Rylie Goodwin

@awsumfaith

Yo, this looks really cool! I have much respect to writers who create maps for their worlds, as its something I still aspire to do, haha.

If I had any suggestions it would to maybe make the names of each of the places on the map unique to your own world, history, and cultures.

Names like “Greenwood” and “Snowy Mountains” could be…[Read more]

@kyronthearcanin

Cool! I’ve been thinking about writing some articles as well, as I’ve had a few epiphanies and pressing thoughts while writing recently…

Anyways, as for you question, honestly the best answer I can give you is to write about something you are most captivated by at the moment. Has there been anything related to writing pressing…[Read more]

I’m kinda wanting to join this, but I’m too busy for right now. I will be stalking it though… It’s hilarious.

@joy-calle

I HAVE BEEN CURIOUS ABOUT THAT GUY. I give my approval. (Twenty-eight years late, but still…) 😉

And Diane!!! XD XD

@queen_of_alvastia

Wow! Tala is gorgeous! I’m not particularly a dog person, but she’s beautiful…

Now…

Yosí will completely freak out due to some exposure to war dogs, but who knows, maybe he needs to meet a nice dog. Personally, I can’t wait to meet her!

This is awesome! I’ll have to think about to figure it out though…

@godlyfantasy12 @freedomwriter76

YES! The Heirs of Ashes Forever!!! Reúven was probably the first character of mine that really just stole my heart right off the bat. Now Yosí is starting to.. XD

@joy-calle

but I do want to shout out @elishavet-pidyon ‘s Alwin and Win…

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@freedomwriter76

That’s okay. 🙂 We’ll miss them, but we’ll survive. *Sniff*

Although, villains? O.O

@queen_of_alvastia

Hi! Welcome to the little passage of insanity! There’s nowhere else in the Castle quite as… Um… Something. I’m sure there’s some great filament of uniqueness here.

@godlyfantasy12 @freedomwriter76 I know I’ve said this before, but I love y’all ‘s charries. Grimm and Riker are both so sweet…

This side plot with Riker and his lost son makes me want to bring in Edria and Amicai, since they would sympathize soooo much (since they lost their first two kids). But they’ve been dead for nearing eleven years now,…[Read more]

@acancello

Huh, I guess it’s not 2022 anymore lol.

But yeah, the real date is March 30th 2023 not 2022. Thanks for the heads up! Will be sure to correct it in future newsletters. 🙂

(TW- fight scenes, un-aliving people)

Chapter 12

Roger

I got up out of my bed for the seventh time in the last hour. Sleep would not come. I paced back and forth across the room. The girl stayed in my mind. What was I supposed to do? Just keep her?

They had hurt her in so many ways. I couldn’t just let her go. I swallowed hard as my feet t…[Read more]

(TW- er, nagative self talk/depression?)

Chapter 11

X392

I kept my eyes closed, pretending I was asleep, until the door closed softly behind him. Opening my eyes, I saw on the chair next to me a steaming bowl of something. It smelled wonderful, nothing like the mush at the camp. Pulling the bowl down on my lap, I slowly stirred it up, trying to…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

lol, you’re good! And THANK YOU 😊

And yes, most of the time it is, but KP likes to un italic and it’s annoying. Only sometimes it isn’t and those instances might be to confuse you on purpose 👀

Thanks again!!

And yes, he’s supposed to and everyone hates his guts, as they should lol.

I’ll go ahead and add a couple more…[Read more]

@power sorry it took so long, and thank you! There is two new chapters and i’ll add more soon 👀

LOL yes, i’ll do that next time.

(TW- our villain, threats of violence, mention of injury)

Chapter 10

General Seznick

I tapped my pen against the wall, as I went over our plan for leaving.

“Why couldn’t those commanders write in proper English, or with a legible handwriting?” I growled under my breath, as I strained my eyes to read the smudged words before me.…[Read more]

(TW-  attacked/beat up)

 Chapter 9

Nathaniel

I watched in horror as the men kicked and punched her again and again. “Stop! Stop hurting her!” I cried, struggling to get away from the two men holding me to watch the horrible scene.

Again, the man’s fist slammed into her jaw, and another cry escaped her bleeding lips. She laid crumple…[Read more]

@light-warrior-pen I like novels, but short stories are quicker and easier to finish, lol.

@sarafini I’m studying computer science right now, haha. Very different from most things. Depends on which starving artist talk, lol. I’m literally in CS in order to make a living one day, so… To be honest, I don’t know if I’ve been more burned out from writing or from work, but I’m trying to find a balance…kind of hard. But in ten years I…[Read more]

@light-warrior-pen Nice to meet you! Not much to say about myself; I’m Lin, I’m a college kid, and my back hurts. Anyways.

I know others above me have already asked, but what are you currently working on? Do you prefer novels or short stories? Etc. Anyways. Welcome to the Kingdom!

@sarafini I’m in college right now studying something else so I don’t really have time to fully commit to something like that, lol. Plus I think they expect me to go right into the workforce afterwards so idk if there will ever be a chance for that, haha. Plus it seems expensive.

Aw, I’m glad you have time to write! I’m hoping things will get…[Read more]

@esther-c

The members who critique and the members who get their work critiqued are one and the same! When you are a part of the group, the only requirement is to edit one teammate’s work a month, but you can post as many or as few works of your own as you like to get critiqued.

So basically you and your teammates are critiquing each other’s…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76 Hehe but this math course is honestly more enjoyable than a lot of the other courses I’m in, haha.

And no, my life isn’t going well. I hope yours is though!