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				<title>relia replied to the topic Short Story Contest!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions</title>
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				<pubDate>Fri, 08 Oct 2021 03:19:13 -0400</pubDate>

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<p>After ghosting the internet for another month, I returned and found this! Hurrah!</p>
<p>I need a short story to clear my mind, so I would love to join 🙂 I&#8217;ll try to have my story in in a couple of weeks!</p>
<p>(Glad you extended the deadline to the 30th, or I would be kinda screwed lol)</p>
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				<title>relia started the topic If you need encouragement :) in the forum General Writing Discussions</title>
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				<pubDate>Tue, 24 Aug 2021 20:21:04 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>For the thousandth time, I thought about my writing, and moaned.</p>
<p>We&#8217;ve all been there &#8211; where we don&#8217;t even want to look at our writing, it’s just so horribly awful.</p>
<p>&#8230; About a month ago, I put my writing on pause. There were jobs, commitments, family issues, and to top it all off, vacation. &#8216;I&#8217;ll get right back into it when I get back! I&#8217;ll f&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-105045"><a href="https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/if-you-need-encouragement/" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>relia replied to the topic beta readers needed! in the forum Novel Critique Requests</title>
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				<pubDate>Sun, 22 Aug 2021 21:25:56 -0400</pubDate>

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<p>I&#8217;d love to help out, but I&#8217;m afraid I wouldn&#8217;t be very consistent&#8230; I might accidentally ghost you&#8230; pretty often&#8230;</p>
<p>That being said, if you want casual beta readers, I&#8217;d be up for it!</p>
<p><del>Also yes I am still alive, summer happened and I was without wifi for a very long time my apologies to everyone I&#8217;ve ghosted this past month-and-a-half</del></p>
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				<title>relia replied to the topic New Book Ideas!! in the forum General Writing Discussions</title>
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				<pubDate>Fri, 02 Jul 2021 02:58:08 -0400</pubDate>

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<p>Yes! I would love to hear about it!</p>
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				<title>relia replied to the topic New Book Ideas!! in the forum General Writing Discussions</title>
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				<pubDate>Wed, 30 Jun 2021 22:00:08 -0400</pubDate>

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<p>Wow&#8230; I absolutely <em>love</em> the second idea. When you write it sign me up for a beta read XD <del>I&#8217;m not joking though literally do</del></p>
<p>But honestly, that sounds <em>amazing</em>.</p>
<p>I have a few ideas that I&#8217;ll share about later, but those ideas deserve some recognition in their own post, and godspeed in writing them!</p>
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				<title>relia replied to the topic Fantasy Kingdom Names in the forum Fantasy</title>
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				<pubDate>Tue, 29 Jun 2021 21:53:54 -0400</pubDate>

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<p><del>I literally just take real place names and change a couple of vowels </del></p>
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				<title>relia replied to the topic Anyone want character art? in the forum Art</title>
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				<pubDate>Mon, 28 Jun 2021 18:07:46 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/issawriter7/' rel="nofollow ugc">@issawriter7</a> Yeah, I&#8217;ll get on that! What sort of clothes would she be wearing?</p>
<p><a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/e-k-seaver/' rel="nofollow ugc">@e-k-seaver</a> I&#8217;ve drawn the face of Ly, if you could lemme know the type of outfit I can finish it soon!</p>
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				<title>relia replied to the topic Anyone want character art? in the forum Art</title>
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				<pubDate>Mon, 28 Jun 2021 18:05:50 -0400</pubDate>

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<p><img loading="lazy" src="https://kingdompen.org/wp-content/uploads/hm_bbpui/101351/xrcepwycytho5s5hwgxd4sd7azr30oip.jpg" alt="" /></p>
<p>There you go! I&#8217;m really sad I started drawing too far down the page, cuz now she just ends at her knees 🙁</p>
<p>Despite it taking long, I <em>had</em> to do color, cuz I mean&#8230; she&#8217;s a pirate&#8230; XD</p>
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				<title>relia replied to the topic Anyone want character art? in the forum Art</title>
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				<pubDate>Mon, 28 Jun 2021 18:03:15 -0400</pubDate>

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<p>As a member of a big outdoorsy family, I loved drawing this XD Your characters are so fun!</p>
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				<title>relia replied to the topic Anyone want character art? in the forum Art</title>
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				<pubDate>Mon, 28 Jun 2021 18:01:28 -0400</pubDate>

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<p><img loading="lazy" src="https://kingdompen.org/wp-content/uploads/hm_bbpui/101348/7iyc2yltryh00ywf8w86lw3d9ae9gwnu.jpg" alt="" /></p>
<p>&nbsp;</p>
<p>There ya go! Dunno if the clothes are at all accurate&#8230;? <del>Should have just looked at a picture bible </del></p>
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				<title>relia replied to the topic Help! I&#039;m stuck on themes... :( in the forum Mission, Calling &#038; Ethics</title>
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				<pubDate>Fri, 25 Jun 2021 23:51:13 -0400</pubDate>

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<p>I think that a lot of themes are hidden. Some stories, such as, say, aesop&#8217;s fables, have themes and meanings that are very evident. In other stories, the themes can be harder to concretely put words to. Take LOTR. I would say that a huge theme in that story is heroism. The book doesn&#8217;t state &#8220;that&#8217;s what it means to be a hero!&#8221;, it just&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-102732"><a href="https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/help-im-stuck-on-themes/#post-101291" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>relia replied to the topic Anyone want character art? in the forum Art</title>
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				<pubDate>Fri, 25 Jun 2021 21:14:26 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/e-k-seaver/' rel="nofollow ugc">@e-k-seaver</a> how long is Ly&#8217;s hair, and what sort of outfit do you envision her wearing?</p>
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				<title>relia replied to the topic Anyone want character art? in the forum Art</title>
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				<pubDate>Fri, 25 Jun 2021 19:56:23 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><img loading="lazy" src="Please wait..." alt="" /><img loading="lazy" src="https://kingdompen.org/wp-content/uploads/hm_bbpui/101286/gyiaxsg17lg7h9oncmmx2dpasoqek07u.jpg" alt="" /></p>
<p>Here you go!<del> I don&#8217;t know what happened with her body but</del> she was really fun to draw 🙂</p>
<p>My old camera really sucks at taking pics so this looks a little odd&#8230; oh well <del>maybe I should switch to digital art so I won&#8217;t have to deal with this problem : </del></p>
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				<title>relia replied to the topic Anyone want character art? in the forum Art</title>
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				<pubDate>Fri, 25 Jun 2021 18:01:04 -0400</pubDate>

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<p>*Tries not to cringe* There&#8217;s some &#8220;previous art&#8221; as promised!</p>
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				<title>relia replied to the topic Anyone want character art? in the forum Art</title>
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				<pubDate>Fri, 25 Jun 2021 17:59:58 -0400</pubDate>

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				<title>relia replied to the topic Anyone want character art? in the forum Art</title>
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				<pubDate>Fri, 25 Jun 2021 17:59:22 -0400</pubDate>

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				<title>relia replied to the topic Anyone want character art? in the forum Art</title>
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				<pubDate>Fri, 25 Jun 2021 17:57:02 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/writerlexi1216/' rel="nofollow ugc">@writerlexi1216</a> cool! You&#8217;re first so I&#8217;ll try to do that today 🙂</p>
<p><a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/sparksaraabbott11/' rel="nofollow ugc">@sparksaraabbott11</a> If I have reference, yup!</p>
<p><a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/e-k-seaver/' rel="nofollow ugc">@e-k-seaver</a> Haha sounds like me XD and yeah I can do that!</p>
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				<title>relia started the topic Anyone want character art? in the forum Art</title>
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				<pubDate>Fri, 25 Jun 2021 17:24:55 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I&#8217;m trying to get back into doing art more regularly, so I was wondering if anyone wanted a character drawn? (I could also do landscapes or buildings, but I&#8217;m best at people. Also better at girls, but I could use some practice drawing guys as well.)</p>
<p>Just give me a description, (photo reference would be appreciated if you have any,) and I&#8217;d love&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-102707"><a href="https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/anyone-want-character-art/" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>relia replied to the topic SURPRISE PARTY! *VERY IMPORTANT* in the forum General Writing Discussions</title>
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				<pubDate>Fri, 25 Jun 2021 15:35:05 -0400</pubDate>

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<p>I am bringing jalapeno cheesies and green tea ice cream.</p>
<p>My gift will be a rendition of let it go.</p>
<p>I will wear my blanket-of-warmth-and-slug-like-qualities wrapped around my body. Nah, I&#8217;ll go big and wear my <em>duvet-</em>of-warmth-and-slug-like-qualities wrapped around my body.</p>
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				<title>relia replied to the topic Writing the Climax in the forum General Writing Discussions</title>
				<link>https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/writing-the-climax/#post-101200</link>
				<pubDate>Thu, 24 Jun 2021 18:20:57 -0400</pubDate>

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<p>I wrote an entire post before realizing that it all could be summed up into &#8220;I just gain momentum and go where the mood takes me because I am a pantser&#8221;. So not very helpful.</p>
<p><em>Actual</em> stuff that helps me, though&#8230;</p>
<p>&#8211; Having photos and music as &#8220;reference&#8221; to the mood, location, etc. It also keeps me fully immersed in my&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-102646"><a href="https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/writing-the-climax/#post-101200" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>relia replied to the topic OFFICIAL WRITING SPRINT LEADERBOARD in the forum General Writing Discussions</title>
				<link>https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/official-writing-sprint-leaderboard/page/70/#post-101146</link>
				<pubDate>Tue, 22 Jun 2021 20:36:57 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Lol, I went way over my time, but that&#8217;s a good thing!</p>
<p>One hour, 900 words, and half a chapter &#8211; great considering I didn&#8217;t think I would get <em>any</em> writing done today.</p>
<p>Favorite line: *WHAT WAS THE WORDNUMBERTHING I USED IN CHAPTER ONE AGH GO CHECK IT WHEN YOU&#8217;RE EDITING*</p>
<p>Real favorite line: He paused to muse a moment before murmuring, “Because w&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-102592"><a href="https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/official-writing-sprint-leaderboard/page/70/#post-101146" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>relia replied to the topic OFFICIAL WRITING SPRINT LEADERBOARD in the forum General Writing Discussions</title>
				<link>https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/official-writing-sprint-leaderboard/page/70/#post-101142</link>
				<pubDate>Tue, 22 Jun 2021 19:23:58 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/daisy-torres/' rel="nofollow ugc">@daisy-torres</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/devastate-lasting/' rel="nofollow ugc">@devastate-lasting</a></p>
<p>Imma jump in here until 4:00 ET, see if I can finish my chapter 😛</p>
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				<title>relia replied to the topic Writing a series where the books aren&#039;t technically related...? in the forum General Writing Discussions</title>
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				<pubDate>Tue, 22 Jun 2021 01:41:57 -0400</pubDate>

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<p>Sounds super fun!</p>
<p>Hm. I haven&#8217;t read many books like this, but my instinct would be to say that <em>the books should tie in to each other in some way. </em>It could literally be a tiny cameo, or &#8220;Remember ___&#8221;, or whatever, but I think that even small connections like that make it much more satisfying as a reader.</p>
<p>Also, realistically, events in&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-102544"><a href="https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/writing-a-series-where-the-books-arent-technically-related/#post-101099" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>relia replied to the topic goodbye (because saying hullo is too normal) in the forum Start HERE</title>
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				<pubDate>Wed, 16 Jun 2021 19:58:25 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>For those who asked, my current WIP is like an adventure/fantasy/retelling-inspired-by-the-peloponnesian-war&#8230; yeah that sounds confusing, I need to come up with a better way to describe it lol.</p>
<p>And also thanks so much for telling me about yourselves, I may not be able to keep names straight but your writing seems so awesome, your hobbies and&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-102354"><a href="https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/goodbye-because-saying-hullo-is-too-normal/page/2/#post-100898" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>relia replied to the topic WIP First 3 Chapters in the forum Novel Critique Requests</title>
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				<pubDate>Sat, 12 Jun 2021 00:39:25 -0400</pubDate>

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<p>First of all &#8211; that was really good! It was interesting and engaging, and I was hooked <del> why did you leave us on a cliffhanger I am so curious now lol</del> !</p>
<p>Ember is quite likeable. I agree with what some of the others have said, seeing her emotions a little more clearly would be nice, but overall, I thought she was a great character. She&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-102176"><a href="https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/wip-first-3-chapters/page/2/#post-100715" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>relia replied to the topic Short Story Contest in the forum General Writing Discussions</title>
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				<pubDate>Thu, 10 Jun 2021 18:18:01 -0400</pubDate>

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<p>Yay, just submitted! The level of editing is awful since I&#8217;ve been gone all week 🙁 but I&#8217;m happy with the story itself, so cheers to that!</p>
<p>After the contest is over, all the entrants should consider posting a link to our stories on here, cuz I really wanna read everyone&#8217;s 😀</p>
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				<title>relia replied to the topic Self publishing or traditional? in the forum Publishing &#038; Platform</title>
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				<pubDate>Thu, 10 Jun 2021 13:43:40 -0400</pubDate>

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<p>For me, traditional publishing has always been my end goal. This is mainly because&#8230;</p>
<p><em>The genres I write in are marketable</em> (at least now lol). If I get my writing quality up to snuff, I should be able to get into trad pub, because people buy the sorts of books that I write. If I were writing, say, a conservative commentary on&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-102125"><a href="https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/self-publishing-or-traditional/#post-100669" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>relia replied to the topic WIP Chat! in the forum General Writing Discussions</title>
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				<pubDate>Wed, 09 Jun 2021 17:28:55 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>This has absolutely no introduction, (tho I&#8217;m sure I&#8217;ll talk about my WIP in detail later)</p>
<p>Right now I&#8217;m just here crying cuz I decided to do something awful to my characters, like, actually heartbreaking and I know I need to but I am dyinnnnnggggg T_T</p>
<p>Sorry I just needed to get that out of me, and communicate to someone who might&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-102072"><a href="https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/wip-chat/page/59/#post-100622" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>relia replied to the topic What&#039;s something that happened in real life that made you think... in the forum Topic of the Week</title>
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				<pubDate>Wed, 09 Jun 2021 13:57:05 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/kathleenramm/' rel="nofollow ugc">@kathleenramm</a> I love that story! So cute <del>I ship it</del></p>
<p>Here&#8217;s one that related to my latest WIP:</p>
<p>Last year I was running laps, nothing unusual, normal fall day, and then I pass this group of kids.</p>
<p>They were probably&#8230; idk, 12, 13? But there was this one kid, super short with super messy strawberry blond hair, super freckled, who was being super&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-102060"><a href="https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/whats-something-that-happened-in-real-life-that-made-you-think/#post-100610" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>relia replied to the topic Real-Life Skills and Abilities? in the forum Mission, Calling &#038; Ethics</title>
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				<pubDate>Wed, 09 Jun 2021 12:46:35 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>@typewriter77I think it&#8217;s totally fine to portray these elements (as long as they aren&#8217;t overly gory or whatever), and they are often very fun to read and write about. I&#8217;m actually writing a manuscript that does involve lockpicking, explosives, etc., so here&#8217;s what I&#8217;ve done. Ok. To be blunt, 99% readers simply won&#8217;t be able to do the things you&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-102059"><a href="https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/real-life-skills-and-abilities/#post-100609" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>relia started the topic To edit or not to edit... in the forum General Writing Discussions</title>
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				<pubDate>Tue, 08 Jun 2021 18:35:34 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I&#8217;m currently about 1/4 of the way through writing a duology. I&#8217;ve plotted the first book extensively and the second one&#8230; kinda extensively? Not as much as the first one, but still pretty thoroughly.</p>
<p>But now that I&#8217;m nearing the end of draft one of book one, I can&#8217;t decide whether I should edit it at all before starting book two.</p>
<p>I strictly&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-102036"><a href="https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/to-edit-or-not-to-edit/" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>relia replied to the topic In Search of Book Recommendations in the forum Book Discussions</title>
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				<pubDate>Tue, 08 Jun 2021 03:04:37 -0400</pubDate>

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<p>A series I recently finished, <em>The Queen&#8217;s Thief</em> by Megan Whalen Turner, was very interesting and amusing as a casual read &#8211; beautifully written, with wonderful characters and captivating plots. The author did decide to go woke in the last book, but most of the first ones are quite a good option for someone who wants a lighter fantasy read.</p>
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				<title>relia replied to the topic WIP First 3 Chapters in the forum Novel Critique Requests</title>
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				<pubDate>Tue, 08 Jun 2021 01:00:45 -0400</pubDate>

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<p>I&#8217;d love to read over it! I&#8217;ll try to write up a comment on it before the weekend! And like Jodi said, what exactly are you looking for critique on? Totally ok to literally just want any comments that come to our minds, but if you wanted historical accuracy, or more specific stuff, lemme know so I can read through with that in mind.&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-102029"><a href="https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/wip-first-3-chapters/#post-100579" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>relia started the topic Writing and Jobs in the forum General Writing Discussions</title>
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				<pubDate>Mon, 07 Jun 2021 02:41:32 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><strong>If you had the choice to write full time, and be fully supported in terms of cash flow, would you still choose to have (an)other job(s)? </strong>You could still write and be paid, but you would have to balance writing with non-writing work.</p>
<p>In my opinion, having personal experience with jobs has helped my writing become better, because I have the&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-101969"><a href="https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/writing-and-jobs/" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>relia replied to the topic goodbye (because saying hullo is too normal) in the forum Start HERE</title>
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				<pubDate>Mon, 07 Jun 2021 02:09:05 -0400</pubDate>

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<p>Tolkien forevaaa&#8230; I actually got fairly far in learning Sindarin (elven language), and o_o it was tough&#8230; eventually gave up and just learned how to use the tengwar (elven scripty thing).</p>
<p>Out of those three&#8230; <em>Ella Minnow Pea</em> is a very amusing read, told through postal correspondence, where letters of the alphabet are progressively&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-101968"><a href="https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/goodbye-because-saying-hullo-is-too-normal/page/2/#post-100515" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>relia replied to the topic A question for any Brits/people-who-know-about-this here... in the forum General Writing Discussions</title>
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				<pubDate>Thu, 03 Jun 2021 16:23:41 -0400</pubDate>

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<p>Thank you so much for helping me accomplish mission writing-british-without-accidentally-swearing!</p>
<p>Honestly, thanks so much. This is a very awkward topic so I&#8217;m glad someone took pity on my naïveté, lol.</p>
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				<title>relia replied to the topic Short Story Contest in the forum General Writing Discussions</title>
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				<pubDate>Thu, 03 Jun 2021 14:41:15 -0400</pubDate>

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<p>I just finished the first draft of it! It was so. fun. and really gave me the boost I needed, cuz it is <em>so</em> satisfying and fulfilling to actually finish a story from start to finish! <del>I say &#8220;boost&#8221; in the encouragement sense, since physically I was up till 3 am writing in the pitch black, wondering whether it was &#8216;squeezing your eyes&hellip;</del><span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-101920"><a href="https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/short-story-contest/page/2/#post-100475" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>relia started the topic A question for any Brits/people-who-know-about-this here... in the forum General Writing Discussions</title>
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				<pubDate>Thu, 03 Jun 2021 02:07:52 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>This is sorta random, so it goes in general, I guess.</p>
<p>As a precursor, I am&#8230; well, I&#8217;m not an American, but I <em>am</em> a North American, so I really don&#8217;t have much of a *realistic* view on British culture. Also, I am <em>really</em> sorry if I swear, I don&#8217;t mean to which is the entire point of this post.</p>
<p>I&#8217;m writing a fantasy where there are people who&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-101914"><a href="https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/a-question-for-any-brits-people-who-know-about-this-here/" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>relia replied to the topic A topic where I share my cringey writing for your enjoyment. in the forum General Writing Discussions</title>
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				<pubDate>Wed, 02 Jun 2021 22:35:23 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I&#8217;m going to hop on this train and provide my own cringey <em>outlining</em>. After 23 chapters of good, detailed stuff, this happens.</p>
<p><em>Chapter 24: </em></p>
<p><em>POV: TBD</em></p>
<p><em>Topic: walking&#8230; mebbe</em></p>
<p>And that&#8217;s literally it.</p>
<p>If you think you suck, remember<em> someone always sucks more</em>. (My own version of it could always be worse.)</p>
<p><a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/daisy-torres/' rel="nofollow ugc">@daisy-torres</a> actually decent stuff for a&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-101906"><a href="https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/a-topic-where-i-share-my-cringey-writing-for-your-enjoyment/#post-100464" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>relia replied to the topic goodbye (because saying hullo is too normal) in the forum Start HERE</title>
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				<pubDate>Wed, 02 Jun 2021 18:23:31 -0400</pubDate>

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<p>Nice to meet you too!</p>
<p><a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/devastate-lasting/' rel="nofollow ugc">@devastate-lasting</a></p>
<p>Favs&#8230; LOTR: Gandalf, Hunger Games: Johanna, and Star Wars: Darth Vader&#8230; or maybe R2?</p>
<p><a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/kathleenramm/' rel="nofollow ugc">@kathleenramm</a></p>
<p>The first time I remember writing a story was when I was&#8230; idk, 6? To be clear tho, my writing habits were extremely sporadic until I turned 13 a few years ago. I don&#8217;t know if I even <em>could&hellip;</em><span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-101895"><a href="https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/goodbye-because-saying-hullo-is-too-normal/#post-100453" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>relia replied to the topic Keep going or jump ahead? in the forum General Writing Discussions</title>
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				<pubDate>Wed, 02 Jun 2021 12:52:43 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I definitely feel an overwhelming urge to skip it, but I just keep pushing (often adding some dialogue to make it more fun for me), because I know it&#8217;ll only confuse me in the long run if random scenes in the middle are mysteriously missing.</p>
<p>This is totally different from editing a scene while I&#8217;m writing &#8211; in that case I have an extremely&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-101882"><a href="https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/keep-going-or-jump-ahead/#post-100399" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>relia replied to the topic Take the three main characters of a recent story you wrote and... in the forum Topic of the Week</title>
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				<pubDate>Mon, 31 May 2021 14:24:08 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>My characters&#8230;</p>
<p>1. Isbel &#8211; Weirdest mix of a huffy and haughty British Princess, and your demanding CEO. Has a thing for brandy and hates being outside. Practical as heck, but is also very concerned with presenting herself properly. 17, and ESTJ.</p>
<p>2. Katarin &#8211; Chemist, works for military. Absent minded but brilliant, the Albert Einstein of her&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-101802"><a href="https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/take-the-three-main-characters-of-a-recent-story-you-wrote/page/2/#post-100284" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>relia replied to the topic Short Story Contest in the forum General Writing Discussions</title>
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				<pubDate>Mon, 31 May 2021 13:55:24 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>New person here! Ooh, this sounds fun. I need a mental health break from madly typing my current WIP, so I do believe I shall take a few days off and write<em> le short story. </em></p>
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				<title>relia replied to the topic Not sure if I should add an idea to my book in the forum Novel Idea Critiques</title>
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				<pubDate>Mon, 31 May 2021 13:53:02 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>1. This plot twist sounds like it would <em>completely</em> shock the reader. That isn&#8217;t in itself a bad thing, but if it&#8217;s unexpected <em>because it doesn&#8217;t fit into the story properly</em>, that&#8217;s not good. You want to be able to reread the manuscript from the beginning, and with every chapter, sense &#8220;ok, yeah, I could include a bit of foreshadowing and this&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-101799"><a href="https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/not-sure-if-i-should-add-an-idea-to-my-book/#post-100280" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>relia replied to the topic goodbye (because saying hullo is too normal) in the forum Start HERE</title>
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				<pubDate>Mon, 31 May 2021 13:39:03 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/devastate-lasting/' rel="nofollow ugc">@devastate-lasting</a></p>
<p>Love les miserables &#8211; ofc the musical but the book is amazing. Can&#8217;t go wrong with Austen, and I love the Odyssey, Illiad&#8230; yeah I love a lot lol.</p>
<p>Heheheh *deep breath* lotr (of course), Narnia, Marvel (Lokiiii), The Silver Eye (webcomic, little known but amazing), the Hunger Games (Am I the only one who NOTP&#8217;s Everlark?),&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-101798"><a href="https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/goodbye-because-saying-hullo-is-too-normal/#post-100279" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>relia replied to the topic goodbye (because saying hullo is too normal) in the forum Start HERE</title>
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				<pubDate>Mon, 31 May 2021 13:30:03 -0400</pubDate>

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<p>I&#8217;m from Canada, ehhhhh</p>
<p>I know that isn&#8217;t even how you use &#8220;eh&#8221; (what? we totally don&#8217;t cover &#8220;eh&#8221; in grammar class) but I feel it&#8217;s mandatory to stick it in there if you ever mention Canada. Yup, I&#8217;m from Ontario, where there be lots of trees, and I do see moose occasionally.</p>
<p>Ooh! But Australia is awesome. <del>Did I just reread your&hellip;</del><span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-101797"><a href="https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/goodbye-because-saying-hullo-is-too-normal/#post-100278" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<pubDate>Mon, 31 May 2021 03:51:49 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>We must be weiroes, precioussss</p>
<p>Yeah, you can probably guess a lot about me just from the title and first line ¯_(ツ)_/¯</p>
<p>You can call me Relia, I&#8217;m an INTP writer currently in need of just some support and laughs, and this seemed like an awesome community so I was like &#8220;we needs it preciousss the nice peoplesesss&#8221;</p>
<p><del>Yes I did just say that out lou&hellip;</del><span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-101791"><a href="https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/goodbye-because-saying-hullo-is-too-normal/" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>relia&#039;s profile was updated</title>
				<link>https://kingdompen.org/activity/p/101790/</link>
				<pubDate>Mon, 31 May 2021 03:29:55 -0400</pubDate>

				
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				<title>relia changed their profile picture</title>
				<link>https://kingdompen.org/activity/p/101789/</link>
				<pubDate>Mon, 31 May 2021 03:24:24 -0400</pubDate>

				
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