing?” Viktor rubbed the back of his…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

Ah, yes. That would make sense.

Poor Nyx! XD

So… Would he and Alyona get stuck together? Or Alyona and Lynn?

Awwwww. ❤️ That would be an honor. 😉

Oh, the dear little fuzz ball.

@godlyfantasy12

Absolutely! I’d actually love to separate the siblings again, since I’m playing with it being a huge plot point in my book.

So… Maybe Alyona gets caught?

And Viktor is with the group still?

And they get to see another part of him. XD

This would also add pressure to find Ocran before…..?

But I don’t know. What do y’all think?

@godlyfantasy12

Sounds good!

@godlyfantasy12

I think we should meet up with the others. If the numbers are too much at the moment, Alyona and Viktor can get separated from the group and rejoin before the Ocran Battle.

But I do want them all to meet @freedomwriter76 ‘s and @koshka ‘s characters.

This is fantabulous!

By the way, the far building Viktor keeps referring to…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12 @koshka

XD Lynn is great; I love her. XD

Viktor

“Hay, Vick.”

What had that blonde girl called him? Because he had to assume she meant him.

Not that he minded nicknames, but he just liked to know to whom a sentence was directed. And why Vick? He’d been called many names in his life, Little Screamer, Ami, Young Mynclais, and the…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

Yeah, I understand that. I may be doing the same thing, perhaps even killing a MC, the father of another MC. And maybe another MC’s best friend.

*Weeps*

AND THEY’RE MY FAVORITE CHARACTERS!!

But that is a nice(ish) way to do it. I love Riker writing Leon’s son.

If the best friend character does, he goes in his sleep/coma, but…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12 @koshka

Hi!!! Being a bit late is fine. Or at least I hope so, since I’ve been know to be a little tardy at my responses. 😉

Viktor

The world had grown soft with the night. Seas of stars rolled over head, and tender leaves beneath. Viktor tipped back his head and let the song of the heavens fill his soul.

“Praise the Lord of…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

WHAT!? HOW COULD YOU?

*SOB*

but that’s good. Very good.

*Sniffle*

@freedomwriter76

Good job! Still Good sounds highly interesting – or looks it, since this is a collage.;)

Oof. I’m guessing it’s set in Vietnam, and is about God’s faithfulness and goodness. Am I right?

By the way, is Alan pronounced with a long ‘a’ or a short one? I was thinking a short one, but then I noticed it only had one ‘l’.

@freedomwriter76

You’re welcome! (Exactly!)

It’s all right. I am not much nicer to mine. 😉 All our characters need hugs. but still… 

Why are we so mean to them!?

*Sniffle*

*Wink*

Yes you do! And when/if you do read it, you need to tell me so we can compare favorites/least favorites. 🙂 I can tell you now that Brother Enemy is my fa…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

Okay, so…

I just read those last few scenes for Riker and Leon. I know that’s late, but I actually thought I had already read them. Then I found myself wondering, “When did Leon put Riker at knife point?”

Lo and behold!

First of all, I really liked them. And that feels like an understatement considering that I had to stop in…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

Yayyy! I’m so glad you like it! It’s definitely both my favorite and my least favorite part of the tale.

Ugh, yes! XD You are so cruel!

Keep it up! XD

But it’s not like we really enjoy killing off these characters; it’s just that we love the story element to it and how these deaths build character. And yes, realistic…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

Thank you! I do too, although like I said, I didn’t originally think of Winifrith as having flame red and midnight black, it really does fit. Her biggest theme is faithfulness in trial.

I can’t say that I recognize many of the songs on your list, but judging from the titles, they fit PERFECTLY! (I do recognize some of the…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76 @godlyfantasy12 @koshka @anyone-else @sunny421

Hello! I have returned! (After lurking about here silently enjoying everyone’s spoilers) I love them all, especially November and Corvina’s.

Now I mean to tell mine own.

*Deep breath*

OKAY Y’ALL, I HAVE TO TELL THIS!!

VIKTOR AND THE SIBLINGS HAVE A FIRST COUSIN!!! For now he will…[Read more]