Molly

@joelle-stone

Can you give me your current synopsis and a couple of quotes from your book you love?  I’ll mess around with the blurb if you want and you can choose which one you like.

hey guys!  I wrote this, but it’s still a 1st draft.  thought some of y’all might be interested. 🙂

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1W2OsQCk-z8DY2dcyCmX3LUhgpV0eg8BxJMUSSeWIn1c/edit?usp=sharing

@gracie-j @devastate-lasting @lydia-s @nanisnook @writerlexi1216 @abigail-m

@sparksaraabbott11

it’s unedited btw, first draft haha

@sparksaraabbott11

are you home schooled?

No, but i was for a long time.  i’m a freshman at a classical christian school.

do you like doctor who?

never have seen it… is it good?

do u have a blog?

nope, but i want to make one later on.

how old are you?

fifteen.

your WIP sounds AWESOME! i’m glad u like mine. can i read some of yours?

aw, th…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

Yes, I totally feel this!!  Everything people already said was great, but the thing I’d consider the most is to try writing something new.  That doesn’t mean you’re giving up on your book, you just need a break from your particular WIP.  And, hey, you might even get some ideas for your 2nd draft from another project… that’s ha…[Read more]

@kathleenramm

Ooo, awesome question!  Well, my answer would be that I hate the passive heroes.  The ones that let everyone tell them what to do, or the ones that just “go with the flow.”  There’s a time and a place for that, but definitely not in the MC, imo! 😄

Oh, and melodramatic/overly-emotional heroes are the worst!!  Like when they just sit…[Read more]

@daisy-torres

From :24–:12= 554 words

Last lines:

Am I strong? I can learn to be; only the strong are hopeful.
Am I ready? It’s now or never, and I can’t go back.
Am I hope? Michael believes I am. He sees it in me.  I think I’m learning to believe him.

We’ll have to do it again sometime, Daisy. 😉

@daisy-torres

Of course, thanks for joining!!! 😃  Awesome word count and last line!!!!!  Super intriguing 🙂

@daisy-torres

Cool, starting at :24

@daisy-torres

i loooove the leaderboard idea!!!!  awesome job!

@issawriter7

girk, you did soooo good!!!! 😃💛

@daisy-and/or-issa, @when-i-see-the-kingdom, @nanisnook, @abigail-m, @writerlexi1216, @mkfairygirl, @devastate-lasting

Want to write with me rn?  or soon?

@sparksaraabbott11

Hey!  Sorry I’m late… but welcome to KP!!!  I’m Ella, and as I was reading over past posts, I see we have a lot in common!  KotLC is like my favorite series ever!!!  And all the music you mentioned I love!  And Song of the Sea…  I have literally watched that five times–it is sooo good!!

A little more about me:  I play bb…[Read more]

@gracie-j

OOO, I am loving this topic!! 😉  (You are such a good writer btw!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!)  And you’re totally not the only romance guru out there–I adore sweet/well-written romances sooo much!!!!!!!!!

My favorite kiss scenes are the ones where you’ve been waiting for it for so long, and then when it happens, everything seems r…[Read more]

@kayleigh-idea

Hey!  Can I finish the last one tomorrow?  So sorry for taking awhile–I’ve super, super busy!!!

But thank you so much for letting me read and critique your story!!  I wish you the best with editing, publishing, and your whole Project Gorgon journey!!!!  You’ve got talent, and I’m so glad you’re using it to glorify God!

Best,

Ella

@joelle-stone I’m pretty new to the forums, so I’m not sure, but you could just put it here I guess? Or in the critique forum. And then we can just read it and give you our thoughts! 🙂

@joelle-stone

Oh cool!! I am still being raised by it. XD My family owns several of the tape albums and a couple random albums from the whole Novacom Saga, but we mostly use the AIO Club nowadays. Do you have the Club by any chance? I go by Aquarium on there.

We used to have AOA club, but it’s been years since I’ve listened to any Adventures and…[Read more]

@devastate-lasting

Thank you very much.

I think I’ll try Spy x Family and Way of the Househusband first (because favorite sounds good to me).

Big thank.