Arien

@lydia-s

Thanks for the awesome topic! I don’t think I’ve actually met you yet, so Hi! 🙂

Ok, so I actually haven’t seen LOTR XD

1. Ring-bearer (this is you): which race would you be? Elf, dwarf, human, or hobbit?

I’d be human.

2. Gandalf: a wise and/or powerful mentor-type character

Jonathon Ledger

3. Aragorn: a character who’s good at s…[Read more]

@orielle21

Oops tagged you wrong ^^

@oreille21

WOW! I thoroughly enjoyed that! Such a great read!

Also, one of the boys has thick brown curls?! 😍😍 That’s just like my OC Tauren!

I’d love to read more!

@arien thank you so much! It makes me more motivated and inspired to write when I know people are liking it 🙂

And ikr? Layson is so sweet with the kids 😭

@loopylin

Oh! I love it! I really like the one of the guy leaning over writing, it’s like such an aesthetic shot! 😍

@booksandbeakers

I can’t remember if it was here or another forum you were asking about critiques…

I’ve seen two different formats for critique sharing here, but that doesn’t mean you can’t do something different.

Some people share a scene from there WIP, about 1-2k words, and ask for specific feedback. Often times this is if you are asking…[Read more]

@felicity @orielle21

Lol, the whole thing of you two not telling us you’re sisters…XD

I do the same thing sometimes XD

At my old youth group, my sister and I didn’t tell new people we were siblings, because idk, why? It’s a bit hard to keep up in person. We each tried to make friends there on our own so it wasn’t super obvious. We had a…[Read more]

@lightoverdarkness6 @loopylin @godlyfantasy12

Tauren and Lesli

“Oh!” Lesli startles, looking down at Tauren on the floor. “Tauren…?”

She kneels down on the floor beside him, lifting his head off the floor.

“W-w-what h-happened?!” Matthew exclaims, eyes wide open.

“Oh my goodness, is he okay?!” Lyla rushes forward and kneels next to Lesl…[Read more]

@keilah-h

Yeah, it’s fun isn’t it? We’ve all gotta start somewhere, and legos/stuffies isn’t a bad place!

@whalekeeper

Thank you!!

@booksandkeepers

Thanks! That scene was one of my favorite to write, and I really felt like it was coming from the heart (I hope you get what I mean, that sounds cringy lol).

@felicity

Thanks for the feedback! It’s hard for me to imagine what you guys remember. He’s showed up a couple of times, but hasn’t had any real…[Read more]

@koshka

That sounds wild. XD

Oh, it was XD! It was actually kind of fun, once I got the hang of driving away from the doggies. XD

@loopylin

A bulldog? Lol, that sounds like an interesting story

Yes! A huge american bulldog. (Or maybe it was a pit bull.) Tbh, it was kinda fun. At one point, I had that huge dog running after me, and then there were THREE OTHER little dogs chasing me!! As long as the four wheeler is faster than the dogs, I’m okay XD.

@godlyfantasy12 @loopylin @mineralizedwritings

Okay, y’all! After washing a huge amount of dishes and being chased by a huge bulldog on my fourwheeler while taking some warm gloves to my dad and little brother (XD) I can finally RP!!

Matthew

Paxton glanced over at Luna, who Lyla was talking to, as if for permission to speak. She nodded.

Then…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

Yeah! I love my pair already! XD Ooh, cool! A phone and character workbook are both really cool! 😀

Lol, yeah, they sound cool! Yeah, I was so excited.

Riker’s wife’s name is Iris, yes! But don’t change the name! Plenty of us here on KP have characters that have the same name! 🙂

Okay! Thank you!! 😀

You are sooo welcome! 😀 I know,…

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@freedomwriter76

Ooh, cool! Glad to hear you had a great Christmas!!! I got clothes, mostly, which are always appreciated, and notebooks and pencils and the black combat boots I wanted!!! 😀 😉

Awesome!! Ooh, combat boots are cool! I got my first phone!! And a character workbook!

They do look pretty good…especially the guys…XD

XDXD

I’m glad they…

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@arien @starofthenorth @theloonyone @loopylin @lightoverdarkness6 @felicity @esther-c @whalekeeper @orielle21

@freedomwriter76 (Might want to go back a bit before reading this section 😁)

@booksandbeakers I post chapters of my WIP (“Afterthoughts”, working title) here if you ever feel like reading! Critiques are welcome, although I’d recommend…[Read more]

@booksandbeakers

Oh! Forgiveness is a great theme! Wow, your WIP does have a lot of loss in it! Sounds interesting though!

Your welcome! 😃

Oh, I love rend collective! They have some great music.

You are tagging correctly, but it won’t work if you have a character next to it. For instance if I tag you @booksandbeakers  , because I put a space…[Read more]

@sarafini

Ack! Sorry I don’t know where your character was! If you need to move her to another group of characters, sometimes that’s whats best when it gets confusing.

@booksandbeakers

Hello! Welcome to Kp!

That’s great that you are home schooled and writing for God! I was home schooled until 2nd grade. I checked out that website link briefly, looks like a cool place!

Oh! I like science sometimes, (not that I really know anything XD)

I’m MineralizedWritings, a dystopian author (Yeah not published in the…[Read more]

@sarafini

It’s cool you want to write an autobiography!

I don’t mean to discourage you from doing what you want to, but it might be better to wait till you’re older and have more to write about. Unless, of course, you have a story that you want to share about what’s happened to you already.

Another thing you could try is writing a story with…[Read more]