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March 23, 2023 at 8:44 pm #138213
@keilah-h @freedomwriter76
Elissa
Elissa pursed her lips as she listened to Cammie and Featherâs conversation. What the Colonel- what Hitchens had done was horrible but what was causing the most anger to her was the little bit of information she now had about what had happened to Crosshair. She still remembered what had happened between them in the hall vividly, and while she had been scared at the time, the more she found out about his past, the more she can imagine what couldâve been going through his head then. He mustâve been more scared than she was to react how he did.
Like many times before, Elissa wished she could just go and talk to someone, to help them. Unfortunately, that had never been how she released her emotions. With a set to her shoulders and a small glare, Eliss walked past Cammie and Feather and stopped beside Hitchens. âSo,â she said, not at all sure what she was going to say to the man. âHitchens, right?â
(I spent like five minutes just sitting there thinking of what she should say to him. Because I had no idea, I went with her also having no idea đđ)
March 23, 2023 at 8:54 pm #138217@freedomwriter76 @mineralizedwritings
Matthew
Jared glanced around nervously as sweet Lesli handed him a plate filled with delicious food.
Tauren and I sat side by side, watching anxiously as Tony spoke with âCrowâ.
He was now in hand-cuffs, and Tony would make sure that he couldnât harm usâŚ
But Jared still seemed uneasy.
And, to be honest, I was too.
âHey maybe you could get that key from him too?â Tauren asked Tony, nodding at Jared.
âOh yes. The key.â Lesli scoffed underneath her breath, before her gaze strayed to Jared, who was staring at his plate nervously.
âCan I-I really e-eat thisâŚ?â He said softly, still unbelieving.
His meekness and discipline was astonishing, and I felt a wave of disgust and pity.
Pity for Jared. By the look of him, he hadnât eaten muchâŚ
And disgust for what-ever-his-name-was-crow-guy.
Tony nodded at Jared. âDig in. Donât worry about that Crow over there.â He turned to Tauren. âI can try to get the keyâŚCrow over there might try to fight back though. Think you could distract him, Hurricane Hair?â
I leaned back in my chair, but then Tony said, âHow about you, Matthew, wanna help? Lesli can stay with Jared if she wants.â
I looked up quickly.
âYou donât have to help if you donât want to.â Tony added, dropping an easy smile.
âYouâŚyou want m-me to h-help?â I asked dubiously.
No one ever wants my helpâŚ
And I donât blame them. Iâm not much help at allâŚ
Tonyâs eyebrows furrowed. âIs there another Matthew somewhere in here?â He asked. âYes, you,â he exclaimed.
âBut, as I said before, you donât have to help unless you want to.â
A slow smile spread across my face.
He really does want my help!Â
I nodded eagerly. âS-sure! What do you need me to do?â
#HugRikerSquad
March 24, 2023 at 2:38 pm #138248@theloonyone Iâm sorry if Crosshair scared you, ElissaâŚâŚhe gets like that sometimes. Even I canât control him completely.
And hey, not knowing what sheâll say opens up opportunities for @freedomwriter76 to RP!
Where'd I get ya this time? The liver? The kidney? I'm runnin' outta places to put holes in ya.
March 24, 2023 at 3:55 pm #138285Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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HITCHENS
âSo, Hitchens, right?â Elissa asked, stopping beside him.
Hitchens turned to face her, offering the fine maiden a soft smile. âThat is correct. Is something amiss, Madam?â
Elissa quickly shook her head, glancing over her shoulder for a quick moment at Feather and Cammie.
Hitchens bit the inside of his cheek.
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Heâd partially heard FeatherâŚand heâd most certainly heard Crosshair.
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They didnât want him here.
That much was obvious.
And if he didnât say otherwiseâŚthey would get the others to believe and want the same.
Elissa faced him again, and Hitchens gave her a slightly playful grin. âIâd recommendâŚignoring your acquaintances. They have only met me once, and it was in a chaotic moment. They haveâŚjudged me on one thing. But an officer does what he must in these times.â
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He didnât have time for everyone in this group to be against him.
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They were either for him or against him.
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And they would regret being against him.
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But right now wasnât the time to attack.
He was outnumbered.
He needed to waitâŚfor the perfect moment.
March 24, 2023 at 4:09 pm #138303@freedomwriter76 @theloonyone
Oh, boy. Hitchensâ words mightâve touched a nerve.
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Crosshair
âIâd recommendâŚignoring your acquaintances. They have only met me once, and it was in a chaotic moment. They haveâŚjudged me on one thing. But an officer does what he must in these times.â Hitchens was introducing himself to Elissa.
But an officer does what he must in these times.
The words echoed through Crosshairâs mind, even though he knew they werenât meant for him.
Had Rampart been âdoing what he mustâ? Had Hemlock? Nolan? Tarkin?
Torturing him? Exiling Cody? Imprisoning Howzer or any of the others?
Was that simply âwhat must be done?â
Crosshair tightened his grip on his rifle, trying to restrain the growl building in his throat and the angry words thatâd come with it.
Heâd been starved, frozen, poisoned (twice). All because of them.
That wasnât âwhat must be done.â
That was manipulation.
Or torment.
Or both.
Where'd I get ya this time? The liver? The kidney? I'm runnin' outta places to put holes in ya.
March 24, 2023 at 4:10 pm #138304Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@keilah-h Crosshair!!!! đđđ
March 24, 2023 at 4:14 pm #138307@freedomwriter76 IKR? Poor guyâŚâŚ.
Where'd I get ya this time? The liver? The kidney? I'm runnin' outta places to put holes in ya.
March 24, 2023 at 4:42 pm #138318@keilah-h @freedomwriter76
elissa
Elissa clenched her fists as Hitchens spoke. She could see Crosshair in front of them, tensing and tightening his grip on his rifleas he listened. âI think, Elissa started, âThat what someone does during a chaotic moment tells you a lot about them.â
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March 24, 2023 at 4:46 pm #138320Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@keilah-h @theloonyone Uh ohâŚtension is brewing!!! đŹ
HITCHENS
âI think, that what someone does during a chaotic moment tells you a lot about them.â Elissa said, her gaze on Crosshair.
Hitchens merely nodded.
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HmmâŚmaybe it would be best if he left this group sooner rather than later.
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He shrugged. âWhatever opinion you believe is none of my business. Doesnât make it right or intelligent.â
(uh ohâŚđ )
March 24, 2023 at 4:52 pm #138322Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@lightoverdarkness6 @mineralizedwritings I should probably do Tony, huh? XD
And Light, Matthew is just sooo sweet and cute!!! â¤ď¸â¤ď¸â¤ď¸
TONY
A slow smile spread across Matthewâs face. He nodded eagerly. âS-sure! What do you need me to do?â
Tony smiled.
This kid didnât seem to be used to people asking him for helpâŚand he had heart, that much was obvious. Maybe even a bit of spunk.
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Like Peter.
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Who wasnât here.
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Tony pushed that painful thought aside and faced Matthew again. âI need to get the key from around Acheronâs neck and thatâs also underneath his armor. You could help me with that, orâŚ.you could be a distraction. Take your pick. Tauren can do the other if heâd like, or both of you can decide what to do together, either way, we need to get that key and release this kid.â He nodded towards Jared, who was eating food with a starved vigor.
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Poor kid.
(Tony called Tauren by his name for once!!! đ)
March 25, 2023 at 8:21 pm #138457@theloonyone @freedomwriter76
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Crosshair
âWhatever opinion you believe is none of my business. Doesnât make it right or intelligent.â Hitchens muttered.
âAnd what do you call âright?'â Crosshair snarled, loud enough to make Feather and Cammie look up from their conversation. âWould you torture a man for not agreeing with you? Would you leave him stranded in the cold if he told you something you didnât like?â He looked from the officer to Elissa. âIâve dealt with the likes of you before, Colonel Hitchens. My friendâŚmy brotherâŚheâhe died because of someone like you.â
He raised his rifle. âAnd I made sure that man wouldnât hurt anyone else. So unless you want the same thing to happen to you, I suggest you stay quiet.â
Where'd I get ya this time? The liver? The kidney? I'm runnin' outta places to put holes in ya.
March 26, 2023 at 2:05 pm #138495@freedomwriter76 Hitchens has full permission from me to hurt Crosshair however he wants, just keep these in mind:
- no lethal injuries
- nothing that will take months to heal (like a broken limb)
Where'd I get ya this time? The liver? The kidney? I'm runnin' outta places to put holes in ya.
March 27, 2023 at 1:07 pm #138591@loopylin @princesachronicle22 @mineralizedwritings Anyone going to RP for our group? I know @freedomwriter76 mentioned maybe getting the other group close so loopylinâs twins could be reunited.
Where'd I get ya this time? The liver? The kidney? I'm runnin' outta places to put holes in ya.
March 27, 2023 at 2:53 pm #138603Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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HITCHENS
Crosshair raised hisâŚweapon, rifle-like thing. âAnd I made sure that man wouldnât hurt anyone else. So unless you want the same thing to happen to you, I suggest you stay quiet.â
Hitchens gave a low chuckle. âMyâŚisnât someone in a mood? I never said I would hurt anyone, CrosshairâŚthereâs no need to beâŚrash.â
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He smiled easily, sadistically. ââŚAnd Iâd suggest for everyone in this room to calm down.â
March 27, 2023 at 3:15 pm #138609@keilah-h @mineralizedwritings @loopylin
Yeah I was just about to do Serin! (;
sorry it was so late though
SERIN
The pain⌠the.. burning..
Her thoughts were muddled. She had been dimly aware of the group moving her out to the huge ball room. Then a strange face appearing as sheâd been layed out on the marbled floor. Now she rest with her eyes closed, head rested on a jacket someone had given her.
She heard nearby murmers and the faint crackling of a fire. Then faint footsteps. Her eyes struggled to open and she caught a glimpse of a woman, reaching for her arm. Her painfully clenched limbs struggled to move away, but it was futile and her arm was then held in a gentle grip.
Serin gave a sigh as a warm substance coated her arm, seeping nto the punctured crevices and providing a deep relief fron her pain. Her muscles relaxed and the woman let her arm fall lightly to the floor.
Her thoughts blurred together.
Should have weathered the pain⌠too weakâŚâŚ.
But.. too strongâŚ.
Theyâre⌠helping me⌠why..?
Her mind drifted off, fatigue and soreness coating her. Serin drempt of home, of the people she needed to get back to. The blacks, whites and reds colored her mind in pictures. Of her little niece, who could be in danger for all she knew, of her father, of Kunâen left to run an army without her. She tried to push the nagging mental images away, wanting instead to sink into silence⌠into darknessâŚ
CRASH!
Serinâs eyes shot open and she blinked up at darkness. It took a moment to remeber where she was, what had happened. As the details slowly came back, she gave a soft grunt and sat up, feeling much stranger than she had before, though still weaker than normal. She wasnât sure how much time had past or how long sheâd been asleep, but it couldnât have been more than an hour or so.
She looked around to see what had caused the loud sound, wondering if she had imagined it. Then Serin noticed Ellie glancing about the vast space as well, dying coals under an odd looking pot faintly illuminating her form. âWhaââ her voice came out dry and she coughed before trying again. âWhat was that?â
âOh, your awake.â Serin couldnât see the girlâs expression clearly in the dimness, but she thought she saw maybe just a measure of relief. But she was probably imagining things, her mind still dreary from the poisen. Ellieâs tail twitched and she shook her head before saying, âI donât know. But whatever it was⌠we should probably check it out. Just to be safe.â
Serin nodded nodded in tired agreement, before moving to stand up, willing her muscles to obey. Faint spots protruded into her vision and she tried not to sway, covering her weakness as best she could. She grabbed Ellieâs jacket and handed it back without looking at her. She still didnât fully understand their help and kindness. Serin had only known them for a brief time. Had done nothing to earn any semblance of loyalty.
She shook her head and crossed her arms, noticing some of the others as they stirred awake. Serin leaned against the nearest pillar for support, trying to look casual while she waited for the others to rise fully. One woman, one Serin only hazily recgonized, went over to Ellie and Allen, who had just stood up with a curious expresson. âYou may go and search out the disturbance.â She said softly, probably unaware of Serinâs widely ranged hearing. âI will stay with the wounded one to make sure her injuries remain stable.â
Serin bristled, putting a hand on her dagger hilt. âThe wounded oneâ? Her hackles rose, but just as suddenly she felt her shoulders sag. Sheâd barely been able to stand, who knew what could have happend whithout this strangerâs help?
Serin glared at the floor, feeling frustrated. She hated the weakness, the helplessness. Hated that she had to be strong. Resented both her parents. Resented herself for never being good enough. Never brutal enough, yet never soft enough.
She hated that she was torn in half.
Blowing out a frustrated breath she looked up at the woman and said. âIâm coming.â As if to prove her strength, she pushed off the wall and stalked towards the hall where theyâd heard the crash.
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So @freedomwriter76 I was wondering if they find your group with Eddie while theyâre looking for what made the sound? Does that work?
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