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@lucy

If it helps you, go for it!!!  I think it’s a cool idea, maybe she can do both?  Or if not, than mind reading’s pretty awesome by itself!! 😄

@daisy-torres

Girl, that was great!!  Super fun to read, as always! 😉

@writerlexi1216

Thanks, girl!!! ❤

@daisy-torres

OOO, YAY!! let me read it real quick and I’ll give you some feedback…

@writerlexi1216

It’s good!!  I only write about 250 words today, but I finished plotting for one of my POVs, so that’s nice.  Just gotta finish the other POV, then I’m all done with that!  I just made a word-count goal, which is 75k by the end of the year.  Pretty loose, but we’ll see how it goes… 🤞

@g_c_al

Ooo, cool!!  I love the sound of your WIP?  (btw, have you heard of/read Dust by Kara Swanson?  I think it’s a peter pan retelling and the author is actually from another christian writer’s forum called Story Embers, which is pretty cool!)  And yes, agreed, tea is superior. 😄

@trulyyours_karilyn

Haha, yeah, I’m probably dreaming about rocking in heels, lol!!!  Ooo, I love satire!!!

Oh, oops, I meant plotter and pantser, but i wasn’t really paying attention to what I was writing… again, lol!!!

LOL, my dad has a taco shirt like that actually!!  Ditto, tho, tacos are the best.

Yep, caffeine is a writer’s bff.  Wel…[Read more]

@writerlexi1216

You’re welcome! I’m so glad they were helpful! I’m fairly new at giving feedback, so it’s good to know that I’m fairly good at it and I can be helpful rather than just plain critical. It was my pleasure! I loved every second of your lengthy chapters!

@lucy

Here are some names I found, but idk if it’s the aesthetic you wanted:

Taeral, Erendil, Wyrran, Ellisar, Luthais, Zhoron, Revalor, Ayas

And if you don’t like any of those, here’s the link to an awesome name generator that you can use:

https://www.fantasynamegenerators.com/

Hope this helps!!

-Ella

@trulyyours_karilyn

Hey Karilyn!!  I’m Ella, and welcome to KP!!  Nice to meet you!!!  Me and my fam serve grated cheese with our fingers, too, so I totally get it. 😉  My family must have been descended from giants, because my brother, who is a senior this year, is 6’5!! 😲  And I’m 5’7 and in the middle of high school!!  If I didn’t play baske…[Read more]

@daisy-torres

I love this soooo much!!  Tessa and the other characters, the internal monologue, the mirrors, the music, the prophecy… the whole concept is sooo cool!!!  TYSM for sharing!!!!!!!!!

@lucy

Hey!!  It’s me again, and I totally feel you when it comes to finding cool names.  Could you give some more details for the time period the charrie is living in?  Or what the genre is?

@lucy

Heyo!!  I’m Ella, and welcome to KP!!!  (I love your MC’s name, Ravial… SO pretty!!)

Here are some things about me:

1)  I love all sports, but especially basketball and track & field

2)  I’m a dark-chocoholic

3)  I write fantasy, speculative fic, and thriller/suspense

I’m currently writing two WIPs, one is spec-fic, and one is fant…[Read more]

@kayleigh-idea

Great, thanks!!

@g_c_al

Hey Gigi!!!  (I love your name, btw!!)  I’m Ella, and welcome to KP!!!  Ooo, short stories are fun, but I’m sooo glad you got into writing novels!!!!

Here are a few things about me:

1)  I love smoothies and dark chocolate

2)  I adore basketball and running and working out (ik, I’m weird 😄)

3)  I write fantasy, speculative ficti…[Read more]