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@writerlexi1216 Yay!! I can’t wait!!! Girl, you deserved the support! This story is fantabulous!
@writerlexi1216 Sorry for the late reply, but I’d love to read it when I next have time! (After I go back and read the first chapter, of course!)
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Thanks, Gracie!! 🙂 I deeply appreciate it!!
Aww, thanks for offering to read it, girl!! And there’s no rush at all!! I think I posted a link to the first chapter here, but if not, tell me and I’ll send it again 🙂
Hey Lexi!! I’m kinda late, but I’ll read this in a minute and give you some feedback soon!! Super excited!!!! Three cheers for being brave!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ???
what we do in life echoes in eternity
-gladiator, 2000I love this sooo much!!! Great job, Lexi!!! ? To answer your questions,
1) I really like Caira’s character, especially her internal monologue!!
2) Yes, I would!!! I really love the idea of the “Prodigy” and Deek… I mean, what else is there to say?
3) I think the pacing is great!!
Great job!!!!! ?
what we do in life echoes in eternity
-gladiator, 2000Awwww, girl THANK YOU!! Your feedback is super helpful (and encouraging, as always 🙂 ) Thank you for taking the time to read it (because I know my chapters can be looooong)!!!! Just a million thank yous for this AMAZING feedback!!! 🙂 <33333333
1. Are my characters likable? I just wanted confirmation that Caira was, in fact, interesting.
Yeah, all of them are (so far). Yes, Caira is interesting! I enjoyed being in her head. 🙂
2. Is the story engaging? If you were in a bookstore, would you keep reading? Does it keep you hooked?
100%. I would definitely keep reading!!!!! YES, the second chapter got me more hooked than the first one!
3. Is the pacing all right?
I think so? I’m not good at judging at pacing since I can read all sorts of pacing fine. Nothing seemed really off or wrong at all.
Thank you so much for the feedback!!! The comments you gave were immensely helpful, and thank you for taking the time to read through my, er, lengthy chapters 🙂 Yay, I’m glad Caira was interesting, and I’m even more glad you were hooked!!!! *wipes sweat off forehead* And I’m also glad you thought the pacing was good. Thank you!!!
You’re welcome! I’m so glad they were helpful! I’m fairly new at giving feedback, so it’s good to know that I’m fairly good at it and I can be helpful rather than just plain critical. It was my pleasure! I loved every second of your lengthy chapters!
@writerlexi1216 Hi!!! 🙂 I saw you had tagged me for your story, so I came over here. Then I saw where you had posted the link to the first chapter. All this to say that I just read Ch. 1 and it was awesome awesome AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!?????????? Literally, there are not enough words to describe how amazing it was!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I was hooked from the very beginning! And I absolutely LOVE LOVE LOVE your characters!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Deek’s cool – he kinda gave me a Flynn Rider vibe.? I love seeing Deek and Caira together!!!!!!! I am so going to read the next chapter next chance I get! Your writing is incredible, girl!!!! Keep up the great work!!!!!
"It looks like a fairy world"~Meg from Little Women by Louisa May Alcott
Fall in love with JesusGirl, you just made my day!!! 😀 😀 😀 That’s soooooo sweet of you to say!!! I’m SO HAPPY you were hooked and that you love my characters!!!!! That means the absolute world to hear such positive feedback 🙂 🙂 YAY!!!! And that’s totally the vibe I was going for with Deek 😉 I was super nervous about posting my writing, but it makes me feel 1,000 times better to hear that everybody likes it!!!! And I hope you like the second chapter too!!!! You just made me smile soooo big!!!! 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂
@writerlexi1216 I just read Ch. 2!!!? Like, where was this story all my life!!!!!!! It is my new favorite book!!!!!!!!! I LOVE Deek!!!!!!! I love all your characters and I am soooo hooked on the story!!!!!!!!!????? I relate a lot to Caira! The pacing was incredible!!!!! I’m over here wondering what’s going to happen next!!!! I CAN’T WAIT TO READ MORE!!!!!!!!!!
"It looks like a fairy world"~Meg from Little Women by Louisa May Alcott
Fall in love with JesusKatherine, THANK YOU!!! I’m SO HAPPY you’ve enjoyed reading my chapters!!!! 🙂 🙂 🙂 Seriously, you made my day (and week!!!) I’m over the moon that so many people are interested in my story and my characters (because I was SUPER nervous it wasn’t good!!!!) Aww, I’m so glad that you like Caira, because I tried to make her relatable in many different areas (I feel like this gets better as the story goes on), and DEEK! YES! Deek deserves his very own fan club 😉 And pacing is something I was nervous about! THANK YOU X 1,000 for this super awesome feedback!!!! <3333333
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