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Esther replied to the topic My first short story contest entree! Critiques appreciated in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 months ago
Alrighty, let’s do this.
I’m not in any way the most amazing writer or editor ever, so I recommend to take my advice with a grain of salt. 😉
Brightening the somewhat pale sky, the golden sun streamed beams of light all about
Ok, the first thing I noticed was the word ‘somewhat.’ In most cases, you can always cut this from narrati…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic My first short story contest entree! Critiques appreciated in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 months ago
ooh, that’s so exciting!! I’ve been wanting to try my hand at some contests this year as well.
So I read it through once, but I don’t have the time rn to give you some feedback. I’ll be sure to get to it later today though!
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Esther replied to the topic Holis! in the forum Start HERE 9 months, 1 week ago
Taggin’ some other peeps to say hi…
@freed_and_redeemed @liberty @whalekeeper @hybridlore @thearcaneaxiom @guys,literallywhyismymindblankingoutonallofy’all’stags?? @savannah_grace2009 @smiley @everyoneee
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Esther replied to the topic My Introduction in the forum Start HERE 9 months, 1 week ago
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Esther replied to the topic My Introduction in the forum Start HERE 9 months, 1 week ago
Yes, I have a dog. His name is Buddy. He’s five, and I’m loving training him! I don’t play volleyball on a team, but I do like playing it with friends/siblings.
Aww, I love it!! What breed is he? I have a Siberian Husky named Bandit (well, he’s our family’s dog, not just mine 😉 ). He’s three and the quietest husky I’ve ever met. XD He’ll…[Read more]
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Trailblazer replied to the topic My Introduction in the forum Start HERE 9 months, 1 week ago
What curriculums have you used for your other subjects?
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Trailblazer replied to the topic My Introduction in the forum Start HERE 9 months, 1 week ago
I did IEW for two of my years in high school! I loved it! It really helped me hone my writing skills, and I did the advanced us history writing course with the CHEX homeschool group. Combining history and writing was so much fun!
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Trailblazer replied to the topic My Introduction in the forum Start HERE 9 months, 1 week ago
That’s so cool!
I’ve been to a couple of the Sight and Sound shows, but I think my favorite was the movie they made last year for Christmas- I Heard the Bells.
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Esther replied to the topic My Introduction in the forum Start HERE 9 months, 1 week ago
Wow! We have a lot in common! Jesus, volleyball, dogs, homeschooling, writing…
Oh that’s so awesome! Do you have a dog? And do you play volleyball on a team?
1. That’s a super hard question. I don’t even know if I have an answer. However, I really like writing my characters who have big struggles. They are usually internal struggl…
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Trailblazer replied to the topic My Introduction in the forum Start HERE 9 months, 1 week ago
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TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic My Introduction in the forum Start HERE 9 months, 1 week ago
Oh, there is a little quotation mark above, so you just click on that while the paragraph you want is highlighted. In the formatting, it should look like a basic indent, but it will show the green line once posted.
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RAE replied to the topic My Introduction in the forum Start HERE 9 months, 2 weeks ago
My older brother saw Beyond the Mask in theaters when it came out! It’s such a great movie!
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freedom replied to the topic My Introduction in the forum Start HERE 9 months, 2 weeks ago
@liberty HOLD UP! HOLD UP!
You like Beyond the Mask too??
I still love that movie, and I used to be OBSESSED with it, LOL
William Reynolds was one of the inspirations for one of the MCs of the novel I’m in the process of publishing, hehe XD
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freedom replied to the topic My Introduction in the forum Start HERE 9 months, 2 weeks ago
@liberty TY!!! 💖💖
my tag also used to be FreedomWriter76, but I left for almost 2 weeks and then came back with a new tag, LOL
sweet!!! I haven’t written too much from those periods, but I do have a couple American Revolution ideas!
My fav time period to read/write is WW2 tho 😉
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TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic My Introduction in the forum Start HERE 9 months, 2 weeks ago
I love the quote/verse you have at the bottom of your post! He IS always good.
Thanks! That’s an ArcaneAxiom original actually.
Hard building. I actually don’t really like writing about magic. I mean I sometimes have what you would call magic in my stories, but it is usually viewed as bad. That’s just for me. However, that’s not to say t…
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Artistodysseyfan replied to the topic Hi! From Eilish! in the forum Start HERE 9 months, 2 weeks ago
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hybridlore replied to the topic My Introduction in the forum Start HERE 9 months, 2 weeks ago
@liberty That sounds really cool! If you end up wanting to post it on here, I’d love to read it!
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Esther replied to the topic My Introduction in the forum Start HERE 9 months, 2 weeks ago
Welcome to Kingdom Pen!! I’m Esther: a volleyball-playing, violin-squeaking, dog-obsessed, homeschooled, fiction-writing, God-loving, teen girl!
Time for some questionssss
1. Who’s your favorite character you’ve ever written? Why? What are they like?
2. If you could visit any place in the world, where would it be and why?
3. Who i…[Read more]
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Artistodysseyfan replied to the topic Hi! From Eilish! in the forum Start HERE 9 months, 2 weeks ago
Cool! I love drawing! What kind do you do? This is one I’ve done.
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hybridlore replied to the topic My Introduction in the forum Start HERE 9 months, 2 weeks ago
Character conflicts are fun! Honestly, I like reading those kinds of scenes too, mostly just for all the emotions between characters. It does sound weird, but I get what you mean.
Sounds cool! I would love to hear more! - Load More