Scoutillus Finch

@scoutfinch180

Oooo… Yup, I definitely love him! XD

@elishavet-pidyon @joy-caroline @anatra23

<333 Yup! 😀

@trahia-the-minstrel

Love the lines!!! Your character sounds like a very wise guy and a lot of fun. 🙂

@anatra23 @scoutfinch180

It is traumatic. I was telling my brother about my book and about Rubin, when suddenly I stopped and just said “oh no.”

He started laughing.

Since then it has been a battle of ‘why’. If his death wasn’t a pivital point in my story, he would have a good chance of surviving. As it is, I already have a song for his funeral.

@koshka

Oof, Korean is hard sometimes. I think I only struggle mostly with pronouncing the vowel sounds accurately… and sentence structure… and formal tones… and… you get the picture. It’s great to learn tho!
Learning is made a lot easier, since I’ve been blessed with a tutor who’s half Korean, and can speak and read it. I was nannying…[Read more]

@scoutfinch180

Poor Jake… :'( Love the lines, though!

@elishavet-pidyon

Ruben sounds like an amazing brother and an amazing character! I’m a fan already. 🙂

@koshka

Agh, I love the accent! Otto sounds like a fun guy. XD

@issawriter7

Aww, thank you so much! <3333

*chilled by first two lines* *heartbroken by the last line* I wanna…[Read more]

@seekerofthetruth

Oooooo, I’m glad you asked!!! Honestly, the first thing I would do is give the character internal questions. Like, if the character is worried about something, show the reader he/she asking the question to him/herself. Like how @scoutfinch180 did in the first two examples Scoutillus gave. Inner monologue can really go a long…[Read more]

@elishavet-pidyon

Pleasure to meet you!

I am @ScoutFinch180. I am 19 years old and recently graduated high school. I love fantasy as well and have roughly 6 completed stories, two short stories approximately 8,000 words long, and then some pieces of flash fiction 500 to 1000+ words long. I’ve written much more than that in the form of…[Read more]

(@scoutfinch180 Very good point!)

My eyes fell on a bottle of chipotle chili power perched upon a brand-new package of double-sided tape.

A rescue? I think not…this called for a trap.

(Question: with the “three sentence rule”, does that mean three grammatical sentences or more like three lines? Mixes of dialogue and fragment sentences make i…[Read more]

@scoutfinch180

Like I said it’s first draft so there are repeated word choices like utter shock XD

@scoutfinch180

Kaunon has been into a lot of scrape and survived by the skin of his teeth, the scares are from fire battles and a nasty sand dragon that tried to eat him and when that didn’t work it tried to crush him 😂

here is the meeting of Alinnas parents

Gaol kept flying north, and after a few hours of steady flight, passed the m…

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@scoutfinch180

Kaunon has gotten into many scrape and mostly to save dear little Alinna and both of them get into trouble… they’re royals kids, they have little experience with real life outside their homes… the ones you n his face are from protecting Alinna and his friends from a nasty dragon/monster

and here is the first meeting of A…[Read more]

@scoutfinch180 Hi! Thanks for the input. I’ll see how I can improve it for sure! 🙂 I’m not really into emotional scenes of this kind but these two have a special relationship, so I wanted to add it. And this is the first draft which is why there may be repeating words, and thank you for mentioning that as I sometimes forget that kind of stuff X…[Read more]

@scoutfinch180 Absolutely, anytime. Thanks for the read.

@scoutfinch180

Thank you for tagging me! I’m glad I didn’t miss this:) It hooked me right on the sentence where the siren’s tail is mentioned and from there I was reeled right into the story. The songs and aesthetic were awesome, the only suggestion I can make in that area is that the second line of the third song felt kind of prolonged and…[Read more]

@scoutfinch180 if I may, I simply glanced at KP for a moment, but now after reading this, I want more of its kind.

I love this captivating little tale. Criticism I don’t have much of here, it was pretty compact, perhaps a little less scene description if you’re really trying to shave it down further. Maybe explore more of the curiosity that the…[Read more]

@abigail-m

I also like the Chosen One hero, but sometimes I feel like it’s a bit over done in fantasy and dystopian novels.

Yeah, I definitely agree about anti-heros. I really like strong and inspiring characters, that although are from from perfect, are still striving for good.

@devastate-lasting

And this is probably one of the most popular…[Read more]

@scoutfinch180

I agree with you 100% 🙂

@nova21 @scoutfinch180 @gracie-j

Happy Easter! I just added the final five chapters to the doc! You can take your time with these one because you have two weeks!

@nova21 @scoutfinch180 @gracie-j

Chapters 21-25 are now in the doc!