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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 1 month ago
@godlyfantasy12 @elishavet-pidyon @koshka @freedomwriter76 All right then, here we go.
Crosshair
It was a little amusing, the way the fox thing was snarling at him like it wanted to bite his head off. Crosshair knew he could easily kick it into the wall before it even penetrated his armor.
“Hey!” one of the characters yelled, before also…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Story Idea in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 4 years, 1 month ago
Ooo, intriguing. What sort of kingdom is this? Is the king good?
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Koshka replied to the topic Hey, Everyone! in the forum Start HERE 4 years, 1 month ago
Welcome to the Kingdom! I write non-magical medieval-fantasy.
What do you mean by ‘middle ages’? That’s a pretty wide range of time… Is it historical fiction?
What is your WIP about? (Work In Progress)
If you could ride a dragon for a day or have a horse for life, which would you choose?
Do you like, dislike, or just…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Anyone else love Moodboards/Aesthetics? in the forum Art 4 years, 1 month ago
I just flipped back through it, and remembered what I loved most about it; it’s far more likely to mention prayer than profanity.
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Koshka replied to the topic Another SCENE!!!! Any thoughts y'all? in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 1 month ago
THANK YOU!!!
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Koshka replied to the topic Anyone else love Moodboards/Aesthetics? in the forum Art 4 years, 1 month ago
Oh, yikes! He’s on front lines then…
Have you ever read American Heroes: in the Fight Against Radical Islam by Oliver North? It’s amazing, although there are some instances of military language, and I don’t mean tactical terms. That’s where I first got introduced to the military medical field.
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Koshka replied to the topic Another SCENE!!!! Any thoughts y'all? in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 1 month ago
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Koshka replied to the topic Another SCENE!!!! Any thoughts y'all? in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 2 months ago
That scene makes me want to hit someone. Hard.
And also makes me think of all the stories I’ve heard.
And seriously…will you need beta readers?
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 2 months ago
@godlyfantasy12 what do you mean? He’s my character already.
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 2 months ago
@godlyfantasy12 @freedomwriter76 @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon
Sorry y’all.
Mikkel
Grey tunics, mail shirts, long swords, helmets, and shields. The taller one wearing a matching grey cloak, the other’s crimson.
Who were these fellows? Two foreign soldiers, stepped out of the castle walls?
Where was he?
movement caught his attention. Another…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 2 months ago
Okay, that was NOT tomorrow. But here’s my character! He’s not too much of a talker (the show described him as “not much of a conversationalist,” so to cut down on the large number of tags I’ll probably just tag whoever owns the character he happens to be talking to. That all right with you?
All right, I’ll start…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 2 months ago
@hallie-jean @e-m-trepke @power
Feather and Rinzler
“Everett,” said Feather. “That’s a nice name, actually.”
“Fits him better than the Dark Player does,” Rinzler mused.
Feather’s gaze flicked to the newcomers. “Hello, Molly and Xavier. You two have great names as well. I’m Feather, and over there is my friend, Rinzler. I’ll let the other two…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Does this sound remotly interesting to anyone? in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 4 years, 2 months ago
I don’t think I’ve ever read dystopian, but that sounds interesting.
What do you mean “doesn’t end in a successful rebellion?” (If it wouldn’t spoil it)
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 2 months ago
Why don’t you go ahead? Not to sound weird and stalking, but Freedomwriter isn’t on.
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 2 months ago
And I accidentally tagged myself… brilliant.
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 2 months ago
@godlyfantasy12. @elishavet-pidyon. @koshka
Mikkel
Weapon ready, blood hot, heart solid stone. A small weathered door stood at the end of this passage. Mikkel pressed himself to the wall as close to the door as he dared. He felt Riker and Ezra beside him.
Voices…young voices.
“Are there any female guards that you know of?” a girl. “If not…p…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Anyone else love Moodboards/Aesthetics? in the forum Art 4 years, 2 months ago
Wowsers.
What type of medic? (If you know that yet)
I am seriously thrilled with the prospect of the medical side of war. I have started research for Cecelia, my other MC for Seas of Fury, and it’s nuts how much this field has grown in the last wars.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic MAJOR WIP SPOILER FORUM!!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 2 months ago
@elishavet-pidyon That’s super sad, but amazing storytelling all at the same time. I want to read your book……
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Koshka replied to the topic Hello world! in the forum Start HERE 4 years, 2 months ago
Ah, black tea almost begs for cream.
It certainly is interesting, although for me it’s a lot easier than historical fiction, the genre I started out in.
Flash fiction is basically extra-short short stories, often only a few paragraphs long, like character sketches. It’s quite amusing, besides being good for writing…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 2 months ago
@elishavet-pidyon @freedomwriter76 @godlyfantasy12
This is getting awesome!
The Brothers
“Singing.” Vulkasin grinned.
Nyx came back, placing his tiny self between Lyn and the building.
He turned to the Mynclaises. “Is it usual for Ocran’s gaurds to sing?”
Alyona shook her head.
He turned to the fox. “Could you tell the type of song?”
Ara…[Read more]
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