TheLoonyOne

@mineralizedwritings @felicity @koshka @theloonyone @whalekeeper @godlyfantasy12 @elishavet-pidyon

So it seems like a lot of you said the same things, and I realized that just this scene alone doesn’t make much sense lol 🙂 So I’ll try to explain a little more.

This is basically the climax of Christopher and Briana’s relationship. So it’s…[Read more]

@keilah-h @freedomwriter76 Aw, reading that made me smile. Steve’s a much better person than I’ll ever be. Also I think he’s earned Dante’s eternal respect and loyalty.😄

Dante

Steve set Dante slowly onto the ground.

“I don’t just give everyone one chance.”

Dante stared up at him.

No. This was the part where the fight was supposed to b…[Read more]

@theloonyone

Oh ok! I totally get that. Italicizing in KP is a pain. I went back and italicized my whole thing here only for KP to not save the edit 🤦‍♀️. I was thoroughly dissapionted and it didn’t let me try again, so my second chapter doesn’t read the best.

@theloonyone

I guess I do like a lot of instrumental music! It comes from being in a family of crazy music lovers. We all play instruments. What’s your favorite Ludovico Einaudi song? Mine is Due Tremonti or Experience. Or a million others. You should listen to Evynne Hollens! I especially like her duets with Peter.

@madelyn

My favorite…[Read more]

@starofthenorth

First of all, thank you so much for creating this topic! It’s so good to see more people in this world thanking the Lord on thanksgiving.
I’m thankful for my family. My family has gone through some hardships this past year or two, and I’m so grateful for our Heavenly Father helping us get through.
I’m thankful for small acts of…[Read more]

@theloonyone @loopylin @mineralizedwritings

So after several KP deletings and accidental refreshing the pages, I FINALLY typed this! Sorry it took so long😅🤦🏻‍♀️.

Oh okay! I like the name Everly better too😊. Whoa, a trap door?! Our poor charries😅😬.

Matthew

Me and Carter leaned, hands on our knees, panting.

I looked over at Carter. Smiled, “I t…[Read more]

@theloonyone

Love it!

I was a little confused here:

Wait. He turned to Cammie and carefully offered, “I might be able to get you backstage.”

I couldn’t tell if he was thinking “wait” or saying it or something else.

And lol, Cammie’s mom seems like a character 🤣

I like where you have it going! 😃

I have chapter 2 of my story, I think I upl…[Read more]

@theloonyone

Hey! Thanks for the welcome! My trilogy is my first real dabbling in fantasy so there are tons of cliches and tropes I have to fix but the overall theme is good, I think. 🙂 Here’s s quick synopsis:

Lana has lived in Wilson Falls for all of her twelve years, enjoying everything a close community of farming families brings. She’s…[Read more]

@theloonyone

Yay, another Tolkien nerd! Who’s your favorite character(s)?

I’m pretty excited to have finished a book myself! It’s only 27,000 words, so it’s more of a novella, but it’s the first longer thing I’ve finished! Rustic fantasy is basically non-magical fantasy, no Elves or wizards or dragons. So it’s similar to historical fiction from…[Read more]

@felicity

I think the plural of “appendix” is “appendices.” It sounds weird tho! lol

@theloonyone

I don’t really have a favorite genre of music. I listen to classical music a lot, and I like Ludovico Einaudi, movie soundtracks, and sometimes Peter and Evynne Hollens.

Yes, you should read the Roman Britain Trilogy! The first book The Eagle of…[Read more]

@theloonyone

Nice to meet you!

I struggle with procrastination a little. More like I just don’t feel like writing for weeks and weeks. 🙂

1. I mostly write fantasy, though I do like historical fiction.

2. Oh, wow, I don’t know! Can I say I’d bring my computer so I can listen to whatever I want? lol

3. The Lord of the Rings, the rest of the…[Read more]

@theloonyone @loopylin @lightoverdarkness6

Everly

“Hi! I’m Carmen!” Carmen says with a smile, peeking over Everly’s shoulder at the girl. “Hey, you match Everly here with your sling! You could be sling buddies! Or sling friends… injury besties? I’m gonna have to work on that one…”

“Oh yeah…haha.” Everly laughs nervously.

The l…[Read more]

@mineralizedwritings @lightoverdarkness6 @theloonyone

Imma do the boys now too

Simon and Carter 

“They were right here.” Carter said for the tenth time. He and some others had pressed every stone in the wall, hoping to find the button that had opened the floor before, but with no luck. Now, he was on his hands and knees, trying to pry open the…[Read more]

Sorry forgot to tag you @theloonyone

@theloonyone @lightoverdarkness6 @loopylin

Lol your right 🤣 I’ve called her the wrong name. This is the first time I’ve ever written her, so it’s not ingrained in my head yet. It’s Everly.

Kaine

Kaine walks through the grand entrance. His boots tap lightly against the marble floors, as he makes his way around the large center area. Looking up,…[Read more]

@mineralizedwritings @theloonyone @loopylin

Is her name Evelyn or Everly? I think you’ve typed both😅.

Matthew

“Oh…I’m not s-sure.” I stuttered.
“Hmmm.” Kaine looked up at the castle. Laughed, “Intimidating isn’t it? I’m going. I need to find Everly.” And with that, he walked off.
I looked at Carter. “Are you ready?” He asked, eye brows raised.…[Read more]

@theloonyone @loopylin @lightoverdarkness6

Ok Kp eats edits, not just posts now. Looks like I’ve gotta get it right the first time 😅

That was Everly speaking above.

Kaine

“Oh…I’m not s-sure.” Mathew stutters, frowning.

“Hmm.” Kaine looks up at the castle. “Intimidating isn’t it?” He laughs.

“I’m going. I need to find Everly.…[Read more]

@theloonyone @loopylin @lightoverdarkness6

“Oh, hello.”

Everly turns in shock to see the girl speaking.

“Oh no, are you hurt?” She asks.

“Oh! Hi!” Everly looks up at her, noticing the brown haired girl behind her.

“I uh, yeah. I’m doing alright at the moment. Thanks!”

“I’m Everl–”

Everly stops at the sound of another voice.

“Help, HELP!…[Read more]