Liberty

@canadalily

Welcome to KP! I’m Janessa, aka Trailblazer, and I write primarily historical or contemporary fiction, but I’ve also done some mystery and a bit of journalism as well. I enjoy reading (that goes without saying), photography, and hiking, as well.

You live in Canada… have you been to the Canadian Rockies? (Maybe you live close) My…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

(and I may or may not have almost made Janessa cry…heh…heh..)

Lol is that gonna become one of your writing goals now?

Anyway I don’t fully remember the first chapter you posted… do you know which page that’s posted on so I can go re-read it?

@savannah_grace2009

Yes!! XD He’s an awesome teacher. He’s totally a science nerd, but he’s like super smart. He’s said some things during class that have temporarily broken my brain. And then my brother just laughs at me when I tell him about it. 😂

@thearcaneaxiom

Thank you so much for all this advice!! I’ll definitely be applying it.

Which story is this by the way? Is this a new one?

Not a new one. It’s actually my dystopian trilogy that I’ve been working on for over a year now. It keeps changing as I mature as a writer and lately I’ve been really focusing on revamping the first book be…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

*everyone ignore that i just referred to my espresso as a “he”…XD”

It’s okay, my science teacher refers to atoms as “he”s. 😂

Oh, shyiads have two types of venom, and one type of poison. The first venom temporarily paralyzes, the second kills almost instantly. The poison can be coated on his scales, and absorbed into the skin. It makes it’s victim sick, and eventually will cause death if not treated. Chase is not using his poison or spines (nor his third fang) rn, only…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

Ooh, does Chase always have black scales/fur/whatever when he transforms? Or is it more of a whim?

He can change colors, but black or grey, with sometimes a sheen of green are like his default colors. He does master color changes and shifting later I his life, but rn it takes a lot out of him.

@whaley @loopylin @savannah_grace2008 @jo…[Read more]

@whalekeeper @loopylin @jonas @savannah_grace2009

Behold the shyiad!

Chase Duke

“No,” Chase whispered. He knew what it was like on his own world to be deceived with Black Sorcery, but that was weak Chase, not godling Marcel. “Marcel, no! Resist!” Frantic, with eyes yellow, Chase stepped forward, taking off his hoodie and whispering for Sef to…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

Lukas 

“Man… th-that must be, be tough. B-but I’m glad we’re able to be here for you.” He offered a smile. “Because if it was just you and Xandro, then Xandro might get you in trouble. You saw what he did to me.”

@thelittlejupitertion

Cool!! I’ll have to check it out!

@jonas

It’s just a short story, and it is meant to be simple. Often the simplistic things are the hardest. What I love to write are the things that draw out a certain trait, make the reader to stop and think, or are often not done.

Even though Blake is only planned to be for this story, the struggle of “am I a hero or a villain” is Alpha’s.

@thelittlejupitertion

My dream vacation would probably be to visit Africa, it’s just so beautiful!

That would be so cool!!

Of course, the first character to pop into my mind is Jack. He’s a man made out of yarn (long story lol), and he’s super clumsy and hilarious, but it’s partly a ruse to hide his guilt and loneliness. He also knows a lot mor…

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@rae

Ooh, that sounds really neat, I’d definitely read something like this! I can’t think of any feedback to give rn. But yeah, I love the idea! Tag me if you end up posting it!

@savannah_grace2009

Honestly…I’m not exactly sure why that’s a problem XD I mean…technically…any story can be taken out of it’s original setting and put somewhere else, with only a few little tweaks. I could easily move my story to Earth, get rid of Andromeda, and just change the races to different groups of people.

And since technically…

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@savannah_grace2009

Lukas 

“Oh… Oh, I-I’m so sorry.” His eyes clouded with sympathy. He wasn’t the one who needed someone’s pity; at least Asher was still alive. He couldn’t imagine actually losing a sibling. He was still holding onto a hope that Asher would change his mind someday and come back. But Liv’s sister… she would never come back. I…[Read more]

I haven’t edited it at all.

@esther-c @freedomwriter76 @smiley @highscribeofaetherium @jonas @whoever

I just typed this out to get the jist of a short story idea. I’d like any thoughts or feedback, whether negative or positive. it’s called One Bullet

One Bullet
Once there was a great and mighty city, with people who believed in heroes, in the ones who made it their duty,…

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@loopylin @keilah-h

Oh wow, Chase’s powers are cool :0

Thank you *bows* one of the many things that drove me crazy trying to figure out XD

@loopy

Usually my problems become my charries’ problems, not the other way around lol

Yeah, that happens too. Idk, I cry with Alpha when he looses Emmie, reject Gloria with Glace when he was banished, I’m sho…[Read more]