@lrose5
Active 1 year, 6 months ago- Rank: Wise Jester
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Koshka replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 day ago
Thank you so much for the update, the poor dears. They need some help. And maybe some tea and cookies.
So…I have some feedback for Riker’s scene. I am supposing this is nearing the crisis point of the second book, as Riker is getting a broken record sensation with his guilt. Otherwise…ooof. That was a hard scene.
Also, I…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 day, 2 hours ago
If someone ever makes their tag line something like @everyone-else or @anyone-who-reads-this I already pity them.
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Koshka replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 day, 2 hours ago
They got us alright.
(Also, @AllOtherKeepers Hi y’all! I’m haven’t croaked yet, praise the Lord.)
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Elishavet Pidyon replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 day, 2 hours ago
For those who have commented that the “older” keepers aren’t on much anymore….
Touche.
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Ava Blue and The Ducktator are now friends 1 week, 3 days ago
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Ava Blue's profile was updated 1 week, 3 days ago
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Ava Blue replied to the topic Does anyone here write poetry or haiku's ? in the forum Poetry 1 week, 3 days ago
@janellebelovedpig I LOVE your poetry. I have a hard time writing about my faith (or anything longer than 5-ish lines) so I am impressed hehe. I especially like the last one you sent (Eternl Wedding Feast). The ryhmes are very clever and pleasing and I adore the last line 💙
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Koshka replied to the topic Wingfeather Saga in the forum Book Discussions 3 weeks ago
What?! Oops…no Artham doesn’t die. (It did sound like that, now looking back at my wording XD)
No, I was referring to Pete’s anguish when he realizes his little brother is still alive (although fading fast and is not responding to the… telepathy thing).
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Kathleen replied to the topic KP Glitch Problems in the forum Questions and Support 3 weeks, 3 days ago
Thanks for letting me know! Looking into it now.
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Koshka replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 weeks, 5 days ago
Hmm, that is a bit of a pickle.
Perhaps he was originally just afraid of (and a little bit for) Adinah. He didn’t hate them at first (that’s not something that happens overnight). He kept the boyd because, at the root, he did at first still love Adinah (and them) and vaguely wanted to keep them safe.
Also, he doesn’t have to…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 weeks, 5 days ago
*Strangled noises*
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Please don’t kill Moishe. It may be a pretty amazing wrapup if Mathias is killed (not that you are planning to do that, I’m just a fellow writer{rather concerned btw over those choices[does he go to a camp?(If he does, is it the one Riker is stationed at?)]}), but please…that would just be…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Wingfeather Saga in the forum Book Discussions 4 weeks, 1 day ago
That death made me madder than possibly any other death/supposed death in the books. It was sweet though, that each of the kids got to feel their father’s love in their own special way.
Peet though. Peet hurt.
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 weeks, 1 day ago
I have no idea which group you are asking (if any. The general somebody is always an option), but you’re welcome to join in with anybody anytime. Technically an RP shouldn’t have to depend on groups.
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Koshka replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 weeks, 1 day ago
*GASPETH*
I like this new story. A lot. Matthias sounds amazing. Charna sounds amazing.
I know it’s not a main WIP or anything, but I would like to hear more of this book whenever you have any other randomness to share. =)
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Ava Blue replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 month ago
~pops head in after fourscore and twenty years of being M.I.A~
lovely art, all 😀
@grcr you have a REALLY cool art style, I love lineless art and the way you draw faces (particularly eyes+jawlines+hair) is fantastic!
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Kathleen replied to the topic KP Glitch Problems in the forum Questions and Support 1 month ago
Yay!!! You are alive! ngl was getting a little worried there lol.
Exactly… It definitely takes a few magical capabilities to be a forum moderator. 😅 Especially when the evil spam bots are constantly trying to take down precious Whaley. 😤 Not on my watch!
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Kathleen replied to the topic KP Glitch Problems in the forum Questions and Support 1 month ago
Okay okay. I think I might have fixed the problem?
For some reason, the WordPress system was flagging everyone’s posts as spam. Especially dear Whaley. 😭😭😭
If you are still having trouble posting let me know. Also, I’m going to be on here a lot more frequently so I’ll be able to nip the problem in the bud before it ever gets too out of hand like…[Read more]
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Kathleen replied to the topic KP Glitch Problems in the forum Questions and Support 1 month, 1 week ago
@whalekeeper @theducktator @grcr @loopylin @keilah-h @everyoneexperiencingissueswiththesite
Hi guys! So sorry for being mia recently and missing your posts and struggles with all these glitches!!
Imma try to get to the bottom of all these issues and get back to you once I make some progress. Continue to let me know of any other issues that arise…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 1 week ago
I’m going to pop in and give my tidbit (because that’s so much more fun than homework).
1. Some scenes need to be short, some long, depending on what’s being delt with. This one may be short, but it’s a good length for the subject.
2. No? It just felt like a wrap up description of Mandin/a scene conclusion/transition to whatever was coming…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 1 week ago
My advice as a middle-grade writer and a YA reader:
1. Stick as much as possible to inner turmoil. Instead of focusing on how much the outward character is being damaged, focus on how the inner character is coping/struggling/whatever.
2. Instead of portraying each individual blow/whatever, gloss it all together into a simple…[Read more]
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