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Koshka replied to the topic The Moonlit Sea and Me in the forum Poetry Critiques 2 years, 10 months ago
Beautiful. The way you used layered meanings of words is making me want to get my violin out and sing. I love the ambiguous speaker who could be just anyone; you, me, a fairy child…it makes my imagination shiver.
I don’t have any real critiques, but as I just ran across this two months after it was posted, I suppose that doesn’t…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
Ahh, good. *Sigh* At least he doesn’t break your reader’s hearts too much.
Also, and this is random, but I just love the name Yosef. It’s one of those names that just feels perfect.
*Contemplates whether these two would help calm anything.*
*Crickets*
The more I think about this, would y’all mind if I did add…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
*a stalker appears from the shadows*
Isaiah lost SON? You Killed Judah? 0_0
And Eleanor…what has your author done to you?
*Glances at characters*
*Contemplates inserting two in this sadly mistreated group*
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Lin replied to the topic hi (again) in the forum Start HERE 2 years, 10 months ago
@scripter-of-kingdoms already at 2 pages aye?
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Lin replied to the topic What is going on anymore in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
@rae Interesting, is this like a sci-fi?
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Lin replied to the topic What is going on anymore in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
@rae thank youuuu
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Lin replied to the topic What is going on anymore in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
@rae Lol, no worries!
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Lin replied to the topic What is going on anymore in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
@rae Also, I guess my favorite color is blue. Haha. Yeah.
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Lin replied to the topic What is going on anymore in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
@rae Hmm, I mean, my drafting title for this book was Past the Waves and the Firefly Lights, I don’t know if that’s any better, but I changed it to Jacobson’s once I established the name for the shop since I thought it might fit a bit better… Not sure though, heh.
I have a lot of writing posted on my website, actually. Which, not gonna lie, n…[Read more]
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Lin replied to the topic What is going on anymore in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
@rae Oop sorry a lot of things happened between when I last replied and now, haha. Let me find it…
Outside there was a guy on a skateboard riding around the half-deserted lot in front of the store. He had blonde hair that was getting in need of a hair cut, and wire glasses perched dangerously on the end of his nose as he attempted a flip.…[Read more]
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Lin replied to the topic What is going on anymore in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
@rae Interesting, interesting. I’ll give you a quick rundown of the couple of works from the past few years which I would more seriously consider publishing, in order that I wrote them.
Jacobson’s – Joey Garcia, working at a small seaside shop called Jacobson’s, is ready for yet another listless summer in his stagnant life. But after a customer…[Read more]
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Lin replied to the topic What is going on anymore in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
@rae Wow, that’s kinda embarassing for me, I was kinda hoping all my posts from those times would be buried, hahaha.
Well, I’m still ploughing through college, trying to think about what I’m gonna do after graduation. I want to write, but I don’t know how realistic that is. I’ve completed a couple novels that I feel are decent quality at this…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic The Lost Island (An Animal Fantasy RolePlay) in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
Wow. It’s been a bit since my last post on here.
The twins.
The island was silent but for the crashing waves and the distant music of wind in trees. Zlatan blinked up at the crescent moon, pale in the star cast sky.
“The lady smiles tonight.” Vulka’s voice was low. His brother rumbled in agreement. A soft murmur of some fluttering night bird…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Igua…the story that's going nowhere in the forum Fantasy 2 years, 10 months ago
*comes out of the shadows where I have lurked in recent days*
Intriguing story. It doesn’t sound like anything I’ve read before, although considering that most of my favorite authors are long dead that may not be worth mentioning.
At any rate, I do not believe I have properly met you either. I am Koshka, a writer of middle-grade animal…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic A Place to share/write whatever we’re working on: Worldbuilding, plot, etc in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
Leon! My darling Leon! Noooooooo…
And Riker! That’s not true! Both of you need so much healing. And prayer. And just, ugh.
Seriously Leon, try coffee. It’s much better for you.
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Koshka replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
(You just made me think, and now I feel old. I’ve been around a lot longer than most of the people regularly on here nowadays. XD)
Are you talking about before Riker turns himself in, or the end of the series?
In the former case, I’d like to ask if Riker would even go to Leon? He’s already asked for forgiveness time and again.…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
*Enters the celebration hall bearing raspberry cheesecake*
HUZZZAHH!!!! CONGRATULATIONS!!! May all your characters applaud you!!!
*Rounds of thunderous applause*
*Vulkasin joins in, grinning*
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Koshka replied to the topic Welp… I’m writing a script… in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 12 months ago
Awesome! Scripts are so much fun to write.
I’ve worked on two plays, one of which was a five minute skit for a homeschool end of year promotion and the other…a full length play…maybe will get finished one of these days.
We wrote the skit in a sort of half pantomime where the only character which actually speaks is the narrator (a…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Sebastian Universe in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years ago
Why thank you! *Bows dramatically*
No one is to blame if he gets called Little Horseradish (With Glitter). *Nods solemnly*
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Koshka replied to the topic The Lost Island (An Animal Fantasy RolePlay) in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years ago
Aww, hedgehogs are adorable.
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