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RAE replied to the topic Guardian Angels, a space story in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 2 months ago
@scoutfinch180 @jonas @whalekeeper @loopylin @highscribeofaetherium @savannah_grace2009 @godlyfantasy12
This is a section of chapter two i’m finally happy with, so now I’m posting it here so you all ca read it/critique it. enjoy!
“Nahim. Nahim!”
Mandin waved his large hand in front of his 19-year-old friend’s hidden face. Nahim brushed Mandi…
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Light replied to the topic The mailbox! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
Awwwww Otto and Hugo are so sweeeet 🥰🥰 I love y’all’s charries
I’d like to join if it’s okay with you guys?
just need to find that address that I wrote down and created for this very topic last summer 😂🤭 -
Esther replied to the topic The mailbox! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
Ok, awesome! I’ll have to write one soon
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Stepheroni and Cheese replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 2 years, 2 months ago
Okay just realised it was not at all clear who I was talking to.
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whaley replied to the topic Character Interviews in the forum Characters 2 years, 2 months ago
QuEsTiOnS I have genuinely wondered.
Easton, what kind of person are you in a friend group?
Lois, tell me all your feeling concerning Felicity and don’t skimp on the details.
Chase, if you could change into a baby polar bear or a penguin for the rest of your life, which would you be?
Livia, hav…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
sooo… I saw this earlier but somehow totally forgot to RP. 🤦🏻♀️ My baddd 😂
Callista
Callie’s eyes lit up. “Yes! I believe one other girl’s in our dorm. I think her name is Sef.”
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Esther replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 2 years, 2 months ago
Oh ok. The teachers I had on video were awesome. (Most of them… some of them not so much XD)
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Help, I Don't Understand Keepers of the Lost Cities in the forum Fantasy 2 years, 2 months ago
@savannah_grace2009 well I didn’t even notice it, so…… lol
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Esther replied to the topic Help, I Don't Understand Keepers of the Lost Cities in the forum Fantasy 2 years, 2 months ago
Ok, I think that finally helped everything click in my brain. I probably got distracted while I was reading. That happens to me sometimes, especially when I’m reading my textbooks for school. I’ll read a few paragraphs and be thinking about something totally different, and then be like, “I have no idea what I just read.…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 2 years, 2 months ago
I’ve actually used that program when I was homeschooled, and it really wasn’t my favorite. I don’t know why…I just didn’t feel like it taught me that much XD
We used Sonlight, and then we just combined a bunch of curriculums for what we needed.
Fair XD Did you use the videos or did a parent teach you?
Yeah, if you’ve ho…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Help, I Don't Understand Keepers of the Lost Cities in the forum Fantasy 2 years, 2 months ago
@esther-c @savannah_grace2009 Inappropriate stuff?
Nothing I’ve seen that’s really bad. Worldbuilding wise, some things they say can get weird if you look too close at it……For example someone mentions “star and planetary alignments” in one sentence, but tbh that’s been so overused in so many fantasy stories, I shrugged it off, not really…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
@savannah_grace2009 @rae She’s so pretty!! @trailblazer
Amir
Amir let out a nervous chuckle, his voice somehow cracking in the process. He cleared his throat and tried to stop tapping his finger against his leg. “Um, that’s j-just what w-we, uh, do.”
Marcurious still didn’t look convinced.
“Our, our names have meaning,” Amir explained, hi…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Help, I Don't Understand Keepers of the Lost Cities in the forum Fantasy 2 years, 2 months ago
Okay…you’re talking about the Black Swan right? Or the Neverseen (have you met them yet?)
Umm… I think I’m talking about the Black Swan. XD
Spoilers: Black Swan=good guys, Neverseen=bad guys.
Ok… I think that makes a little more sense now.
Yeah, the love triangle….oh my gosh…the guy who was literally drooling over her made me c…
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Trailblazer replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
@savannah_grace2009 @esther-c @rae
Kari
While Marcurious and Amir were talking, a sudden movement to Kari’s right caught her eye. As she turned her head, she noticed another guy hesitantly approaching the group.
“H-hello?” he called out. “Is everyone okay? I heard a scream.”
“We’re fine- I think,” Kari replied. “Marcurious was hiding in the…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
@savannah_grace2009 @trailblazer @rae
Amir
Amir closed his gaping mouth and finally swallowed. He still didn’t understand who this guy was. Although he wore mostly black, he had no yellow sash, so that was a good sign. And he seemed to be carrying no weapons—that was always a nice indication if someone was friendly or not.
“I-I am Amir. R-roh…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Help, I Don't Understand Keepers of the Lost Cities in the forum Fantasy 2 years, 2 months ago
@savannah_grace2009 @keilah-h @whalekeeper
Hmm… interesting… Just read your rant Whaley and I can see these things even in the first book!!
Although I’m gonna try to keep reading them, I was a little confused at the end of the first book… Maybe I missed something earlier on, but why are these people trying to contact her and why did these o…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
@whalekeeper @rae @savannah_grace2009
Yes, Fynn is a wonderful friend 😂😂
@sara
Callista
Callie didn’t expect the tears that sprung to her eyes. She smiled and wiped them away. What Liv had said was like what her mother used to remind her of whenever she started feeling that way. She turned her head on the pillow. “Thank you.”
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Help, I Don't Understand Keepers of the Lost Cities in the forum Fantasy 2 years, 2 months ago
@savannah_grace2009 Same!! The books aren’t the greatest I’ve ever read, but I love some of the worldbuilding.
oh btw, book 9 is when she finally makes her choice, if you don’t mind the spoilers. I won’t tell you who she chooses though.
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Trailblazer replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
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Loopy replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 3 months ago
@rae I find natural medicine really interesting, so that was fun to read @whalekeeper @jonas @savannah_grace2009
Felicity
From behind, Lois silently handed Felicity an old but clean handkerchief. She began to clean off the blood from her right arm and the slime from everywhere else. Underneath, her arms and knees were scratched up and starting…[Read more]
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