TheLobsterLover

@freedomwriter76 Are you kidding me??m!! I love fanfics, and yours does an AMAZING job. Making your beloved (and technically not yours) characters have really dramatic inner turmoil is a fanfiction writer’s LIFE, practically. At least in my case. Great job. I enjoyed it, and sorta like seeing seemingly invulnerable characters with emotions.

@emilysf @godlyfantasy12 @elishavet-pidyon

Is it my turn, or does Mila get a chance?

By the by, Emilysf, do you know what the name Mila means when it has an Old Slavic base?

@elishavet-pidyon

Aahhhhhhh!!!!!!! Alwin, my dear lad…*sigh* That sounds awesome for a first chapter; definitely something I could get hooked on.

Honestly I’ve always envisioned your books to be more YA than middle grade, so don’t worry about that. Your themes will be more powerful to an older age group anyway.

Yes, it’s Mikkel! Thank you,…[Read more]

Not entirely sure who to tag, but here goes!

@emilysf @godlyfantasy12 @elishavet-pidyon

This is part of a scene I’ve had running through my head. It’s from the serie’s last book, Seas of Fury, which is set about 800 Years later, so the technology is way more advanced than in the first two books.

Fog swirled around him, penetrated by something…

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@freedomwriter76 I can’t actually draw that well. I traced that drawing off a picture I took of a page in a comic….

@everybody I actually had a situation like this in a character a couple months ago. Here is this stern, fierce, typically cynical and sometimes selfish character, standing over the aftermath of a battle where the character he was sworn to protect sacrificed herself to defeat the main villain, and he literally drops his weapon, falls to his knees…[Read more]

@starshiness Those are awesome tidbits of story! Sadly, I don’t have anything which could fit in a single paragraph. I sorta think in long stories…….

@freedomwriter76 What fanfics do you typically write? I have them for everything, and I mean EVERYTHING. Star Wars, Marvel, Jurassic World, a little-known Disney sci-fi called Tron, Warrior Cats, and one that happens to be a combination of all of those.

And wow, that’s a long story!! I honestly wish I could stay on one project that long, I…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12 I don’t know any real-world person with DID, nor do I know any characters, but having SPD (sensory processing) myself, I can sorta sympathize with characters who have inner issues. While I don’t consider my condition to be hindering at all, I can see why Corvina’s really would be. I would just suggest research, like everyone else.…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76 This is best explained with my traced drawing of him.

….Yeah….I chopped off his left arm….and replaced it with a totally cool mechanical one but STILL…. (it’s kinda hard to see)

Same treatment for his bionic eye. He lost it in the same battle, too. I think it looks cool on him, but I have no clue where my brain came up…[Read more]

@hallie-jean @e-m-trepke @power

Rinzler and Feather

“Feather, are you sure this’ll work?” Rinzler asked, but it was too late. Feather was already standing on the Dark Player’s shoulders, reaching up toward the vent.

A loud creaking sounded through the room, and water started pouring in through holes in the walls. “Hurry up,” said Rinzler…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76 Yep. I’ve done crazy things to characters in my fanfictions (which happen to be 99% of my writing). On the subject of Marvel, you don’t wanna know what I did to Star-Lord…….

@starshiness Thank you! The name Keilah was that of a Biblical fortress and means “citadel;” and my brother’s name is Ethan which means “strong” so it kind of goes with it….

Also, my dad had the same opinion about Reckless Love, which kinda ruined the song for me when he just straight up said that when my family was listening to the…[Read more]

@starshiness Hi there! I’m Keilah, you can call me K if you want. I like your name, because in one story I wrote, the cat character I had made for myself was called Starshine!

@godlyfantasy12 I think your characters are so cool! I want to hear more about them! (I can see why November’s your good boy. I feel that way sometimes ABOUT CHARACTERS I DIDN’T EVEN CREATE BUT HAVE THE TENDENCY TO TORTURE IN MY FANFICS….WHY???) And two of your characters are siblings, and don’t even know it???!! That’s awesome!

@hallie-jean @power @e-m-trepke

Sorry for such a late response–I was sick this past week or so, and couldn’t really answer. I’m fine now, though.

Feather and Rinzler

“Let’s look for a way outta here,” Dark suggested.

Feather noticed he was especially wary about the room. The holes in the walls did remind her of a trap room which poured water…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

I can’t hold them in. *Sigh* maybe a few won’t hurt the system.

What are November’s uncontrollable powers?

How did he escape being killed?

Who exactly is his father?

About how old are these characters when the explosion comes?

Did Eder know?

What color eyes does Corvina have? (Sorry if you already said somewhere and I just…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

I. Did. Not. See. That. Coming.

Wow. No wonder his father is so awful…wait. is he really his Dad? (You don’t have to answer if you don’t want to.)

This will definitely stay here!

And now so many questions are piling up in my head that I’d better not start asking any more. The forum may not be able to take it. XD

@godlyfantasy12

YES I DO!!!!!