Denali Christianson

@freedomwriter76 @koshka @elishavet-pidyon @keilah-h

Jocelyn

As soon as Cécile had spoken, Jocelyn knew the words rang true.

No wonder Dawson became so tense…

Jocelyn’s fists clenched. Hurting someone just because you could…just because they were under your command…

It was…just so wrong.

Like so many other things she’d seen…

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@starofthenorth

Everyone else basically said exactly what I was going to, so here’s a condensed form of my two cents:

I would make it about Briana, not girls. So say something like “Why am I not taking a watch?”, just to remove the focus at the beginning. I would also revise the part about being pretty. Maybe put inphasis on ‘I’m your king,’…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76 @godlyfantasy12

Cécile 

The moment these two had appeared the rest of the group went nearly rigid. As soon as the man had started speaking, she almost had to hold Annia back. The girl’s hands were held at her waist in tight fists, showing her calloused knuckles.

“Annia, no.” Cécile whispered in her ear. “Breaking his nose wo…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon @keilah-h @godlyfantasy12

So um…who’s turn is it?

@starofthenorth

Great topic!

I am thankful both for the opportunity to spend time with extended family, and for toothpaste. I mean, seriously, this world would be a much grosser place without it.

@wilder-w yea just got the holidays going on lol!

@arien

Well, I am currently working on a trilogy which I don’t have a title for. The first two books are set in an early medievalish time, and the last one is World War/modern. Oh, and all the characters are animals, a little like The Green Ember.

Hearts of Gold 1) [early medievalish] Divided in a kingdom of shattered truth, paths are twisting…

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@starofthenorth

Wow. I wish I did.

1. Ah yes, of course more questions. =)Good choice! I’m surprised by the number of those who pick the dragon ride. I’d like an Akhal-Teke, and I’d probably name it Sar.

3. Poor Christopher!

4. Oh ouch. I had braces a few years ago, and I missed gummies so much. =|

@felicity

Just curious, what made you want to learn Russian?

Well, I don’t really know when the interest started, certainly not heritage as most of my family is Scotch-Irish, but I have wanted to go help the churches over there since I was little. I’ve been learning Russian for a few years, but I’m still far, far from fluent.

Was learning the C…

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@arien

Welcome to the kingdom! I’m Koshka, or that’s what I am around here. Here, and pretty much everywhere else, I write non-magical medieval-fantasy andthe random poem among other things. A lot of other things.

I have read and enjoyed LotR, but I don’t know if I exactly qualify as a fan (at least compared to those I would definitely say are…[Read more]

@starofthenorth

Welcome to the Kingdom, oh slinky shadower! I am Koshka, a writer of non-magical medieval-fantasy and/or other fiction, poetry randomly and far between, and apparently essays (doesn’t one just love college paperwork?!).

I skimmed through the former posts and greetings and saw you’re learning Scottish Gaelic. Haló! It is good to f…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

HUZZAH!!! It sounds amazing, especially for a first draft. I can’t wait to see what happens next, and yes I will probably be stalking this page to see if you post anything new. =)

@felicity

AGH!!! I never sent in my reply!

Sure! I love hearing other authors ramble about their WIPs. And war is a difficult thing to write right, without it being in real life. For some reason it ended up in my writing in three different forms. *Sigh*

Yes! Most people where I’m from thinks they sound harsh, which just means they haven’t…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76 AAAND I just read where it said they all introduced themselves…

i gotta start reading these things more carefully XD

If Ara finds out FRIDA HURT PAXTON….

it’s also on like donkey Kong.

listen both ma girls just gonna be like “we got this boys XD”

@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon also let’s pretend we’ve all been introduced XD XD XD introductions are a pain sometimes tbh. For me anyway.

Jocelyn

Dawson’s face had turned white as Cecile’s from back home…

Which was saying something considering…well, the girl practically looked like a ghost.

Jocelyn’s brows furrowed, lips pulling thin.…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76 OH GOSH… gurl. I am telling u right now…

If Ara finds out he hurt Paxton she will slap him.

but if Jocelyn finds out he whipped Nyx till he was nearly dead…

Im not kidding when I say she might almost kill him.

she can be FEROCIOUS. (She does kill someone in the series unless something chang…

We can start the next day now @freedomwriter76 @wilder-w @elishavet-pidyon @keilah-h

ALSO!

they done made Ara MAAAAD BOIIII