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February 25, 2021 at 8:44 pm #94114
@writerlexi1216 Yay!! I canโt wait!!! Girl, you deserved the support! This story is fantabulous!
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February 25, 2021 at 9:31 pm #94132@writerlexi1216 Sorry for the late reply, but Iโd love to read it when I next have time! (After I go back and read the first chapter, of course!)
February 25, 2021 at 9:42 pm #94139February 26, 2021 at 11:34 am #94187Hey Lexi!!ย Iโm kinda late, but Iโll read this in a minute and give you some feedback soon!!ย Super excited!!!!ย Three cheers for being brave!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ๐๐๐
what we do in life echoes in eternity
-gladiator, 2000February 26, 2021 at 12:14 pm #94193I love this sooo much!!!ย Great job, Lexi!!! ๐ย To answer your questions,
1)ย I really like Cairaโs character, especially her internal monologue!!
2)ย Yes, I would!!!ย I really love the idea of the โProdigyโ and Deekโฆ I mean, what else is there to say?
3)ย I think the pacing is great!!
Great job!!!!! ๐
what we do in life echoes in eternity
-gladiator, 2000February 26, 2021 at 1:56 pm #94213Awwww, girl THANK YOU!! Your feedback is super helpful (and encouraging, as always ๐ ) Thank you for taking the time to read it (because I know my chapters can be looooong)!!!! Just a million thank yous for this AMAZING feedback!!! ๐ <33333333
March 1, 2021 at 3:13 am #945021.ย Are my characters likable? I just wanted confirmation that Caira was, in fact, interesting.
Yeah, all of them are (so far). Yes, Caira is interesting! I enjoyed being in her head. ๐
2.ย Is the story engaging? If you were in a bookstore, would you keep reading? Does it keep you hooked?
100%. I would definitely keep reading!!!!! YES, the second chapter got me more hooked than the first one!
3.ย Is the pacing all right?
I think so? Iโm not good at judging at pacing since I can read all sorts of pacing fine. Nothing seemed really off or wrong at all.
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March 1, 2021 at 12:47 pm #94528Thank you so much for the feedback!!! The comments you gave were immensely helpful, and thank you for taking the time to read through my, er,ย lengthyย chapters ๐ Yay, Iโm glad Caira was interesting, and Iโm even more glad you were hooked!!!! *wipes sweat off forehead* And Iโm also glad you thought the pacing was good. Thank you!!!
March 1, 2021 at 6:29 pm #94560Youโre welcome! Iโm so glad they were helpful! Iโm fairly new at giving feedback, so itโs good to know that Iโm fairly good at it and I can be helpful rather than just plain critical. It was my pleasure! I loved every second of your lengthy chapters!
March 2, 2021 at 10:32 am #94632@writerlexi1216 Hi!!! ๐ I saw you had tagged me for your story, so I came over here. Then I saw where you had posted the link to the first chapter. All this to say that I just read Ch. 1 and it was awesome awesome AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐ Literally, there are not enough words to describe how amazing it was!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I was hooked from the very beginning! And I absolutely LOVE LOVE LOVE your characters!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Deekโs cool โ he kinda gave me a Flynn Rider vibe.๐ I love seeing Deek and Caira together!!!!!!! I am so going to read the next chapter next chance I get! Your writing is incredible, girl!!!! Keep up the great work!!!!!
"It looks like a fairy world"~Meg from Little Women by Louisa May Alcott
Fall in love with JesusMarch 2, 2021 at 3:13 pm #94670Girl, you just made my day!!! ๐ ๐ ๐ Thatโs soooooo sweet of you to say!!! Iโm SO HAPPY you were hooked and that you love my characters!!!!! That means the absolute world to hear such positive feedback ๐ ๐ YAY!!!! And thatโs totally the vibe I was going for with Deek ๐ I was super nervous about posting my writing, but it makes me feel 1,000 times better to hear that everybody likes it!!!! And I hope you like the second chapter too!!!! You just made me smile soooo big!!!! ๐ ๐ ๐ ๐ ๐
March 4, 2021 at 9:31 pm #94949@writerlexi1216 I just read Ch. 2!!!๐ Like, where was this story all my life!!!!!!! It is my new favorite book!!!!!!!!! I LOVE Deek!!!!!!! I love all your characters and I am soooo hooked on the story!!!!!!!!!๐๐๐๐๐ I relate a lot to Caira! The pacing was incredible!!!!! Iโm over here wondering whatโs going to happen next!!!! I CANโT WAIT TO READ MORE!!!!!!!!!!
"It looks like a fairy world"~Meg from Little Women by Louisa May Alcott
Fall in love with JesusMarch 5, 2021 at 10:55 am #94967Katherine, THANK YOU!!! Iโm SO HAPPY youโve enjoyed reading my chapters!!!! ๐ ๐ ๐ Seriously, you made my day (and week!!!) Iโm over the moon that so many people are interested in my story and my characters (because I was SUPER nervous it wasnโt good!!!!) Aww, Iโm so glad that you like Caira, because I tried to make her relatable in many different areas (I feel like this gets better as the story goes on), and DEEK! YES! Deek deserves his very own fan club ๐ And pacing is something I was nervous about! THANK YOU X 1,000 for this super awesome feedback!!!! <3333333
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