Elfwing

@rae cute!

oh and what’d with the warning about swiss cheese?

ooh, and my mom loves The Greatest Showman. Sometimes we put it on just to listen to the music when my dad and brother aren’t at home.

@vinagirl cool!! I’ve got some pictures of my Minecraft builds if you’d like to see them.

@beth-torres ok!

@esther-c

Tech

“I could find you a girl….” Ev teased.

Tech’s scales prickled in embarrassment. Ev noticed. “I’m kidding!” he reassured him. “I’ll leave you to it. Oh, and it looks like we’ve reached the food court. What do you want to eat? I’ll pay for it.”

Tech sniffed the air.

Grease.

Chicken.

Fish.

Potato.

Some other things he didn’t…[Read more]

@scoutfinch180 ok not gonna lie, Deerfoot is not a bad name. (It sounds like a warrior cats name, and I love those…heheheh)

@lydibug How do I join???

Sounds fun!

@everyone Can someone remind me where we were? I wanted to write an RP but was kinda confused on what to do.

@savannah_grace2009 missed a letter on your tag

So yeah, I flippin’ love it

@freedomwriter76 whoa…..Western Bucky looks almost as awesome as the Western Bad Batch characters I found fan art of once (Star Wars tv show, the one I “borrowed” Crosshair and his brothers from). I could show you them if you’d like……

Now I just wanna make a Star Wars x Marvel AU with all of the charries.

@mineralizedwritings yeah I…[Read more]

@vinagirl Hi!! I’m Keilah. I’m homeschooled too! (a lot of people on here seem to be).

A few questions!!

• Written any fan fictions? That’s virtually all I write these days lol. I recently found out video game fanfic was a thing.
• Speaking of video games, do you play any or is that not your thing?
• Favorite mythical animal? (Technically what…

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@savanna_grace2009 That’s just the worst. Who cares about sports? You go to school to READ BOOKS. And maybe listen to a teacher droning (jk, some teachers are really cool)

I’ll be praying for you.

@rae You too. Loneliness is something I can’t say I’ve ever truly experienced, but the very concept is horrible.

@Rae

also, unless you have a problem with sharing what later happens in your story, I don’t mind hearing spoilers to understand the grander scope of your story if you need help with it. 🙂

@Rae

Also, keep in mind that Forgiveness is letting go of the right to avenge, Reconciliation is repairing the relationship.

I don’t know if you’ve watched/seen Avatar the Last Airbender, but if you have, there’s a great example in that show if you have.

@Rae

This is a great Villain! he’s got a solid personality, values, and reasons why he does what he does. I think I know who Alpha is though😉😉! My one caution is not to let him off too easy for what he did, even if it was out of revenge, and why did his race get killed off in the first place? did they have a bad reputation?

@rae

Ok so I totally gave you my thoughts on ch 2, but they didn’t post 😭! I’ll try again lol, but it might take me a while.

It does! I’m also asking these questions to help you flesh out your world a bit more, since I know having someone to bounce off of can help a lot, and so you can get some ideas for where to take the story if you’re…[Read more]

@thearcaneaxiom ahh that makes sense, them all being connected on the fourth dimension.

You’re welcome!

Also, depending on his original language’s use of feminine and masculine pronouns, he might associate sexes to certain objects, like referring to a speeder as a she maybe?

@rae

I’m sorry to hear you’re under the weather! would you like me to give you  my critique on this?

Also, with the whole speedering versus speedeering, you could also try speed-deering or something along those lines, as if Nahim struggles with ‘ur’ sounds, changing them to ‘ear’. where else does his accent show? Does wording sound off? how…[Read more]