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@kathleenramm

id say… it doesn’t necessarily stand out in my mind at first thought; my struggle has been health, a degenerative tissue disease and it’s been ongoing since I was about thirteen, so for about four almost five years and comes with chronic pain every day.

the story does summarize my journey in life very well, though. So I sup…[Read more]

@joy-caroline haha I forgot to add that my character does have a positive arc as time passes and she (slowly) learns to love and trust again

Also, I really like the one you did of Paul! it’s well done and thought out!

@will_starke Hi! welcome (again? idk what these peopke are talking about @not-so-secret-secret-assassin @devastate-lasting, I’m newer on here sooooo) anyhow, that is cool you do poetry. I do occasional ones meself, but writing fantasy is my preferred getaway. What poetry do you write? Also, what’s your favorite color? if it’s pink then we will be…[Read more]

@lydia-s you’re welcome

he is though!!!

@keilah-h thank you!! Hopefully I’ll get them published before I’m an old lady 🙄

Oh! I liked all of them and I figured that you were referring to your work in general 🙂 sorry I can be confusing 😂

@precious-y

thanks! And here’s more!

Kaunon stared in horror as Alinna was flung down into the water. He was now surrounded by dragons; Death Rams, but these were average size, even if they were as nasty as their alpha.

Kaunon tried to get to Alinna, but every time he reached the dragon taunting her it would snarl and throw her to a…

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@precious-y thank you so much!! I’ll post the rest of that one tomorrow if you’d like to read it! 🙂

@keilah-h ah ok! I figured. Yeah, it’s so fun to make up peoples and species… imagination is the limit for the most part. And that would be cool to do!

this may or may not interest you…. but the Serpent People in my story are (very loosely) inspired by the description of giants given by the Native American tribes. it’s a scary thing to look…[Read more]

@lydia-s oooo gooesbumps!! Dragon!! that word…it just ‘instills terror in the hearts of men’ (to quote Smaug XD)

@akbaer sorry the forum ate my post again lol

I like peppermint too! we had a wild kind all over the place where I used to live, so I’d pick it and use it for tea.

Well, good to meet ya! see you around! 🙂

@joy-caroline

oy vey… I don’t plan character lies… umm they sorta develop with the character, but the first one in my mind would be Brianna Hakonik;

she was kidnapped as a child and raised in a very dark place and trained as an assassin and ring fighter and with it came a lot of trauma and abuse. As you can guess she’s bitter and agg…[Read more]

@keilah-h

what scenes? I’m confused too now, if you meant which of yours, i liked both scenes!!

no it’s not weird to detail all the species! It’s good to know your characters inside and out so to speak 🙂 they all sound like you put a lot of thought into them!

And as for MCs all being boys I admit it’s my natural tendency to do that too so n…[Read more]

@AKbaer

ahh I see! Well I won’t hold that against you! What about tea?  I like regular black tea with honey and milk!

Yeah new things are sometimes like Bilbo’s description of adventures; “nasty disturbing uncomfortable things! Make you late for dinner!” But they can also lead to incredible opportunities!

Haha sounds like my parents too!

An…[Read more]

@keilah-h

i read the scene you posted and it’s very cool! I like it!

@abigail-m

Sure! I’d be glad to read it!

@godlyfantasy12 I’d say go for it!!! 🙂

@keilah-h

and one morphing: (they’re called Death Hawks for here explained reasons)

Atheico looked shocked, “How did you find him? And how are you not dead? His father swore he’d kill anyone who came to his castle after I—”

“I didn’t find—” Mythia twitched and tried to stay still, “ I didn’t find him. He’s my friend and Lysanna sent me to hi…

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@keilah-h

Thanks! i have the Serpent Children, then the Peluvaro, who morph into owls, and the Bardans, who morph into griffons. Peluvaro and Bardan blood mixed makes an odd combination; their descendants are Pelubalar, literally owl-griffon and have wings, slight scaling on the face, severe scaling on the hands, and claws on their hands. The…[Read more]