Sara

@savannah_grace2009

Hey, it’s good to see you on again!

Also,

😭😭😭😭 why does it have to be so saaaaaaaad???????? 😖 (It was a great snippet though)

@savannah_grace2009

Don’t feel bad at all!!!

I feel like I’ve been so bad at being consistent reading it anyway 😅 My summer’s going to be pretty busy, but definitely not as busy as the school year, so I’ll probably be able to read through your whole book before the end of summer! And our break starts next week, so that’s as soon as I’ll be a…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

Ah, it’s saddd!! 🥺 Good job!

I love your description of Sef’s eyes!! 💛💛

@trailblazer

@esther

@rae

@jonas

@grcr

@savannah_grace2009

@freed_and_redeemed

@highscribeofaetherium

Sorry, everyone!

Thank you, Trailblazer, for helping me!

Here is the link to read my book:

file:///Users/barrydurmaz/Downloads/Into%20the%20Mind%20of%20Liberty/IntotheMindofLiberty.html

Make sure you copy the entire line.

@savannah_grace2009

Oh yeah I totally get it. No worries! <3

Ah, I gotcha. I’m kinda there too. At least in one of my WIPs. If I really set myself loose on a different one I’ve been working on on the side, then I’d be writing a lot. XD

Ok, awesome! Glad it was helpful!

Of course!! 😊

Who owns the Math teacher? Cuz I was wondering if it would be interesting if she came across Chase. Since @savannah_grace2009 is not really active rn, I can’t really have him actually find Sef like he wanted, but I can’t think of something else for him to do.

@grcr @whalekeeper @keilah-h @esther-c @lightoverdarkness6 @koshka @elishavet-pidyon @loopylin @smiley @rae @savannah_grace2009 @highscribeofaetherium @gracie-j @godlyfantasy12 @anyone-else-lol

who wants to read more Leon and Riker???

perhaps no one, but I want to share anyhow😂

anywhoooo, here we gooooooooooo

Klaus…Louisa…everyone sai…

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@savannah_grace2009

I’ve read some more of your book! I think I stopped at chapter 16.

The only big thing I’ve noticed so far is that Sef’s expression of her grief feels a little unrealistic. Of course anyone would be devastated if their only family they had left was taken away, that part makes sense. I just felt that her hurting herself reall…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

Huh…I have always loved multiple POV first person books, because then you get into the head of multiple characters! But I know it can be confusing, it just never has been a problem for me because in my mind, every character has a distinct voice.

Yeah, maybe the ones I’ve read aren’t very good. I haven’t read many.

@rae @savannah_grace2009 lol I love the memes

@savannah_grace2009

I forgot to tag you a second time in my post. Part of my rely to you is the last quote and paragraph on the post above the post above this one. (That’s unnecessarily complicated…. XDD)

@stephie

Yeah, plotting is probably one of my weaker points of writing. 😂 The extent to which I plot varies from story to story and I’m not sure if that’s a good thing… XD

Another suggestion would be to try and write the worst first draft you could possibly write. That’s how my dad got more than 100% on a university level essay.

I may just ha…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

Out of context,if you don’t know who Buck is, you probably won’t get it, but I’ve seen some Buck Wild scenes off of YouTube, and in context  🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

@savannah_grace2009

THAT WAS GREAT XDXD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!perfect!. Now I’ll make the dragon one…

@savannah_grace2009

I like first person, but I generally prefer third. Some first person books are great, like Alcatraz vs The Evil Librarians, but others annoy me. I generally dislike first person with multiple POVs because then I keep forgetting whose POV I’m in, which could be a problem with the writing. It’s more forgivable in romances,…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009 I don’t mind first person.

Most of my scenes involving my charrie Crosshair are written in first person (especially if they don’t really have a story they’re going to be a part of, and I’m just writing them for fun). IDK why, I just like getting inside his rather traumatized head and looking at the story world through his eyes.

@savannah_grace2009

I think Wyoh ate your post.

@theducktator

Ok, good, I was worried that I was losing it for a moment there lol.

@savannah_grace2009

I do not hate first person, I think it can be really good when done properly (I doubt anyone else has read this book, but The Door on Half-bald Hill is an example of this ((oh man I adore that book))). I just think it’s harder to get right tha…[Read more]