MineralizedWritings

@lydia-s

Thanks for the awesome topic! I don’t think I’ve actually met you yet, so Hi! 🙂

Ok, so I actually haven’t seen LOTR XD

1. Ring-bearer (this is you): which race would you be? Elf, dwarf, human, or hobbit?

I’d be human.

2. Gandalf: a wise and/or powerful mentor-type character

Jonathon Ledger

3. Aragorn: a character who’s good at s…[Read more]

@orielle21

Oops tagged you wrong ^^

@oreille21

WOW! I thoroughly enjoyed that! Such a great read!

Also, one of the boys has thick brown curls?! 😍😍 That’s just like my OC Tauren!

I’d love to read more!

@arien thank you so much! It makes me more motivated and inspired to write when I know people are liking it 🙂

And ikr? Layson is so sweet with the kids 😭

@loopylin

Oh! I love it! I really like the one of the guy leaning over writing, it’s like such an aesthetic shot! 😍

@booksandbeakers

I can’t remember if it was here or another forum you were asking about critiques…

I’ve seen two different formats for critique sharing here, but that doesn’t mean you can’t do something different.

Some people share a scene from there WIP, about 1-2k words, and ask for specific feedback. Often times this is if you are asking…[Read more]

@felicity @orielle21

Lol, the whole thing of you two not telling us you’re sisters…XD

I do the same thing sometimes XD

At my old youth group, my sister and I didn’t tell new people we were siblings, because idk, why? It’s a bit hard to keep up in person. We each tried to make friends there on our own so it wasn’t super obvious. We had a…[Read more]

@lightoverdarkness6 @loopylin @godlyfantasy12

Tauren and Lesli

“Oh!” Lesli startles, looking down at Tauren on the floor. “Tauren…?”

She kneels down on the floor beside him, lifting his head off the floor.

“W-w-what h-happened?!” Matthew exclaims, eyes wide open.

“Oh my goodness, is he okay?!” Lyla rushes forward and kneels next to Lesl…[Read more]

@keilah-h

Yeah, it’s fun isn’t it? We’ve all gotta start somewhere, and legos/stuffies isn’t a bad place!

@whalekeeper

Thank you!!

@booksandkeepers

Thanks! That scene was one of my favorite to write, and I really felt like it was coming from the heart (I hope you get what I mean, that sounds cringy lol).

@felicity

Thanks for the feedback! It’s hard for me to imagine what you guys remember. He’s showed up a couple of times, but hasn’t had any real…[Read more]

@arien @starofthenorth @theloonyone @loopylin @lightoverdarkness6 @felicity @esther-c @whalekeeper @orielle21

@freedomwriter76 (Might want to go back a bit before reading this section 😁)

@booksandbeakers I post chapters of my WIP (“Afterthoughts”, working title) here if you ever feel like reading! Critiques are welcome, although I’d recommend…[Read more]

@booksandbeakers

Oh! Forgiveness is a great theme! Wow, your WIP does have a lot of loss in it! Sounds interesting though!

Your welcome! 😃

Oh, I love rend collective! They have some great music.

You are tagging correctly, but it won’t work if you have a character next to it. For instance if I tag you @booksandbeakers  , because I put a space…[Read more]

@sarafini

Ack! Sorry I don’t know where your character was! If you need to move her to another group of characters, sometimes that’s whats best when it gets confusing.

@booksandbeakers

Hello! Welcome to Kp!

That’s great that you are home schooled and writing for God! I was home schooled until 2nd grade. I checked out that website link briefly, looks like a cool place!

Oh! I like science sometimes, (not that I really know anything XD)

I’m MineralizedWritings, a dystopian author (Yeah not published in the…[Read more]

@theloonyone

Lol 😂 that little comic thingy

@freedomwriter76

Woot woot! Glad your back in the castle! Julian i suppose disappeared…. things got a bit confusing…

So we’ve got some charries that were fighting a wind, I believe that was Milo and a few others. @loopylin has a dragon who scared people lol, and the group we were in split further.

The only group I could tell you with…[Read more]

@arien @starofthenorth @theloonyone @loopylin @lightoverdarkness6 @felicity @esther-c @whalekeeper

@orielle21

I post chapters of my WIP  (“Afterthoughts”, working title) here sometimes, if you are interested. I’d recommend starting at the beginning of the forum if you feel like reading. No pressure, just if you are interested! Critiques are…[Read more]

@arien

Arien@arien
Rank: Loyal Sidekick
Total Posts: 125

@mineralizedwritings

Previous to that, my sister and I would make up stories with out stuffies and toys.
Yes, us too! So much fun, right? I would make literally anything I was doing into a story when I was younger–mostly playing outside, but also cooking, cleaning my room, doing laundry, a…

[Read more]