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@spinner4him

It would probably be best if you started your own page. You can do that if you go to Forums: then look for Critiques, then Novel Critique requests, then you should be able to make one. I hope that helps!

@spinner4him

Here’s the apologetics page if your interested! It’s strayed from apologetics more and has entered general discussion on reality, so I thought you’d like to check it out.

@sarafini

Ok, have you given my questions much thought?

@hanako

Well…non-fiction in the sense that I like to write about my thoughts on American government and real world topics.

Interesting, so your getting into a lot of political history and theory?

I’m working on a essay called American Leader. It’s about the qualities a leader should have and how those qualities are developed. What do you think…

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@savannah_grace2009

Okay, I’m using mani/mahnith. Thanks!

Your welcome!

@freedomwriter76

It looks so good!!

The poor boiii!! 😭

@spinner4him

Oh my word, thank you so much!!! That means a lot!! 🥰 I actually emailed in the story to him, but I haven’t gotten any reply yet. (Which doesn’t surprise me. He’s probably busy. 😉 ) But I actually got to meet him at a conference I went to at the beginning of September. I was able to get a picture with him too! It was pretty aweso…[Read more]

@spinner4him

My favorite character to write… do you mean characters that I’ve created and am writing?

Yep! Any character of your own creation!

I love homeschooling because I have more time to invest my energy in doing things I like to do and learning about things I enjoy.

Yeah, awesome! I would agree. 😉

As for cake or ice cream, ice cream wou…

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@savannah_grace2009 @mineralizedwritings

Oh yeah, whoops. 😅

Ok, well, then I’ll reconsider adding her in. 😉

@sarafini

Alrighty! I’ll be sure to pop in!

@sarafini

If this is the whole first chapter (which I’m assuming it is) my first critique would be to hint in some way at the actual plot. I felt like it was missing something, and maybe that was it. I’m not entirely sure. Because to me, unless this whole story revolves around Ben and his forgiving his father, I see no indication of the plot dev…[Read more]

@rae

Actually, I don’t think those questions have been asked before. Congrats!

Sweet. 😎 *high-fives myself*

Who is your favorite character to write and why? Nahim Alfred Nayhelm, last of his family-clan. I know him as well as if he were my sibling (except whether he would like vanilla or chocolate ice cream, as far as I know, he’s never had it.…

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@mineralizedwritings

Thank you so much! I’m glad you like it!

I did a pencil sketch, went over it in pen, erased the pencil, and then colored it with prismacolor colored pencils.

Oh also I use a black fabercastel polychromos, it’s worth it for the money. My main brown is a caren d’ache, but the only reason I have a few of those it because I fou…

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@fernweh_grace

Cool! Can’t wait!

@calyhuge @loopylin @whalekeeper @freedomwriter76 – yes freedom, Erich and Riker need to bust in soon. XD

Oh geez, i just kinda went wild and added a lot of unneeded crap, but here you go!

Tirion

“How about you two?” Felicity asked, turning to Riya and Tirion.

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@smiley

ooooh, that would be cool!!!

@sarafini

So cool! I really like it!

@fernweh_grace

Oooh, that sounds really cool!!

For sharing, you can do that on here!! Or make a new forum. Whatever ya want!

@freedomwriter76

somehow i missed your reply. XD

Yessss, I know about Inktober!!!

Sadly, I don’t think I’ll be able to do every day…however, I will enthusiastically cheer everyone on and maybe do a drawing or two! 😀

Hey that’s okay! I’ll probably get really behind, so we’ll see. 😆

(speaking of which…I need to color the drawing of Riker’s…

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@sarafini

Cool! Sounds like a whimsical Brandon Sanderson novel like Fugal Wizard or Alcatraz, is that an image you want to go for in the world? (Though I don’t know if you’ve read any of his writing to have a frame of reference.)

So to start, what do you want out of the world? Do you want hard or soft worldbuilding? Setting that up now will…[Read more]