Tabitha Cassandra

@gracie-j Ooh this looks so fun!!! Thank you so much for tagging me:D

I’m *cough* currently trying to survive the last two weeks of college–would it be okay if I let you know in the coming days? Either way I’ll definitely be keeping my eye on this!

@kathleenramm

Ooo, awesome question!  Well, my answer would be that I hate the passive heroes.  The ones that let everyone tell them what to do, or the ones that just “go with the flow.”  There’s a time and a place for that, but definitely not in the MC, imo! 😄

Oh, and melodramatic/overly-emotional heroes are the worst!!  Like when they just sit…[Read more]

@daisy-torres

Thank you! I’ll definitely do that then:)

@gracie-j

Ah, I get you on 1# 100% I’ve actually never read a romance novel before, (the subplots are usually good enough for me:) but I agree with you that I’d like the guy over the girl in that type of story.
I know what you mean about shallow and underdeveloped characters as well. I mean even in novels that are not romance, I come across more…[Read more]

@daisy-torres

From :24–:12= 554 words

Last lines:

Am I strong? I can learn to be; only the strong are hopeful.
Am I ready? It’s now or never, and I can’t go back.
Am I hope? Michael believes I am. He sees it in me.  I think I’m learning to believe him.

We’ll have to do it again sometime, Daisy. 😉

@daisy-torres

Of course, thanks for joining!!! 😃  Awesome word count and last line!!!!!  Super intriguing 🙂

@daisy-torres

Cool, starting at :24

@daisy-torres

i loooove the leaderboard idea!!!!  awesome job!

@issawriter7

girk, you did soooo good!!!! 😃💛

@daisy-and/or-issa, @when-i-see-the-kingdom, @nanisnook, @abigail-m, @writerlexi1216, @mkfairygirl, @devastate-lasting

Want to write with me rn?  or soon?

@sparksaraabbott11

Hey!  Sorry I’m late… but welcome to KP!!!  I’m Ella, and as I was reading over past posts, I see we have a lot in common!  KotLC is like my favorite series ever!!!  And all the music you mentioned I love!  And Song of the Sea…  I have literally watched that five times–it is sooo good!!

A little more about me:  I play bb…[Read more]

@gracie-j

OOO, I am loving this topic!! 😉  (You are such a good writer btw!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!)  And you’re totally not the only romance guru out there–I adore sweet/well-written romances sooo much!!!!!!!!!

My favorite kiss scenes are the ones where you’ve been waiting for it for so long, and then when it happens, everything seems r…[Read more]

@gracie-j Ahem. Yes. I used to do the “He kissed her.” thing. Recently I’ve been trying to take some advice in, uh, describing it. Me, trying to describe what it feels like out of my own imagination:

I also tend to cut things short, so you’ll probably be ending up with like a paragraph long thing. But yea, I might give it another try next time I…[Read more]

@nanisnook

Sure! I can’t always promise I’ll be one, but I’d be grateful if you tagged me:)

@writerlexi1216

I think Anton would think that’s an excellent idea! He’s never had coffee before either, I believe he and Caira would get along really well:)
Are you kidding? That was just about the greatest/most hilarious excerpt I’ve ever read! There’s no way I could forget that one:) Haha, plus I’ve love those two’s dynamics, even in the…[Read more]

@scripter-of-kingdoms #iwouldliketoseeyoutry

@nanisnook Yes, very red.

@gracie-j Mm…maybe, maybe. You’ve seen how I skimp on descriptions. I mean…I guess if I can imagine kiss scenes…that might…hmmm….

Ah, yes, GWTW was very very spicy. And also, mood about cheek-kissing.

1. I’m sure there are, haha. I wouldn’t call the first scene…[Read more]

@kayleigh-idea

Hey!  Can I finish the last one tomorrow?  So sorry for taking awhile–I’ve super, super busy!!!

But thank you so much for letting me read and critique your story!!  I wish you the best with editing, publishing, and your whole Project Gorgon journey!!!!  You’ve got talent, and I’m so glad you’re using it to glorify God!

Best,

Ella

@gracie-j Ah, shoot, I left for too long and my post disappeared…never mind.

Pfft, thanks for tagging me, even with what you know about me. I like to feel included.

Ah, before I read your scene I don’t think I’ve read a kiss scene for maybe 6 years? Not sure. And usually I either avert my eyes during movies or watch with some sort of wide-eyed…[Read more]

@daisy-torres Ey, thanks for making this, girl! This’ll make me more motivated to write, I think!

@daisy-torres

Thank you! I’ll hopefully start writing between six and ten a.m. Central. But I’m not sure if anyone else writes at those times, if so, I’d be happy to join:)

Congratulations everyone!!! I’m hoping to join you all this week since I’m moving my writing schedule up to more early morning:) Again, fantastic job:D

@scoutfinch180

I agree with you 100% 🙂