Lydia S.

@elishavet-pidyon

Go ahead!

@godlyfantasy12

I just had this scene pop into my head where Luna and Inglor meet!

“Well, hello, little sister.” Blinks at her purple hair and eyes with a slightly bewildered ‘where are you from?’ expression.

@godlyfantasy12

Ugh, November…*groan* no one better touch him again! I have an elf and a half-elf in my ranks.

(Yes Aramis, that was a threat)

@wilder-w @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @koshka @freedomwriter76 anyone wanna RP?

@koshka UUUGHHH I LOVE THEM!!! I am a SUCKER FOR ELVESSSS and u write them so beautifully…..

November

November shifted with his sling, frowning as he tried to maneuver the strap behind his neck with one hand.

Man, was this thing itchy….

And so was his arm…

Nope. Don’t think about it…otherwise it’s going to bother you all day!…[Read more]

@starofthenorth

So everyone else has said everything already lol!! Mainly about Christopher’s disrespect a bit, maybe show that he actually doesn’t see her that way, but her misbelief has everything she’s seeing skewed (because that’s usually how it goes)

In truth it could be he knows exactly how strong she is…but he’s not strong enough t…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon  @godlyfantasy12 @wilder-w

Y’all’s character is are so…so…AHH!! You have to save them, the poor, dear, charies!

Anyway…

Almarrin

Whispers all this morning were stirring the quiet anger inside him.

“From the second story…”

“…heard he just tripped…”

Almarrin slung his backpack over his shoulder,…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76 hey! Did u ever finish that scene with the Boys? 🥺😣 what happens to them?!

@freedomwriter76 awesome job! BUT UGH EZRAAAA 😭

@wilder-w

Arabella

“Oh! Hello, Hope…” Ara smiled, though she was sure it didn’t meet her eyes. She unclenched her fists. “Sorry…just…a bit tense. Everything’s a bit hectic right now.”

Hope nodded, “Yea…I-I’m sure…”

Ara folded her hands, “I suppose we never got formerly introduced, but…well, we already know each other’s names,” Ara laughed lig…[Read more]

@elishavet-pidyon AHHH ALWIN YOU ARE BREAKING MY HEART!!!

GASP!!

I just had a thought…

I want Alwin to meet Paxton….

@freedomwriter76 @koshka @elishavet-pidyon @keilah-h

Jocelyn

As soon as Cécile had spoken, Jocelyn knew the words rang true.

No wonder Dawson became so tense…

Jocelyn’s fists clenched. Hurting someone just because you could…just because they were under your command…

It was…just so wrong.

Like so many other things she’d seen…

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@starofthenorth

Everyone else basically said exactly what I was going to, so here’s a condensed form of my two cents:

I would make it about Briana, not girls. So say something like “Why am I not taking a watch?”, just to remove the focus at the beginning. I would also revise the part about being pretty. Maybe put inphasis on ‘I’m your king,’…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76 @godlyfantasy12

Cécile 

The moment these two had appeared the rest of the group went nearly rigid. As soon as the man had started speaking, she almost had to hold Annia back. The girl’s hands were held at her waist in tight fists, showing her calloused knuckles.

“Annia, no.” Cécile whispered in her ear. “Breaking his nose wo…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon @keilah-h @godlyfantasy12

So um…who’s turn is it?

@starofthenorth

Great topic!

I am thankful both for the opportunity to spend time with extended family, and for toothpaste. I mean, seriously, this world would be a much grosser place without it.

@wilder-w yea just got the holidays going on lol!

@arien

Well, I am currently working on a trilogy which I don’t have a title for. The first two books are set in an early medievalish time, and the last one is World War/modern. Oh, and all the characters are animals, a little like The Green Ember.

Hearts of Gold 1) [early medievalish] Divided in a kingdom of shattered truth, paths are twisting…

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@starofthenorth

Wow. I wish I did.

1. Ah yes, of course more questions. =)Good choice! I’m surprised by the number of those who pick the dragon ride. I’d like an Akhal-Teke, and I’d probably name it Sar.

3. Poor Christopher!

4. Oh ouch. I had braces a few years ago, and I missed gummies so much. =|