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Koshka replied to the topic Wingfeather Saga in the forum Book Discussions 2 weeks ago
What?! Oops…no Artham doesn’t die. (It did sound like that, now looking back at my wording XD)
No, I was referring to Pete’s anguish when he realizes his little brother is still alive (although fading fast and is not responding to the… telepathy thing).
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Koshka replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 5 days ago
Hmm, that is a bit of a pickle.
Perhaps he was originally just afraid of (and a little bit for) Adinah. He didn’t hate them at first (that’s not something that happens overnight). He kept the boyd because, at the root, he did at first still love Adinah (and them) and vaguely wanted to keep them safe.
Also, he doesn’t have to…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 5 days ago
*Strangled noises*
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Please don’t kill Moishe. It may be a pretty amazing wrapup if Mathias is killed (not that you are planning to do that, I’m just a fellow writer{rather concerned btw over those choices[does he go to a camp?(If he does, is it the one Riker is stationed at?)]}), but please…that would just be…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Wingfeather Saga in the forum Book Discussions 3 weeks, 1 day ago
That death made me madder than possibly any other death/supposed death in the books. It was sweet though, that each of the kids got to feel their father’s love in their own special way.
Peet though. Peet hurt.
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 weeks, 1 day ago
I have no idea which group you are asking (if any. The general somebody is always an option), but you’re welcome to join in with anybody anytime. Technically an RP shouldn’t have to depend on groups.
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Koshka replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 weeks, 1 day ago
*GASPETH*
I like this new story. A lot. Matthias sounds amazing. Charna sounds amazing.
I know it’s not a main WIP or anything, but I would like to hear more of this book whenever you have any other randomness to share. =)
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Koshka replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month ago
I’m going to pop in and give my tidbit (because that’s so much more fun than homework).
1. Some scenes need to be short, some long, depending on what’s being delt with. This one may be short, but it’s a good length for the subject.
2. No? It just felt like a wrap up description of Mandin/a scene conclusion/transition to whatever was coming…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month ago
My advice as a middle-grade writer and a YA reader:
1. Stick as much as possible to inner turmoil. Instead of focusing on how much the outward character is being damaged, focus on how the inner character is coping/struggling/whatever.
2. Instead of portraying each individual blow/whatever, gloss it all together into a simple…[Read more]
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Elishavet Pidyon replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month ago
Concerned is an understatement.
I enjoyed this scene so much! I love that Riker helps him, if course, and that Leon accepts that help. I also really liked how specific yet clean the trigger and flashback were – it made sense, and conveyed the horror of the memory without giving me trauma.
There were two places where I would…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 1 week ago
Okay, I’m back to finish going through your scene.
What are your thoughts on Aaron/Joash? Do you feel bad for them at all, or do they just seem like villains?
I understand them and what they are doing. While they don’t seem like total villains to me (I see them in both a realistic and historical context), I hate what they are…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 1 week ago
Hi! I didn’t read through all your questions yet since I don’t have much time right now. I’ll try to come back and answer them. =)
Is Riker’s sudden panic/possible panic attack realistic? If not, does anyone that has experienced a panic attack have any pointers? (I’ve only been on the brink of one once…it was not fun&#…
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Elishavet Pidyon replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 month, 3 weeks ago
This is tragic.
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Elishavet Pidyon replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 month, 3 weeks ago
Aww, thank you! I’m learning.
You guessed correctly! It’s Smalls as a youngling. I changed my profile pic in honor of Green Ember’s birthday back in December, but forgot to change it back. And now I like it. XD
Yes, they are wonderful books! It was actually Green Ember that made me want to write whole stories instead of random stuff…[Read more]
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Elishavet Pidyon replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 month, 3 weeks ago
Aww, thanks! They were a lot of fun.
You guessed correctly. 😉 It’s a drawing I did of Jupiter Smalls as a youngling. (He might be my favorite character.) I swapped my profile pic in honor of Green Ember‘s birthday back in December, but forgot to change it back.
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Elishavet Pidyon replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 month, 3 weeks ago
@koshka @freed-and-redeemed @godlyfantasy12
I am so excited. XD I made working covers for all three volumes of Heirs of Ashes. And found a really bad quality image of my current reference illustration for Viktor and Alyona.
My first one had reeaaalllyyy small ears….Now I should actually try to write that first volume….
Here’s a t…[Read more]
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Elishavet Pidyon replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 month, 3 weeks ago
… @thosewhohavesharedartonhere …
Ah, I love looking at y’all’s stuff! It’s fascinating to see everyone’s different styles, and helps get me inspired to do art again. 🙂
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Elishavet Pidyon posted an update 1 month, 3 weeks ago
Heyyyyy, @godlyfantasy12
Are you going to TLC this weekend?
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Koshka replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 4 weeks ago
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Koshka replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 4 weeks ago
Pastor Nikolai Aleksandr Smirnov and MGB Agent Peter Dimitri Kuznetsov together as the MCs of a novel would be fabulous…I’m getting ideas already…oh no XXD
What?! Another book? Oh dear. XD
A quick side note: did you intend Alesandr and Dimitri to be middle names or were you referring to patronymics (the father’s (or other…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 4 weeks ago
His own book? Welp, that is the way it goes, isn’t it. XD
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@elishavet-pidyon Not sure…if we do it would only be Friday. I’m working Thursday from 5:45-5 because two of my coworkers are going for the whole weekend so I gotta take a double shift XD but it would be cool if we could somehow meet up if I did get to go Friday!
Yes! I hope you can go for the thing itself of course, but it would be great if we could run into each other. XD If you do get to go, we’re the two youngest ladies with the cameras/camera bag. Or two matching girls with matching/coordinating outfits.