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freedom replied to the topic Plotting Help (Free of Charge!) in the forum Plotting 10 months, 4 weeks ago
@whalekeeper @loopylin @lightoverdarkness6 @keilah-h @koshka @rae @esther-c @anyone-else-help-meeeeeee
SOOOOOOO i’m currently working on Book 2 (Broken Shackles) of my main Trilogy (the trilogy that only features Leon/Riker as the MCs/POVs throughout all three novels)
but I’m really struggling with the middle of it 😩
I’m currently on…[Read more]
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freedom replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 months, 4 weeks ago
@loopylin @koshka @whalekeeper @rae @lightoverdarkness6 @keilah-h @esther-c @anyone-else-lol
Sooooooo, knowing how sad that chapter was…I give to y’all the following chapter!!!
The first half is kinda bittersweet (ok, ok, it’s still kinda sad…I’M SORRY, OK???😭💖) but the second half of the chapter…..eeeeeee, I love it sm and it is soooo…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 11 months ago
Random tagssss @whalekeeper @savannah_grace2009 @rae @smiley @lightoverdarkness6 @acancello @grcr @anyone-else-cuz-i-can’t-think-of-anyone-else-right-now
Ignore tag or read on!
Just wanted to share a cute scene from a WIP that I’ve been working on a little too much. 😉
I seriously should be working on my main WIP rn, but whatever.It’s not p…[Read more]
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freedom replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 11 months ago
@lightoverdarkness6 @mineralizedwritings @whalekeeper @loopylin @elishavet-pidyon @koshka @esther-c @smiley @rae @anyone-else
ok, ok, I know I’m supposed to be gone but I really want some feedback on this chapter…I like how it turned out but I just REALLYYYYY need some feedback, haha, so I may still pop on and off on occasion but don’t expect…[Read more]
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Ruee Hamster Huey replied to the topic Headaches in the Form of Characters. Help! in the forum Characters 11 months, 1 week ago
Are you having problems with his younger self?
My immediate reaction was a mischievous giggle which I think came straight from Alpha himself.
Most of the hard Alpha is from after Emmie died, which is his thirties. His latter twenties were his years of bliss, and before that …
BTW, these ages are not set in stone yet. I just have…[Read more]
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Ruee Hamster Huey replied to the topic Headaches in the Form of Characters. Help! in the forum Characters 11 months, 1 week ago
Honestly, I think I forgot about this…
Anyways…
What are the main characteristics in Alpha that you want to keep?
Mainly his warrior mindset. For instance:
Grief is a weakness.
Watch your six o’clock.
Never give up until you die.
Personality is a result of purpose. We have a purpose for every character in a story,…
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Ruee Hamster Huey posted an update 11 months, 1 week ago
Krogen: “Batten down the hatches, reef the main sail, shiver me timbers, here comes the mother of all typhoons! But we…”
“Krogen, Krogen, we’re in a rowboat, and that typhoon is a ripple.”
“Shut up. Or I’ll find a pool noodle.”
“What’s a pool noodle?”
“Shut up your mouth.” -
The Most Esteemed Feathered One posted an update 11 months, 1 week ago
🎵When the sunlight has gone, and the green hills turn gray,
And the day turns to evening somehow,
Then I’m thinking of you, though you’re so far away,
And I’m wanting you close to me now.Oh chocolate chip cookies, so high on the shelf, hiding inside of a jar.
I’m not tall enough, to reach you myself, so near, and yet so very far…🎵-
@theducktator
OH MY GOSH I KNOW THAT SONG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
We used to get the Philadelphia Chickens book ALL THE TIME from the library and I love that song!!!!!!!-
@savannah_grace2009
I want a cookie! XD We own Philadelphia Chickens and several others. One of my sisters plays them all the time. 😆They are so fun!-
@theducktator
Have you ever listened to the “Blue Moon” book?
It is another one, similar to Philadelphia Chickens!
Is it Philadelphia Chickens that has the Aardvarks do the “intermission” show?? I always loved that part!!-
@savannah_grace2009
Yes! We have Blue Moo, Philadelphia Chickens, and Rhinoceros Tap. The others we get from the library.
Yes! I love the Intermission Show! Every time I go anywhere with an intermission, my siblings and I always sing that! “Technically, we’re not cows. We’re aardvarks!”-
I love those songs sooo much…I played them on YouTube after our conversation and it brings back so many memories!
OH MY GOSH and I love the Speed Turtle one…and the Singing in the Shower one….I love them all!
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@savannah_grace2009
For some reason it won’t let me reply to your comment. I memorized Singing in the Shower, and for a while I would sing it every time I showered! One of my sisters still does. And Be Like a Duck is probably my favorite! And Dance it Off, and Personal Penguin, and Ducks in a Row!
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I was thinking it was a love poem as I read the beginning.
Chocolate chip cookies.
I died laughing.-
@stephie
It’s called Faraway Cookies. I highly recommend you listen to the rest of it. It’s hilarious.
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freedom posted a new activity comment 11 months, 1 week ago
@rae I don’t really know what to say other than to say that you are not alone. I’ve been in really dark places before…places I hope to never return to.
I’ve had a lot on my mind lately, and Tho
I haven’t been in a dark place at all, I’ve also been just really thinking about where I need to get my life in check.I know you feel alone and I know…[Read more]
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I have been talking to my best friend recently. But not my parents. My Dad knows I’m having a rough time, but he only knows a fraction. My mom knows nothing. I don’t want her to worry.
Maybe that’s the entire reason I’ve mostly closed the door to my emotions. I’m afraid if I let them spill, everyone will worried, not just you and my friend, and…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic A Place to share/write whatever we’re working on: Worldbuilding, plot, etc in the forum General Writing Discussions 11 months, 1 week ago
@loopylin @godlyfantasy12 @rae @whoever
Y’all GUESS WHAT. Marcel has a best friend now and I am in love with this character concept. Like I actually cannot. It’s so good. I can’t talk about it because I like to leave new characters to simmer for a week or so before I mess with them… but he needed a best friend and NOW HE HAS ONE
I will say she…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 11 months, 2 weeks ago
@freed_and_redeemed @godlyfantasy12 @lightoverdarkness6 @savannah_grace2009 @rae @grcr @highscribeofaetherium @mineralizedwritings @whalekeeper @loopylin @whoeverrrr
Here’s a little scene I wrote recently. (And it may have been inspired by the fact that my sister and I watched all three High School Musical movies over the last weekend… XD)…[Read more]
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freedom replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 11 months, 2 weeks ago
@koshka I am going to have to do more research (once I get to that WIP, at least XD) @elishavet-pidyon @godlyfantasy12 @grcr @esther-c @lightoverdarkness6 @mineralizedwritings @smiley @keilah-h @rae @savannah_grace2009 @jonas @highscribeofaetherium @anyone-else-idk-lol
I have a couple more scenes I wanna share!!! ✨✨
“You know you’re always wel…
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freedom replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 11 months, 2 weeks ago
@esther-c @mineralizedwritings @godlyfantasy12 @euodia-vision @smiley @koshka @elishavet-pidyon @rae @savannah_grace2009 @grcr @whalekeeper @acancello @keilah-h @anyone-else-lol
Soooo I’ve been really thinking lately…and I’m really curious to kinda see everyone’s opinions on which MC in Freedom’s Fire is their fav.
So (and I’m pretty sure I…[Read more]
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freedom replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 11 months, 2 weeks ago
@koshka @elishavet-pidyon Here it is!! @godlyfantasy12 @smiley @whalekeeper @trailblazer @acancello @grcr @rae @savannah_grace2009 @lightoverdarkness6 @loopylin @keilah-h @mineralizedwritings
I have another chapter to share!!
With Koshka and Elishavet’s help and fabulous ideas, I (FINALLY) got a sweet scene written between Leon and his adorable…[Read more]
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freedom replied to the topic Character Songs/Playlists! in the forum Music 11 months, 3 weeks ago
@rae I love it! And you did it very well!!! I 💖 it!!!
and GIRL, Chase needs more than songs sang to him 😭 He needs God’s intervention, ok??? Riker does too…as does Leon.
Our bois just need redemption. like, seriously😂
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Ruee Hamster Huey replied to the topic Character Songs/Playlists! in the forum Music 11 months, 3 weeks ago
Chase needs someone to sing Ooh Child and Fear not this Night to him. My boi.
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Ruee Hamster Huey replied to the topic Character Songs/Playlists! in the forum Music 11 months, 3 weeks ago
@keilah-h @jonas @freed_and_redeemed @whalekeeper @loopylin @godlyfantasy12 @anyone
I just made my first charrie playlist! And more amazingly, I actually have the names of all those who wrote the songs XD
Not all of these are Christian artists or songs. I do not support or recommend these artists in anyway, I only chose these songs for the…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic Character Hunger Games (Inspired by YWW) in the forum Genre-Writing 11 months, 3 weeks ago
@keilah-h @esther-c @lydibug @loopylin @jonas @godlyfantasy12 @freed_and_redeemed @smiley @grcr @highscribeofaetherium @rae @lightoverdarkness6
Prologue
I know I’m imaginary.You’re reading about me right now, thinking smugly about how you’ve seen a self-aware intro before. But this is me, not another imaginary narrator, so I’m just going t…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic Character Hunger Games (Inspired by YWW) in the forum Genre-Writing 11 months, 3 weeks ago
@keilah-h @esther-c @lydibug @loopylin @jonah @godlyfantasy12 @freed_and_redeemed @smiley @grcr @highscribeofaetherium @rae @lightoverdarkness6
Okay *ahem* Is this mic working… *tap tap* okay.
Intro/Things You Need to Know
The biggest thing to know is that your character may be a villain. Even if they are a hero in your story, they may show a d…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Hunger Games (Inspired by YWW) in the forum Genre-Writing 11 months, 3 weeks ago
@whalekeeper lol ok!
here’s some more Mundy quotes cause I’m bored: (also you get subjected to my bad attempt to type what his accent sounds like)
- “I’m gonna blow bits of ya all over four counties!”
- “Keep running that mouth–while it’s still attached to the rest a’ ya!”
- “I don’t make the first move….just the last one.”
- “I love this…
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#WondiansnotknowingEarthlingtermsagain
#PirateKrogen
#imaginaryadultfairytales
@theducktator @keilah-h you two probably would want to see this… Cgecko helped me out.
I think this is my favorite Krogen thing ever XD
@rae
🤣🤣🤣 That’s hilarious! “We’re in a rowboat and that typhoon is a ripple.” 🤣
LOL Krogen is hilarious.