@writerlexi1216
Active 4 years, 1 month ago- Rank: Eccentric Mentor
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Abigail.M. replied to the topic WIP Chat! in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 years, 3 months ago
Yes, I noticed that it’s not showing here.. huh. Oh, well, I’m glad you saw it anyway:)
Thanks! I’m glad you like the title. For me, it just kind of summed up the whole novel. And actually, the entire story was inspired by a photo I saw in a magazine a while back. Mejia is the only character all these years later to not have her…[Read more]
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Kathleen replied to the topic You get to be one of your characters for a day. Who would you be and why? in the forum Topic of the Week 5 years, 3 months ago
Spending a day writing in a lavish mansion sounds amazing.
A spy that rides horses frequently? That sounds totally cool.
I loved fairies when I was younger and would draw tons of pictures of them, but I’ve actually never written a story with them. It’s so cool that you are! I feel like there…[Read more]
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ella replied to the topic WIP Chat! in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 years, 3 months ago
It’s going pretty good! I started Chap. 3 of Lioness and it’s going pretty well. About to send in my chapter to KP Critiques… 😃
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Abigail.M. replied to the topic WIP Chat! in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 years, 3 months ago
Hey, that’s awesome that you finished Newton’s chapter! (I better not start talking about Newton or I might start fangirling or something XD ).
Actually (while I haven’t done any actual writing today) I’ve been making some breakthroughs with The Snow Warrior, so I’m feeling pretty good about that:) I’m also planning on changing o…[Read more] -
Scoutillus Finch replied to the topic WIP Chat! in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 years, 3 months ago
My WIP is getting into another bout of sharing soon, I have finished with writing down what i need to change and it’s beginning to look good. I will do my best to be merciless with my sentences because I have a habit of wordiness, then i write a sentence I like and keep it even though it’s not necessary. After I finish with my…[Read more]
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Kads replied to the topic Character Art Exchange #2 in the forum Art 5 years, 4 months ago
@gracie-j Thank you!!! 😊
@writerlexi1216 Thank you! I’d love to see you do some manga, definitely try it!! 😀
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Abigail.M. replied to the topic You get to be one of your characters for a day. Who would you be and why? in the forum Topic of the Week 5 years, 4 months ago
@Kathleenramm @devastate-lasting @nova21 @joy-caroline @mkfairygirl @writerlexi1216 @scoutfinch180 @wyn-rose @gracie-j
Everyone has such awesome characters! 😀
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Lin replied to the topic Character Art Exchange #2 in the forum Art 5 years, 4 months ago
@gracie-j @writerlexi1216 Ah thanks!
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Elizabeth replied to the topic Fantasy Chapter Critique Request in the forum Novel Critique Requests 5 years, 4 months ago
@gracie-j Aww, thank you!! Your comment made me smile quite big. I appreciate you taking the time to read it!
@nova21 Thank you so much!!! I really appreciate your kind words 😀 I’ll definitely post more in that case! (Once I wrangle my second chapter into some semblance of order, that is.) Thank you for reading!!
@writerlexi1216 Aw, thanks–I’m…[Read more]
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Elizabeth replied to the topic Favorite Lines of Dialogue from your WIP? in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 years, 4 months ago
@gracie-j Gracie!!! Your quotes are so lovely!! I want to like, embroider one on a wall hanging or something.
@joy-caroline Ahhh, I love those!!
@godlyfantasy12 Ooh I already love Cecily! I get such a clear picture with just that one quote.
@e-k-seaver Hah, I love that. XD
@writerlexi1216 Hehe, thanks! I could definitely see Caira saying that.…[Read more]
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Elizabeth replied to the topic First Chapter (Fantasy) Reading Request in the forum Novel Critique Requests 5 years, 4 months ago
*ahem*
LEXI THAT WAS AMAZING!!!!!!!!!!
Seriously, you had me hooked from the first paragraph!! I already feel like I get such a clear image of Caira and her personality. (Also, I want an owl now. Dangit.) You’re incredible at description–everything felt so vivid and had a definite aesthetic to it. (Side note about that–I was…[Read more]
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Elizabeth replied to the topic Favorite Lines of Dialogue from your WIP? in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 years, 4 months ago
@writerlexi1216 I love the idea of this topic so much! Thank you for starting it!!!
Here’s one:
Years of sitting in on meetings I did not understand, and the gradual, numbing understanding that there was nothing in the world that could not be bought and sold for a few parcels of land or a title flooded into my mind. “I see.”
And anot…[Read more]
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ella replied to the topic Fortitude: Chapter Two Reading Request in the forum Novel Critique Requests 5 years, 4 months ago
I love this sooo much!!! Great job, Lexi!!! 🎉 To answer your questions,
1) I really like Caira’s character, especially her internal monologue!!
2) Yes, I would!!! I really love the idea of the “Prodigy” and Deek… I mean, what else is there to say?
3) I think the pacing is great!!
Great job!!!!! 💛
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ella replied to the topic Fortitude: Chapter Two Reading Request in the forum Novel Critique Requests 5 years, 4 months ago
Hey Lexi!! I’m kinda late, but I’ll read this in a minute and give you some feedback soon!! Super excited!!!! Three cheers for being brave!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 🎊🎉😉
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Daisy Torres replied to the topic First Chapter (Fantasy) Reading Request in the forum Novel Critique Requests 5 years, 4 months ago
@writerlexi1216 Aww absolutely!!! I’m glad you like it!!!
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Lin replied to the topic Favorite Lines of Dialogue from your WIP? in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 years, 4 months ago
@writerlexi1216 @gracie-j @joy-caroline @godlyfantasy12 Ah I’m not really the type to write deep impactful quotes but y’all have really good quotes!
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Kads replied to the topic Character Art Exchange #2 in the forum Art 5 years, 4 months ago
@writerlexi1216 Yesss!! You should do a persona!!! Aww, thank you, I’m really glad to hear that I inspired you!!! 😊
XD thank you I enjoyed making it
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Lin replied to the topic Character Art Exchange #2 in the forum Art 5 years, 4 months ago
@writerlexi1216 Nowadays I would say yes, because I think that I already used up all the Western-style names I like. I’ve even begun to reuse them for different stories. ;-;
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Lin replied to the topic Character/Book Aesthetics in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 years, 4 months ago
@abigail-m @writerlexi1216 @gracie-j @hallie-jean Thank you!
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Lin replied to the topic Character Art Exchange #2 in the forum Art 5 years, 4 months ago
@writerlexi1216 @gracie-j My characters are all my trash children. They make me cry. I wish they wouldn’t do bad things. But they do.
Not gonna lie but in recent months I have discovered the subtle laziness of naming characters. At least, I’ve discovered what makes me lazy and not lazy. When I’m naming a quick character if I’m going Western style…[Read more]
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