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TheLoonyOne replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
@keilah-h @freedomwriter76
elissaElissa clenched her fists as Hitchens spoke. She could see Crosshair in front of them, tensing and tightening his grip on his rifleas he listened. “I think, Elissa started, “That what someone does during a chaotic moment tells you a lot about them.”
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TheLoonyOne replied to the topic Its been a while in the forum Start HERE 1 year, 8 months ago
Hey Alia! Two years ago I was definitely not here, so hello and welcome back!
Anyway, I’m Theloonyone. Like most here, I am a Christian writer, but I also enjoy music, art, and reading. I play the piano (and the clarinet a little) and have been slowly growing my drawing skills over the past couple of years. Right now, I’m working on a cou…[Read more]
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TheLoonyOne replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
Elissa
Elissa pursed her lips as she listened to Cammie and Feather’s conversation. What the Colonel- what Hitchens had done was horrible but what was causing the most anger to her was the little bit of information she now had about what had happened to Crosshair. She still remembered what had happened between them in…[Read more]
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TheLoonyOne replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
I’m not really sure what to do, so, uh, here 😅
Cammie
Cammie watched from beside Milo as Crosshair turned sharply to Feather and spit out, “Are you seriously allowing him to-”
Feather stopped him with a whispered sentence and although he still seemed incredibly against going anywhere with the Colonel, he accepted it,…[Read more]
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TheLoonyOne replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
Elissa
The man turned to her the second she spoke, giving her a smile. “Ah, I do not believe I have had the pleasure.” He then bowed with the same smile on his face. “I am Colonel James Matthew Hitchens of the Royal British Army, madam.”
He seemed… fine, but seeing how Feather and Crosshair had reacted and the thi…[Read more]
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TheLoonyOne replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
(I’ve barely met Hitchens and he’s already making me mad)
Elissa
Elissa looked back and forth at Crosshair and the other man getting increasingly closer as they argued. She didn’t understand most of what they were saying but could tell there was some history.
Elissa was about to speak up when Feather stepped in…[Read more]
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TheLoonyOne replied to the topic Book Lovers! in the forum Book Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
Ooh, I love Dune! I started it before I watched the movie, but it’s kind of long. 😂 Both the book and movie are really good though! I’ve only read the first one, but I have the second and third so I’ll definitely read them someday. And the second movie is pretty much the only movie that I’m looking forward to right now. And, uh, yeah,…[Read more]
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TheLoonyOne replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
Milo
With a huff, Milo settled himself on the floor as Elissa and Feather went into the room to take care of Simon. Crosshair and the other man were still standing by the door and Cammie was sitting against the opposite wall. Beth sat beside her, eyeing the door of the room with a worried look. Milo sighed and closed his eyes, letting…[Read more]
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TheLoonyOne replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
Sorry, I’m here
And I’m bad at writing emotional scenes 😑😅
Elissa
“But all the same, his advice to stay far away if it ever happened again was probably valid,” Feather finished speaking.
Elissa looked down at her fidgeting hands thinking about what she had just been told. Obviously, some bad things had happened to Crosshair, things…[Read more]
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TheLoonyOne replied to the topic Hello, fellow writers! in the forum Start HERE 1 year, 8 months ago
Your story sounds really interesting! It’s cool showing the amount of power that just a story can hold.
My short story was about my character, Milo, who is addicted to a life-simulation game. In the story, he met Cammie (who also used the game, but Milo didn’t know in the short story) and the end had a very vague ending of him…[Read more]
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TheLoonyOne replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
Elissa
Elissa watched carefully as Feather stared at her supplies, seemingly lost in thought. She shook her head and after a moment looked up at Elissa. “I know this is off-topic,” she started, “but did something happen between you and Crosshair while you guys were in there? Something’s going on with him, I can t…[Read more]
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TheLoonyOne replied to the topic Hello, fellow writers! in the forum Start HERE 1 year, 8 months ago
Probably a short story called Storyteller, though eventually it turned into the first chapter of a novella I’m working on.
Haha, I’ve done pretty much the same thing with a short story I wrote. 😂 What is yours about?
probably a book from the Wingfeather Saga, though I couldn’t choose which one. Maybe the third or fourth.
I sta…[Read more]
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TheLoonyOne replied to the topic To my fellow writers in the faith, greetings in the forum Start HERE 1 year, 8 months ago
I definitely don’t know any other type of schooling, but I’d have to say it’s my favorite.
Well, I’ve experienced public school a little (in elementary) and I went to a charter school (it’s somewhere between public and private), and now I’m a homeschooler. Homeschooling is definitely my favorite! I think the biggest thing…[Read more]
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TheLoonyOne replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
Elissa
Elissa hummed as she furrowed her eyebrows and thought. “Well I know to keep calm, not to move the person, try to slow down the flow of blood if they’re bleeding, call 911 and wait. But uh,” she grimaced, “I don’t think we’re going to be getting any emergency services here. Um… I’ve learned how to use a tourniquet,…[Read more]
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TheLoonyOne replied to the topic Hey, Writers! in the forum Start HERE 1 year, 8 months ago
If you could make any activity an Olympic sport, what would you have a good chance of winning a medal for? Nothing. I’m terrible at sports.
Yeah, I’m not good at sports either 🤣
And I love casting crowns too! I actually got to see them in concert last year, it was awesome!
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TheLoonyOne replied to the topic I finished my rough draft… anyone interested? in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 8 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @folith-feolin @microphage6032 @esther-c
Hey… so I kind of completely ditched with WIP for a month and forgot that I posted chapters here (sorry). I want to get back to working on it! If any of you are interested, here is chapter two.
They both fell into silence after Cammie said her name and Milo tried his hardest to…[Read more]
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TheLoonyOne replied to the topic Hey, Writers! in the forum Start HERE 1 year, 8 months ago
Hey, Welcome to Kingdom Pen!
I have a hard time writing romance, too. 😂 I hadn’t written any until I started writing the novel I’m working on and it somehow turned into a romance (I have no idea how, my characters just decided that was the way it was going to go).
I’m Theloonyone. Like most here, I am a Christian writer, b…[Read more]
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TheLoonyOne replied to the topic Hello, fellow writers! in the forum Start HERE 1 year, 8 months ago
Hey Ava! Welcome to Kingdom Pen!
Rina looks so cool! Great design and the art is really good!
I’m Theloonyone. Like most here, I am a Christian writer, but I also enjoy music, art, and reading. I play the piano (and the clarinet a little) and have been slowly growing my drawing skills over the past couple of years. Right now, I…[Read more]
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TheLoonyOne replied to the topic To my fellow writers in the faith, greetings in the forum Start HERE 1 year, 8 months ago
Hey Janelle! Welcome to Kingdom Pen!
I’m Theloonyone. Like most here, I am a Christian writer, but I also enjoy music, art, and reading. I play the piano (and the clarinet a little) and have been slowly growing my drawing skills over the past couple of years. Right now, I’m working on a couple of different short stories tha…[Read more]
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TheLoonyOne replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
Elissa
Feather perked up from where she was standing beside Milo. “Some. I’m not a qualified medic by any means. But I have learned a bit, which I’ll use if I need to.”
“Well,” Elissa said while walking over to her, “He’s in there.” She motioned toward the door with her hand while dropping half of the supplies she was holdi…[Read more]
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